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Posted October 27, 2012
British usage aside, really could have used stronger beta readers. Typos in a finished product? Shame. Grammar usage and punctuation kept pulling me out, had to go back a few times to grok the intent of the author too many times. I can clearly smell the retooled Final Fantasy 7 fanfiction that this was constructed from. Decent for a personal work, not even close to what could be considered a finished piece. Definitely not worth 99¿ at this stage. Kudos for trying though.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.