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Posted September 15, 2012
It could be a great story but she jumps all over the place, so your thinking you missed something. The story doesnt flow and the characters end up in situations where you ask yourself when the heck did they get there and why? Not to mention did anyone even edit this book? I found some of the same things in A "Dom For His Alpha"
I dont think I'll be purchasing anymore of her books. I recomend she reads some Joyee Flyyn, Stormy Glenn ,Lynn Hagen ,Mia Banks and Amber Kell. Anything they write will give her an idea on how to make a story come together
Posted January 20, 2014
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