A waste of money and time
The synopsis caught my eye when I first came across this book. I was genuinely interested. Sadly, this interest only lasted about fifty pages from which on it was a journey filled with eye rolling, sighs and moments when I thought I couldn't read one more page of this. Still, I continued on reading, in hopes that things would catch up later on. They didn't. Cliché after cliché, this story went out and gathered everything a book written in this genre should be wary of. The plot is predictable, with elements taken out of different D class movies, such as the obligatory "heart break" scene, where the male protagonist is believed to have been cheating on his girlfriend. However, unlike in the movies, this drama only lasts a couple of hours and then everything goes back it its sappy normality. One could put up with the corniness of the story if the characters were half well written, but sadly, it fails to deliver on that front, as well. The attempt to make them lovable was there, however, instead of that, the protagonists turned out to be irritating. Bridget Monahan, who is supposed to give off the vibe of a woman jaded by love appears as an unstable teenager and Tristan Hathaway is the proof that the author has absolutely no idea of what British people are like. Most of the erotic scenes give the impression of badly written smut fanfictions you can find online and instead of setting the mood, it makes the reader scoff. All in all, this book is a prime example of why self publishing is not a good idea, because chances are, it'll just give the impression of fanficiton which should stay where it belongs: on different forums on the Internet.
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