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If only Carly were here, he thought, and then realized how wrong headed his ...
If only Carly were here, he thought, and then realized how wrong headed his thinking was. He looked down the path as far as he could into the darkness, hoping he would see her, or possibly one of his other friends. It had only been minutes since they'd left. Was she safe? Was she in trouble like him? He squinted harder hoping to see better.... Nothing....
Jacob was beginning to really hate Carthage Falls. There was something wrong with the place...seriously wrong. From the moment he and his mother had arrived to live with his grandfather, things had been weird. It started with strange dreams--nightmares--that he couldn't explain, and now this--shadows oozing out from under the trees, calling his name. As he turned to run, he realized it was too late....
Posted November 11, 2012
This book was in need of a couple more rewrites and an editor to help get it into shape. Basic idea is somewhat intriguing but it is bogged down by overexplained emotions and excessive exposition.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.