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Posted September 4, 2013
The ideas in the story had potential but it seemed more like a bunch of different half done stories thrown together with no real plot or conclusion. The writing itself wasn't bad, but pick a plot and run with it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted May 21, 2013
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