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The Fates can be fickle - even moreso when they fate a vampire girl with a slayer for a mate...but differences only make the passion burn hotter.
Erotic... But Not Much of A Story
What I Loved:
There wasn't anything I particularly loved about this book. It wasn't bad, just nothing really stands out.
What I Didn't Like:
I didn't feel connected to the characters at all. It was erotic, yes, but it would have been more so if we'd been given more time to get to know the characters.
My Overall Review:
This book is about 11 pages long, 20 pageturns if you are reading a Kindle at a small-sized font. That being said, I have read other short stories within erotica and they all had some decent plotset–ups, so I don't hold this lack-of-plot or character connection as understandable. Is it difficult to make readers connect to characters in so little time? Yes- but it can be done. Besides, while the words themselves evoke sexual connotations, true eroticism happens when a reader is intimately connected to the characters engaging in the sexual acts.
That being said, if you are looking for an erotic paranormal story just to get turned on, this might be your book. If you like substance and character development- skip it.
Disclaimer:
This book was provided for me at no charge, nor was I given compensation
of any kind for this review. This review only reflects my personal opinion.
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Posted May 16, 2012
Great plot and even execution, but seems unfinished
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Short and not all that good
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Posted December 9, 2012
A vampire-slayer story
Lady Kora can calm the beast inside of him, but who is really the beast? And what is Damien lookin for?
You will have to read it for yourself it was not my cup of coffee.
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Posted November 7, 2012
Too short 30+ pages. Did not read.jas
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Posted April 13, 2012
It was a good story but i expected more details in the plot. I got the basics but the ending confused me a bit because there was no real explanation of what the relationship would turn out to be.
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Posted March 18, 2012
Good story but it just end without knowing what is going to happen. Very disapointing
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Overview
The Fates can be fickle - even moreso when they fate a vampire girl with a slayer for a mate...but differences only make the passion burn hotter.