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Posted August 22, 2012
There are two short stories crammed into twenty pages. The last one may have been an excerpt. Neither story made a lot of sense. I hate to say bad things about someones attempts to write, but quite frankly, this was so horrible, I am having trouble finding something nice to say. I think twenty blank pages might have been better reading. I am sorry, but it is the truth. The first one is random memories about a car trip and then it just stops without a proper ending. The second, may have been about a dying vampire, but I am not even sure about that as there was so little to it, including plot or ending.
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