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Posted June 22, 2012
Again great story, great writing craft. Kris tells Smoky's story as if she's got a tape recorder in his head. The context and atmosphere invoked are richly detailed, believable. I hate wordy description that is about the writers love of words instead of serving the story. With Kris, description never ever bogs the story, nor fails to deliver what is needed to create not just the picture but the emotion she wants you to feel. I come away caring about all those who people her story, not just the main characters. There are no "redshirts' here. (Look up John Scalzi if you miss the reference.)Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.