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CGLoves2read
Posted October 5, 2011
This book provides the classic example for the need for a proof reader and an editor. A good dictionary to look up the meanings of words, and a crash course in english grammer would not have hurt. Though the story held some allure, it was difficult to wade through the fog of mis-used words, poorly written sentences, changing perspective, and ignored tense. Ms Fuentes? I sense talent in your writing - get a proof reader, at least. Preferably someone who knows grammer and vocabulary.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 8, 2012
Very poorly written. Worst story line I have read so far from free ebooks. Would not recommend this book to anyone.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 5, 2012
But interesting ending
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 15, 2012
Inexperienced writer. Decent story line but poorly developed.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 7, 2012
True to life story, if only it could be true more often than not! Quick read and flows quite well
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 29, 2011
I have no words for this besides awesome beutiful lovely wonderful and incredible one of the best books ive read in a long time im glad i found it.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 7, 2011
Not cool
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Posted July 26, 2011
This story was written by someone who can't concentrate on a plot. It has very poorly defined lines between present & past. The characters are not well defined & ambiguous. It wasn't a good book, but had an excellent point.
It made one realize what you could lose by being stupid & selfish. I never was a stay at home mom, but worked. The temptation to cheat does happen, especially when the hubby is being a selfish dolt & you are shouldering all the responsibility & don't get to be the fun one.
If you can stumble through the amateur plot & writing style, it's a good story.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 20, 2011
Was I the only one distracted by the writing style? The story kept jumping between past and present tense. I appreciated the plot idea but was disappointed that the writing style felt amateurish.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 17, 2011
kept my interest read the book in 1 day
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Posted June 16, 2011
Really makes you think about what you have to lose. Being a stay at home mom, like the character in this book, there is a lot. Very good!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 25, 2012
Good read
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Posted April 17, 2012
Very good read, not the ending I was expecting!
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Posted April 14, 2012
Im 11 and i read this book ,not knowing it had such words , but from what i read it was poorly written. Some of it i was reading didnt make sence, i had to read it over 3 times and it still didnt make scence..
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Posted April 12, 2012
This book was very hard to read, it was like it wasn't edited at all. VERY poor grammar!
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Posted April 4, 2012
THIS WAS A GREAT BOOK, KEEPS YOU SPELL BOUND. THIS BOOK WAS WELL WRITTEN. I WOULD READ MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR. KEEP THE GREAT WORK UP.
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Posted October 17, 2010
If I had known this story was only 62 pages long, I probably would have passed it over, however, I am glad that I read it. Having been a stay-at-home mom, I found this story to be an entertaining fantasy. Plenty of lust, friendship, and unconditional love for those of us who love a happy ending.
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Posted May 18, 2011
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Posted October 13, 2010
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Posted February 17, 2011
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Overview
At age 29, Tarin Howard-Picardo was already married to the man of her dreams, gave birth to a daughter and owned a luxurious home -- but was it enough? Deciding to go back to college, she meets good friends Rae and Ceeci and the three girls sign up for Foreign Culture on an adventure to the islands of Hawaii; Tarin discovers not only Waikiki but finds trouble in Michael Capelli, age 19.