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Posted September 29, 2014
Sorry, this book is lacking in so many ways it's hard to know where to start. The editing is non existant and the plot weak. I love dystopian books, just not this one. Note to the author...I commend your effort to write, but spend more time on developing the finer points needed for a well written book. Take classes and get critiques by non-family members or friends. I promise the results will be worth the effort. JpWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted June 9, 2014
Not that it was bad but there's a lot of misused words. Example, were when it should have been we're, there instead of they're and well instead of we'll. Some missing words. Sometimes extra words that aren't needed. Still, not hard to follow in spite of this.
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Posted July 26, 2014
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