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Posted May 5, 2013
The concept is interesting, first love and first kiss, and not in the cheesy way. And typical pol, revenge to love, but it still makes a deep impression. The only thing I dont like is the lack of development of the uke's love for the seme. He forgot everything about their past. Their present, well, is not even close to romance. The closest emotion he should have with the seme is guilt so the love at the end is rather abrupt and forced. It would be a lot better if it has another chapter or something.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.