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Posted June 2, 2011
At 185pgs, this wasn't as good as I was expecting it to be. I thought it'd be more seduction instead of, okay, you're both hot, let's bone. Also wasn't thst big a fan of the sex scenes. Never cared for anal and all the sex scenes were DP's. Not a bad thing, but I would have liked it if they each would've had their turn alone with her. It was kind of unfulfilling, definitely could've had more, and was not worth the $4. Its a $.99 story being offered for $4.
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Posted September 2, 2011
I agreed with the reveiwer who called this story boring. It was. And i also hated the herione. She was indecisive and annoying..and she kept repeating herself. The typo errors were bad two especially since names were misused kind of often..this book was annoying and poorly written.
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Posted April 26, 2013
I found this book on a Listopia on Goodreads called 'I'll Be Goldilocks! Were Bears and Bear Shifters in Romance'. Since bears are my all time favorite shifter, I had oodles of fun on this list! This is one of two books that I found on the list, that I hadn't read, that sounded interesting. I particularly prefer bear shifter books that aren't tied to the the trite Goldilocks story.
The story opens with Ayana, having moved away from her family in New York, to Charlotte, North Carolina and purchasing her own home. She is an assistant to a web designer and does all her work from home via telecommuting, so she can live anywhere. Ayana is ready for a new start in a new location, away from the family that can't seem to realize she is no longer the baby of the family. Ayana is looking forward to her new house in a friendly neighborhood.
She soon meets one of her neighbors, Reece at the grocery store. While he is flirting with her it comes out that they are neighbors. Reece basically invites himself to a cookout the next day. Once she gets home from the store, she meets her other neighbor, Blaine. Since she is attracted to him as well, she decides to invite him to her BBQ as well. During the BBQ, the men show no jealousy of each other and basically announce to Ayana that they both want to have a relationship with her and are happy to share her.
I wanted to enjoy this book. I liked the premise and hello, bears! But I just had a hard time with it. Things moved very quickly, almost unnaturally so. There were times when it seemed there were contradictions in events. Explanations are given for time passing, but the next scene takes place almost immediately following the previous one. Then there was some confusion with the guys. It just felt like it could have used a good editor and/or careful reviewer to make sure that these inconsistencies were caught before publishing. There is some real potential here, but fighting with time line issues and the like just throw you out of a story. I am giving this 2 stars on Goodreads. It makes me sad when a book just doesn't live up to your expectations.
Posted April 11, 2013
I never read a shifter so i didnt know what to expect this was a surprisingly good read ............ wanted more back story for reese and blain but still good...............i would take my time on deciding if i wanted to mate with 2 men/bears also will try a another by thus authorWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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Posted May 15, 2012
I loved it. Can i find a couple of men like them... Love that the character seems more believable and questions her choice and doesnt become a simpering ninny and do what the guys want. She is head strong and knows what she wants.
Posted February 1, 2012
The summary sounded promising but 30 pages in and I'm ready to cry over my wasted money. Why? Terrible editing, severely lacking descriptions, poor word choice, even worse characterization, and a ridiculous plot. Never buying this author again. Don't waste the time or money.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted January 28, 2012
The only thing that was worth reading in this story was the character descriptions. The plot was way lacking and the story ending was not a very good one. It's almost as if the author had writers block then just threw something together to finish the story. If a woman has such strong decisive feelings for a man or in this case men then there could be only one choice. I think the author had a really good idea but did not know how to develop it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted November 3, 2011
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Posted October 2, 2011
I liked the male characters, but the female got on my nerves throughout the book. Towards the end, it's like she had sex with them in the woods and enjoyed it and all (after knowing what they were), yet afterwards she felt all doubtful about their relationship (or rather what they wanted from her).Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted July 23, 2011
This author could have used a spell check and thesaurus. Some of the story did not make sense when I read it, maybe it was just me. The book titilated as far as wanting a three-some with two hot guys go, but little else stired the senses.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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