Submission [Beautiful Liars 1] (Siren Publishing Allure)

Highly Recommended

Mind Games, Sexual Tension, Revenge.

There was only on thing in the mind of Carrington and that was to find the person that killed his father. He was just waiting to finish college and there was a job that he needed to do and find justice. There was only one problem a young woman named Alicia.

Alicia was a sweet young woman that had fallen in love with a young man that made her stomach quiver but no matter how he treated her she loved him. She went through some emotional situations with Carrington but no matter how deeming he made her feel she still could not turn him away.

There was one character that seemed out there and I did not understand how he fit into this story but after reading further into the story I realized that she was a beautiful little liar. Jordan had his own agenda for Alicia and I never saw it coming. It seemed weird that she did not brush him off when he came close to her or touched her.

Carrington and Alicia were very emotional towards each other after they finally gave into their emotions. They both declared to each other that they loved each other but no matter what there was still something about their relationship that was unnerving. Maybe because Carrington still had his vengeance against his father's killer. The only thing that I never saw coming was that Alicia was the one that ended their some what relationship. It was a total shocker and Carrington is the one that stayed with his heart broken.

I enjoyed reading this story it is full of mind blowing games that they leave you breathless. You will be totally surprised with how the story ends. I never lost interest in this story and I recommend you to read this story and see who in reality killed Carrington's father and see if that person is exposed.

Highly Recommended

I loved this book and will definitely be buying part 2. The story contains lots of mind games, sexual tension, and schemes. The ending completely blew me away. Wait until you find out who really murdered Carrington's father. This series has been added to my list of favorites. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys drama, romance, and hot steamy sex scenes.

Worst Unresolved Confusing Plot Ever!

OMG! This was the worst book I have ever read in my entire life and I have read some stinkers before. Author (if you can call her that)needs to take some writing classes about plot development and plot resolution. I did not know what the plot was the entire book and still do not know. The players were not defined and the crises between them was very loosely defined and not really resolved (although if not defined, how can it be resolved?) I have never seen a more convoluted plot that was never explained to the reader. I won't even mention the lack of character development which was nonexistent. Go back to school Ms. Brooke - if that is your real name! I can see if this is a pen name because I would never want this work associated with my name if I were the author. Buy something else.

I wish I could rate lower than one star.

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