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Posted November 14, 2013
Posted November 11, 2013
No write on you are awesome i love your sories ive read the rose and the element and now this you should grow up and be a writer beacause i love your work and if i had to write something like this mine probably wouldnt be able to come up with such creative ideas like yours id love you stories at sonic all results and your stories are like on the edge of your seat reads and leaves me wondering what will happen next. So im just trying to show some support signed starfoxWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted November 15, 2013
*Tikal raced out the door happly, her mother smiling from the doorway. Tikal ran as fast as she could to Knuckles's house. When she got there she was out of breath. She knocked on the door anyway*
Knuckles- Hello? Tikal!? What are you doing here?!...I...I thought you were leaving.*He added in a more softer voice*
Tikal- Your wrong!*hugges Knuckles*
???- Knuckles! Who's at the door?!*someone shouted from inside*
Knuckles- Nothing Mom! I'm going out!
???- Fine. Be back at 11.
Knuckles- Okay! Come on.*graps Tikal hands and walks beside her*What do you mean?
Tikal- I'm not moving. I...I told my mom about you and me. So she told me...if I really do...love you we can stay.
Knuckles- So. Are you staying?
Tikal- What do you think.*smiles*
Knuckles- Thank God. I didn't want to finish the school year without you.
Tikal- I know.*presses closer against Knuckles*I wish I found this out before.
Knuckles- About what?
Tikal- About you liking me!
Knuckles- Oh. That.*blushes slightly*
Tikal- How long did you have a crush on me?
Knuckles- Since we met.
Tikal- Why didn't tell me before?
Knuckles- I don't know. I guess I couldn't find the right words to tell you. I'm sorry.
Tikal- Don't be.*kisses him on lips. When she pulled away they stared at the sunset. Then a blue blur flew past followed by Tails, Silver, Shadow, Rouge and Cream*
Silver- Hey guys! Glad we founded you Knuckles. We were going to practices for our next game.*Shadow blanced a basketball on his finger*
Shadow- You coming Knucklehead?
Knuckles- Sure! I could used the work out. What are Cream and Rouge doing here?
Cream- I came to watched Tail...I mean the rest of you guys practice.*bluses a bit. Tikal giggled*
Knuckles- Okay but what about Batgirl over there?
Rouge- I came to work on our cheerleader cheer. It's hard work you know. I wish there was more of us. Sally runs us ragged.
Sonic-* comes racing back*Yea. I hear there is a new girl coming to school next week.
Sonic- Yea. Says she's was part of her cheerleader team a few years back.
Knuckles- And you know this?
Sonic- I have my ways.*smiles and races off. Everyone else follows*•••
Tikal- Huh?*realizes that she was still on the beach*
Knuckles- Tikal! Are you coming or are you going to freeze to death out here.
Tikal- Coming!*races to Knuckles and hugges him. Someone must of broke up the fight with Knuckles and Scourge while she was still remembering her past*
Knuckles- Whoa! What's up with the hugs Tikal?
Tikal- Just seeing Tails and Cream together...it reminded me how much I love you.
Knuckles-*smiles*I love you too Tikal. Come on. Let's catch up with the others.*She and Knuckles raced off yelling at their friends to wait for them*
Sonic-*yawns*Well bye guys my mom will be worry. Come on Amy.*picks up Amy and runs off*
Silver- Something is up with those two. I just know it.
Shadow- You noticed too.
Tails- So have I. Sonic keeps on getting more tired everyday. Like he stays up half the night.
Knuckles- Who knows. He wouldn't tell you. Stubborn hedgehog.
Tikal- And your not?*smiles. Everyone laughs.*
Silver- So ture Tikal!
Knuckles- You want to go Silverboy! Come on basketball game you and me. Let's go.*walks off with Silver, Shadow, and Tails*
Tikal- Wht happened to sleeping?!
Knuckles- More important things have came up. Sleep can wait.*leaves. Tikal rolled her eyes*
Cream- Honesty Tikal. What do you see in Knuckles?
Tikal- Well you see...it all started a year ago.....
Posted April 16, 2013
Posted April 17, 2012
This book by devils color commentator tells you incredible stories from the players point if view. Unlike fact books this tells you tje facts and the teams reactions.
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