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Posted August 13, 2012
This is a great story. Although you can tell the writer has not done a lot of writing. It is still a very good and somewhat original story.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted September 14, 2011
The writing is simplistic, the title is placed over and over in the middle of the page, and then you have sentences that cut off in the middle. A good idea for a story but poorly executed. The writer really needs to get out and talk to some actual people. It feels as if it was written by a first grade english teacher or a 4th grade honor roll student. Both trying way too hard for grammatical correctness and failing badly.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted November 4, 2010
Posted October 21, 2011
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