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Posted July 12, 2013
I agree with the other reviews, it needs editing... Badly! It had the makings of a good story BUT it jumped around too much. It'd say something about a character then move on to another and then go back to the other character with no explanations. At one point something insane happens which results in one character briefly going insane then waking up and he says nothing about it. I thought it was a dream until towards the end when the character goes to get revenge.
It was so "all over the place" that I felt like the author didn't know what kind of story it should be. Romance? General fiction? Mystery? I don't know!
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