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The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man

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by W. Bruce Cameron
 

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From W. Bruce Cameron, the author of the New York Times and USA Today bestselling novel A Dog's Purpose, which is now a major motion picture!

"The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man introduces my favorite kind of flawed cynical protagonist in Ruddy McCann, former football star, now Repo Man in a small town full of memorable weirdos. It's

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From W. Bruce Cameron, the author of the New York Times and USA Today bestselling novel A Dog's Purpose, which is now a major motion picture!

"The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man introduces my favorite kind of flawed cynical protagonist in Ruddy McCann, former football star, now Repo Man in a small town full of memorable weirdos. It's suspenseful, action-packed, romantic, and above all, truly funny. I loved it."—Nelson DeMille, New York Times bestselling author

Ruddy McCann, former college football star, has experienced a seismic drop in popularity; he is now Kalkaska, Michigan's full-time repo man and part-time bar bouncer. His best friend is his low-energy Basset hound Jake, with whom he shares a simple life of stealing cars.

Simple, that is, until Ruddy starts hearing a voice in his head.

The voice introduces himself as Alan Lottner, a dead realtor. Ruddy isn't sure if Alan is real, or if he's losing his mind. To complicate matters, it turns out Katie, the girl he's fallen for, is Alan's daughter.

When Alan demands Ruddy find his murderers, Ruddy decides a voice in your head seeking vengeance is best ignored. When Alan also demands he clean up his act, and apartment, Ruddy tells him to back off, but where can a voice in your head go?

With a sweet romance, a murder mystery, a lazy but loyal dog and a town full of cabin-fevered characters you can't help but love, New York Times bestselling novelist W. Bruce Cameron's The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man is yet another laugh-out-loud, keep-you-up-late, irresistible read.

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Editorial Reviews

Publishers Weekly
10/06/2014
This offbeat and engaging mystery from humor writer Cameron (8 Simple Rules for Dating My Teenage Daughter) introduces Ruddy McCann, a repo man in Kalkaska, Mich., who's also a bouncer and bartender at the Black Bear Bar, the family business run by his sister Becky. Repossessing autos is often difficult and dangerous (and sometimes very funny) and can cause what is called "Repo Madness." Ruddy thinks that may be happening to him when Alan Lottner, a former real estate agent, takes up residence in his body. Alan finds his new place of residence as confusing to him as it is to Ruddy. Kalkaska is full of odd characters, including Claude and Wilma Wolfinger, a battling couple with unlikely get-rich schemes; handsome, gullible Jimmy Growe; and Kermit Kramer, Becky's improbable suitor who spouts malapropisms. In his attempts to help Alan, Ruddy gets involved in an awkward romance, crosses paths with some greedy bad guys, and puts his life at risk. Readers will look forward to more of Ruddy's good-hearted efforts to protect those he loves in the promised sequel. Agent: Scott Miller, Trident Media. (Oct.)
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The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man introduces my favorite kind of flawed cynical protagonist in Ruddy McCann, former football star, now Repo Man in a small town full of memorable weirdos. It's suspenseful, action-packed, romantic, and above all, truly funny. I loved it.” —Nelson DeMille, New York Times bestselling author

“An appealing hero plus slick suspense and wry smiles: what more could you want?” —Lee Child, New York Times bestselling author

“A joy to read! At once, original, absorbing, hilarious, gripping and emotionally satisfying. A deftly written, small town family chronicle wrapped in a laugh out loud premise, wrapped even tighter in a page-turning thriller. I marveled at every page!” —Andrew Gross, NYT Bestselling author of No Way Back and Everything to Lose on Midnight Plan of the Repo Man

Library Journal
10/3/2014
Ruddy McCann, former college football star and current repo man, thinks he's losing his mind. He's started hearing voices—well, one voice actually, and it introduces itself as Alan Lottner, real estate agent. What Ruddy soon discovers is that Alan isn't a figment of his imagination, a serious mental health problem, or even the onset of the dreaded Repo Madness, a condition caused by the constant stress of repossessing cars from angry and often violent owners. Alan was murdered eight years earlier, and Ruddy has become the unwilling host of his spirit. What's worse is that Alan insists that Ruddy find out who killed him, but without adding Alan's problems to the mix, Ruddy has enough of his own: trying to help his sister keep the family's bar from going under and smoothing out the troubles and inane schemes of the bar's regulars. When Ruddy discovers that the girl he met recently and is very interested in is Alan's daughter, he's certain that things couldn't possibly get worse. Oh, how wrong he is.
Verdict Cameron (A Dog's Purpose; A Dog's Journey) has delivered a highly engaging and funny novel that is reminiscent of the early works of Carl Hiaasen (Skin Tight) and Christopher Moore (Practical Demonkeeping). It's so easy to get wrapped up in Ruddy's misadventures that readers may well finish the novel and only then realize that they've read it in one sitting.—Elisabeth Clark, West Florida P.L., Pensacola

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Kirkus Reviews
★ 2014-09-18
This laugh-out-loud mystery narrated by a word-clever repo man in Kalkaska, Michigan, will convince readers to keep on (tow) trucking. Ruddy McCann has a bit of a problem: The voice of a murder victim, real estate agent Alan Lottner, has suddenly taken up residence in his head. "I want you to find the people who did this to me, and bring them to justice," Lottner insists. At first, Ruddy, 30, thinks the chatter in his mind is the result of the dreaded malady "Repo Madness," the consequence of too many years pursuing deadbeats, a perilous occupation that requires "nerves of stupidity." But he soon finds that Alan—both a nag and a wisenheimer—is telling the truth about his death, and the pieces of this ingenious plot begin to click into place. Ruddy is soon in hot pursuit of the two murderers, who are more depraved than he originally thought; he's also in pursuit of the lovely Katie, who turn out—yikes!—to be Lottner's daughter. Through all the twists and turns of the unlikely plot, Ruddy is surrounded by a vividly drawn cast of characters, including Becky, his ultraresponsible sister, who had "a tapeworm or something that was always drawing the fun out of her"; Becky's goofy new boyfriend, Kermit, a voluble Mr. Malaprop; Ruddy's stud-muffin younger pal, Jimmy, whose earlier acting career "was somewhat hampered by his inability to act"; and Ruddy's beloved dog, Jake, "fifty pounds of anyone's guess." While it's no surprise that Ruddy gets both the evildoers and the girl, how he gets to that finish line is totally unexpected. A storyline that would be a car wreck in the hands of a less-talented writer turns out to be a delightfully entertaining road trip thanks to the deft touch of Cameron, a best-selling author (A Dog's Journey, 2012, etc.), humor writer and independent movie producer. This spirited novel, a rollicking mystery and sweet romance rolled into one, is the perfect vehicle for a wild joy ride.

Product Details

ISBN-13:
9780765377487
Publisher:
Tom Doherty Associates
Publication date:
10/28/2014
Series:
Ruddy McCann Series , #1
Pages:
336
Sales rank:
647,666
Product dimensions:
5.40(w) x 8.30(h) x 1.20(d)

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1

A Conversation with Albert Einstein

Computers and insurance companies call me Ruddick McCann—to everyone else I’m just Ruddy. I work for a collateral recovery agency run by a guy named Milton Kramer. When people can’t make their car payments, I help them get back on their feet.

I’m a repo man. Get it? “Back on their feet.” That was repo humor, there.

Milton does some financing—mostly people from our small town of Kalkaska, Michigan, who can’t get credit anywhere else—but usually our business comes from banks and finance companies. We’ll get assignments to repossess folks who can’t pay, won’t give up their vehicles voluntarily, and who usually hang up on collectors who are calling to try to work something out. It makes collectors mad when you hang up on them, so they pay me to go out and express their displeasure in person.

I’ve been relieving people of the burdens of automobile ownership for more than six years and I still don’t understand why it is necessary. If you can’t afford to make your car payments, why not just drive it back to the dealership and hand over the keys, instead of making Ruddy McCann come after you?

Of course, a better question might be, “If you aren’t making any money, why don’t you move someplace where you can find a job?” Most of the time my customers give the impression that having their vehicles repossessed is far from the worst thing to happen that week. When they invite me into their homes to hear their complaints about life, I have to shed my coat—they always keep it hot, their wood stoves pumping out heat and carbon monoxide in equal measure. Their TVs are always on. The local economy has been stuck in a recession since the term was invented. Nine months of the year it’s cold and wet, and then it turns hot and humid. No rational person would stay here longer than the time it takes to pack up his belongings and leave.

I should know. I’ve lived here all my life.

Today I was looking for a twenty-five-year-old man named, of all things, Albert Einstein. Albert Einstein Croft was his full name, though I suspected everyone called him Einstein—how could you resist? He worked on the assembly line at a place called PlasMerc Manufacturing—something told me he wasn’t exactly living up to his parents’ expectations regarding his intelligence. Einstein didn’t feel morally or ethically bound to pay for his used pickup truck anymore and had crudely suggested to the woman from the bank that she go somewhere to have anal sex with herself.

When I met up with Albert Einstein Croft I’d ask him to explain the physics of how that was supposed to work.

The PlasMerc factory had only been open a few years and I’d never been there before. I was surprised, when I located the place, that the employee parking lot was fenced and paved, with a guard in a booth, no less. Most companies in northern Michigan were more considerate, leaving their workers’ cars out in the open where the repo man could easily get to them. I pulled up in Milt’s tow truck and nodded at the guard, hoping he’d figure I was from AAA and punch the button for the gate to swing open. Instead, he gave me a stony stare, so I sighed and rolled down my window.

“Hey, how’s it going?” I asked in what sounded to my ears like a falsely cheerful voice. I’m not really known for doing “cheerful.”

“Help you?”

I had to make a quick decision on how to play it. I decided to shrug and look dumb. “Got a call, guy named Croft, an employee here? I’m supposed to pick up his truck, haul it in.”

He didn’t move to open the gate. “Yeah?”

We looked at one another. The guard was my age, around thirty, and had my build—solid and big. It was obvious we didn’t care much for each other’s attitudes.

“I know who you are,” he said finally.

It was my turn to say “Yeah?” So I did.

“You’re Ruddy McCann. Everybody used to look up to you, and then you let us down.”

“Well, sometimes that’s how these things go.”

“Now you steal cars for a living.”

I had to admit, it sounded less glamorous when he said it.

“You had everything anybody could ever want, and you pissed it away,” he continued. His eyes were cold and pitiless.

I sighed. “So could you let me in?”

“Get out of here. This is private property. You show up here again, I’ll have you arrested.”

We looked at each other for a little bit more. I thought about getting out of the truck and reaching into that booth and pulling him out by his shirt, and he could see me thinking about it and his gaze never faltered—that’s how much he hated me. So I threw the truck in reverse and backed away, my face burning.

There was nothing to do for the next couple of hours except fantasize about punching the guard in the nose. I was sort of driving aimlessly and after a few minutes I was in what passes for a downtown in East Jordan—a tiny, clean little main street with a few shops and no people, as if they were filming a zombie movie.

My idle thoughts eventually drifted around to the nightmare I’d had a couple of nights ago, my sleep disturbed by the violent windstorm that wound up knocking out power all across the county. The memory of it was more like something real, as if it had really happened. I clearly remembered the two men, the guy swinging the shovel, and running down the road, thinking I was going to get away.

He’s dead.

No, I’m not.

The dream seemed like it happened in the fall, but right now it was April in northern Michigan, a balmy forty degrees with a light drizzle starting to film my window. I flipped on the wipers and with the first sweep my vision cleared and there she was.

Attractive, midtwenties, curly red-brown hair falling to her shoulders, wearing a bulky all-weather parka and slacks, smiling. And waving. At me.

This was not the sort of thing I expected to happen to me, either in East Jordan or in my lifetime, but despite my disbelief, I stopped. She trotted over to my window, which I hastily rolled down.

“My car won’t start,” she told me. “Could you help me?”

“Why won’t it start?” I asked, as if reading from a book of Stupid Responses for Men.

She shook her head, wiping her wet bangs out of her blue eyes. “I don’t know.”

I swallowed down my disappointment over how I’d been conducting my end of the conversation and finally came up with the right thing to say. “I’ll see if I can jump it.”

I swung the tow truck into the parking space next to her little Ford and in short order determined her battery was dead. She stood in a doorway and blew on her hands while I pulled out my jumper cables. “Your battery looks pretty old and the posts are corroded,” I advised, wanting to talk about anything else but her car. “I can probably get you started, but you’ll want to get a new battery.”

“Oh, great. How much does something like that cost?”

“Maybe fifty, sixty bucks. I don’t know.”

She nodded in resignation. Her car roared to life with one crank, and I disconnected the cables. “I’m so glad you came along,” she told me.

There had to be something witty I could say to that. I stood there, staring at her, trying to think what that might be.

“How much do I owe you?”

“What?”

She reached into her purse, digging out a wallet. “Oh no, no,” I protested. “No, I’m not a tow-truck driver.”

I could see the skepticism in her eyes: I was, after all, driving a tow truck.

“I mean yes, this is a tow truck, but I’m not from a towing company. It’s … it’s hard to explain.” Particularly if you want to impress someone and thus don’t want to use the term repo man. Her skin was blemish free, perfect, and her teeth were white and perfect. Probably I would think her elbows were perfect, too.

“So you just drive around looking for what, women in distress?” Her clear eyes sparkled in merriment.

“Wet women,” I affirmed. Then I realized how that might sound and wanted to throw myself on the tow hook. “I mean, from the rain. Not, uh, you know.” Oh, God.

We stood and looked at each other for a minute. “Well, thanks very much, then.”

“Ruddy. My name is Ruddy McCann.”

“Ruddy. You mean, like the complexion?” Her smile lit up her face.

“It’s short for Ruddick; it was my mother’s maiden name.” I bit my lip, remembering the reaction from the guard. Everybody used to look up to you, and then you let us down. I desperately didn’t want this woman to already know anything about me.

My name didn’t seem to register. “I’m Katie.” Her hand was cold and wet from the weather, but it warmed me when I took it.

She hesitated, perhaps sensing that I wanted to say more, and then gave me another smile. She opened her car door and slid inside. “Well thanks again, Ruddy.”

“Sure. Uh, wait!” My heart was pounding. Katie beamed her beautiful blue eyes up at me and did as I asked: she waited. My brain flailed around, groping for words. “Uh, I was wondering if maybe I could buy you a cup of coffee?” There.

“That’s sweet, but I need to get back.” Her expression seemed to indicate she really did think it was sweet, so I plunged ahead.

“Maybe some other time? Tomorrow?” Could I sound more desperate?

“Well, I’m dating somebody right now, Ruddy. So, you know…”

Yes, I knew. Pretty, intelligent women with humor in their blue eyes didn’t wander around in the gray drizzle of East Jordan, Michigan, without a man lurking somewhere in their lives. “Okay,” I told her.

She cocked her head as if to look at me from a different angle. Then she turned and dug into her purse, possibly to hand me a gun so I could put myself out of my misery. “Look.” She wrote her phone number on a piece of paper—I even found her handwriting attractive. “Coffee would be fun. Yes, I’d love to. Here.” She handed me the paper and our fingers brushed against each other. “Call me, okay?”

I spent the rest of the afternoon rewriting my conversation with Katie, talking to myself and being almost excruciatingly witty. I gave Albert Einstein Croft enough time to get home from work, then swung the tow truck up his steep driveway, hoping to find his Chevy pickup out in the open at the top.

It was there, but a severe bend at the top of the drive made it virtually impossible for me to back my tow truck up to his bumper. He’d parked his vehicle with a brick wall at one end and some cement stairs at the other, a tight parallel parking job that must have taken him some time. I couldn’t haul the thing out of there with anything less than a crane. I’d have to appeal to Mr. Croft’s sense of fairness.

I stepped out of my truck and a large white goose peeked at me from a small shed. We looked at each other with baleful expressions.

Einstein came to the door wearing an open plaid shirt and a scowl, holding a beer in his hand. He was lean, but with a soft belly spilling out over his belt. Another five years he’d be thirty and people would describe him as having a “gut.” His hair was black, long, and stringy; eyes dark and cold. He regarded me through his storm door, a “who the hell are you?” expression on his face.

“Mr. Croft? I’m McCann, from Kramer Recovery.”

“So?”

“So you want to talk through the glass, or do you want to open the door?” I asked, considerably less friendly.

He cracked open the door and a sour odor drifted out on a blast of warm air. Over his shoulder I saw pizza boxes and dirty clothes sharing the same space on the couch. “It’s about the Chevy, Mr. Croft. You’re three payments behind again and the bank sent me out to pick it up. I need you to collect your personal property out of the vehicle.”

Croft looked contemptuous. “I told them I’d pay next Thursday.”

“It’s not up to me. They said you’ve broken promises before. So unless you have those three payments, I need you to surrender the keys.”

“Get off my land.”

I put a fatherly expression on my face: time to roll out my best material. “Look, I know times are probably tough right now. But sometimes all a man’s got in life is his signature on a piece of paper, and I’ve got your signature on a contract saying if you can’t pay, you’ll surrender the vehicle. You have to stand up for your good name, Mr. Croft.”

This little speech had succeeded for me a lot of times in the backwoods of Michigan, where people often really don’t have anything left in life but their honor. Einstein’s expression was derisive.

“Kinda crap is that? You guys knew I paid late when you financed it.”

“It was financed because your dad cosigned for it. You really want us to contact your old man, tell him his son isn’t living up to his word?”

“Hell if I care.”

Milt had told me the cosigner had lost his job and couldn’t pay. I blew out a breath, exasperated. “Come on, Croft, make it easy on yourself. You really want to go around through life parking your car between brick walls so I can’t get at it? Never knowing when you’re going to come out of the bar, finally talked some babe into going home with you, and it’s gone from the parking lot? Let’s get this over with now.”

“You come on my property again, I can shoot you legal,” he responded.

“Actually, that’s not true, it has to be hunting season,” I advised.

He blinked, then twisted his expression into sour disgust and slammed the door in my face. I stood in the rain for a minute, then turned and trudged back to the tow truck. The goose observed me with an unblinking eye.

The truck was sold used, so I didn’t have the original invoice in the file. No invoice, no key numbers to access to cut myself a set of keys to his truck. Normally with used cars I just tow them away, but that wasn’t an option with the way his driveway turned and how he liked to park it. But this truck was built with one of the old-style, steering wheel-column ignitions. What I could do was slim jim the lock on his door and use a dent puller on the key collar, disabling the security lock on his steering wheel and ripping out the starter contacts before Einstein could recite the theory of relativity. Once I started the truck, though, I’d have to rock back and forth a few times before I got a good enough angle to back the thing down the driveway. He’d obviously gone through the same rocking process to park it there. If he really did have a gun in his house, I’d be a pretty easy target.

I’d have to come back later.

Midnight. I did my best work at midnight.

Copyright © 2014 Cameron Productions, Inc.

Meet the Author

W. BRUCE CAMERON is the New York Times bestselling author of A Dog's Purpose, A Dog's Journey, and 8 Simple Rules for Dating My Teenage Daughter, which was turned into the hit ABC series. He lives in California.

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The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 12 reviews.
writersmh More than 1 year ago
I read at least one book per week, no genre left unturned. I work as editor in chief of an international magazine. (Translation: It's difficult to surprise me with a plot line; after awhile they all begin to feel similar). However, I must say: The Midnight Plan of the Repo Man not only kept me guessing, but entertained me the whole way through. I was truly impressed by the way author W. Bruce Cameron was able to inject constant action & adventure into the story, as well as a (brand new to me!) POV. There are many things to love about this book but one of my favorite parts is the entertaining subplot of "get rich quick schemes". Bruce's signature comedic voice is evident throughout the story, frequently making me laugh with that subtle, dry humor I find so appealing. This book is mind candy at its finest & I highly recommend it to anyone who likes being entertained and surprised. (Epilogue: Because I enjoyed his writing style so much I've since moved on to rereading some of Bruce's earlier books, all of which I love #TrueFan)
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Great pace and interesting personable characters. I'm reading the whole series!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
loved the story--read it in one sitting! offbeat, the story peels away in layers, and the reveal is at just the right pace. and i loved the subtle humor, very dry and similar to mine. :o)
YoyoMitch More than 1 year ago
Ruddick “Ruddy” McCain has a unique problem. This problem is in addition to his being deep in debt, working on commission as a “repo man” in Upper Michigan at the end of winter when that difficult job is even more difficult, supplementing that income by working as a bouncer in a failing, family-owned “bar & grille” named the Black Bear and he has little hope of cashing in on his once promising professional football career because of one poor choice. His new problem - he has been invaded by another person; invaded, not possessed. This new “visitor” happens to be Alan Lattner, a man who was murdered eight years ago. The reason for this invasion, the enlightenment both Ruddy and Alan achieve as a result of this “union” and the characters encountered in this exchange are intertwined to create a romping, often hilarious, thinly plotted mystery that is (hopefully) the first of several visits to Kalkaska, Michigan. The reality that this book is a weak mystery – the plot is unoriginal (albeit the delivery method of the mystery is original), the villains are easily spotted, the hero valiant but flawed – is in no way a deterrent to reading this book. It is a strong introduction to a new voice in humorous fiction. The characters are easy to “know,” the pacing is good – allowing the reader space enough to adjust to the action before rushing to the next plot point – the concept is new, well thought-out and expertly delivered are what drives this novel to be a page turner; I wanted to see what adventure Ruddy and his dog Jack were headed to next, learning “who done it” was a slight promise in the reasoning of why I wanted to keep reading. Aside from being very humorous (Mr. Cameron has a gift for writing with a humorous bent) this is a story about relationship; how connections are broader, deeper and far more timeless than recognized at first blush and how people are rarely what they appear to be when first they are met. The regulars of the Black Bear Bar & Grille in Kalkaska, MI are adapting to “their” bar becoming more than they knew it could be. This shift will cause them to reassess how they relate to a familiar place that is reincarnated in a different form; they discover that change their “place” to be profound but it is still “home.” Such moments are not limited to a building, the people who frequent the Black Bear are home for each other. I hope Mr. Cameron invites me back to the U.P. of Michigan soon. I would have given this a Five-Star rating had the mystery been better.
play4fun More than 1 year ago
Enjoyable story, well written and funny
Mattie090 More than 1 year ago
I can't stop thinking about this man and the characters in his life. A great story, surprising twists and turns and believe it or not, a hilarious murder mystery. I hope there are sequels!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Speechless!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Awesome story but still kind of sad!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
great!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
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