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It seemed like this had the potential to develop into a good story, but never quite made it. Not only was it hard to read because there were no quotation marks whenever anyone spoke, it was extremely anticlimactic. The banal ending made the entire story seem pointless. I just didn't understand what the author was really trying to do.
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Posted May 4, 2012
Hmmmmmm
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Posted March 26, 2012
Good characters, plot, I was pulled into what I thought would be a murder mystery and found the ending a real surprise.
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Posted March 25, 2012
105 pages
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Posted January 22, 2012
There are sooooooooop many good books out there ... but they chose this one 2 B Free ? It was lacking of evry thing a very big NNO NO... and i havent even read it lol i can just tell so you read it and wacht me B right!#!!!
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Posted January 5, 2012
All I can say is I am glad this book was free. The overall story was under developed and lacking. I could not relate to the characters at all, just as you started to get a feel for one of them, the author was on to the next one.
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Posted September 6, 2011
It was ok. I expected more and kept waiting for a climax but nothing happened!
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Posted August 22, 2011
Strange & rather depressing.
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Posted August 15, 2011
Started out good with great idea of plot. What happened along the way?
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Posted July 16, 2011
Not sure if it is considered a novella or a short story. Not literary genius but enjoyable. A freebie with a few typos.
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Posted May 28, 2011
I dont know what caused davids paranoia but i thought the characters were believable and i enjoyed it all including the hitchcock like ending
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Posted May 19, 2011
If you like a short story this is a little odd one.
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Posted July 25, 2010
I would characterize the book as a type of Alfred Hitchcock story. It has an interesting ending. I liked the book. I would read more of Tom Lichtenberg's books.
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Posted June 11, 2010
Boy am I glad this book was free. The writing style was confusing, the author kept changing characters, it was confusing. The plot was lacking and very predictable.
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Posted June 6, 2010
This author obviously had an idea for a story, but did a very poor job of presenting it. First, the grammar was terrible. And in many reviews I have seen people complain about grammar, and thought how can it be that hard to read? I kept having to read sentences again because, with no quote marks, I couldnt tell who was saying what.
I decided to finish the story because it was only 64 pages, and figured I could stumble through the lack of punctuation. The author spent a lot of time rambling about crazy people, and then after spending all the time to set up the ending, just fumbled it completely. I barely understood what the author had chosen to do in the end!
I would not waste my time reading this again.
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Posted August 23, 2010
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Overview
DeBarrie's Stationery Store needed help again. Somehow, the part-time people never worked out. It was a problem. One after another, the part-time people came and went, and sometimes, nobody ever found out what happened to them. The newest one seemed even more hopeless than usual. His job application announced "there's a man who follows me around and ruins everything I try to do".