The Perfect BMW

The Perfect BMW

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by Luvvenia Hawkins
     
 
Even Divas get lonely too. What to do? You are young, black and gifted. This is the tale of one woman's hunt for the perfect BMW (Black Man Working) only to have her dream come true turn into her worse nightmare when she learns that her new hubby has not disclose to her the fact that he has three children by three different women. What happens when she finds out and

Overview

Even Divas get lonely too. What to do? You are young, black and gifted. This is the tale of one woman's hunt for the perfect BMW (Black Man Working) only to have her dream come true turn into her worse nightmare when she learns that her new hubby has not disclose to her the fact that he has three children by three different women. What happens when she finds out and they all come to live with her?

Editorial Reviews

Brink Day
Your writing is beautifully descriptive and its a fun read, but you may think of doing something different with the first portion of this piece. I struggled hard to get the correct flow during all the interruptions of her story. I think they serve a purpose and do it well but perhaps you could start a new line each time someone different speaks?

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940011104572
Publisher:
Luvvenia Hawkins
Publication date:
08/30/2010
Series:
Recalibrate My Love , #1
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
691,658
File size:
311 KB
Age Range:
18 Years

Meet the Author

L. Hawkins is a writer for Jirehis Publications where she authors books under the pen name ALm HLgh. She currently works as an Assignment Manager for a major broadcasting company in the Midwest. Earning a Bachelors in Communications from the University of Illinois, she went on to study for one year at the Graduate level, majoring in Urban and Regional Planning. Before beginning her writing and broadcast career, L. Hawkins worked as a Loan Officer for a financial institution, a teacher in the public sector, and as a marketing research liaison for various companies.

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The Perfect BMW 2.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
There is no man or woman that is perfect
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It could have been a good story but it dragged