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Posted May 21, 2013
Terrific work. I really love this. I love the voice and the style. The narrator is engaging and energizing and he feels free to say exactly whatever it is he wants to say, no holds barred. I hope there will be other parts to this short story or maybe you should even consider extending it into a novel.
Either way, your call — this is terrific already. Thanks for putting so much work into it. It really shows.