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KareBear1965
Posted April 16, 2012
I bought all the Macon Valley Ménage Stories and now I'm wishing I hadn't spent my money. I live on a fixed income and can only spend so much each month of books. I sure wasted my money this month. The story line is well thought-out, but the editing leaves a lot to desire. Each book had multiple errors, which should have been caught when editing. I learned in 7th grade that when writing you never put yourself first in a sentence the other person always goes first. Then there were words like lime for time in of the books and a few others like that a real word, but the wrong word being used. I understand the concept of short stories, but each of these felt rushed and uncompleted. Makes me wonder about other stories published through this company. I took the time to go check out the web sites listed and it's basically a self-publishing company. I have nothing against people who want to publish their works for others to read. I've read quite a few really well and well edited books that have been self-published, so don't get me wrong I'm not down on self-publishing if the editing work is up to par.
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A Macon Valley Ménage StoryTwin brothers, Levi and Lyle Ackerman have had their sights set on Sally Young for years now. Lyle manned up and asked her out, beating Lyle to the punch. Sally had always seemed so sweet, so untouchable. Now, she’s within the boys’ reach and their ready to spend a night exploring every inch of her, giving her pleasures she can’t deny.
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