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Anonymous
Posted March 2, 2012
Wow, this book was an absolute mess! It would appear the author didn't even bother using spellcheck before publishing this disaster. It was almost painful to read given the extent of the grammatical errors alone! Although there were chapters, he didn't bother separating the different scenes within, so it was extremely confusing as the action and dialogue jumped from one location to another. I found it very difficult to keep track of all the characters, especially when half of them were named Jack or John, and because sometimes he'd actually mix the names up (ie calling Sandra "Sarah"). The underlying story really isn't that bad, but it was so poorly executed I cannot bear to finish this trilogy. Someone needs to get this guy an editor!!
26 out of 27 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 14, 2012
I did not get this story. There were typos and mispelling and bad punctuation! This writer needs an editor. I do not reccomend it to people who get confused easily.
12 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 27, 2011
It's not a barn burner, but these are a decent read. The wtiting is only okay, but the premise is very cool. Made me wish a better writer had come up with the idea.
7 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 14, 2012
I enjoyed this tale of a post WWIII Earth dominated by vampire masters and their underling thralls; however, I was a little disappointed at the lack of good editing and typos throughout. The underlying plot & character building is great if you can get over the "rough draft" nature of this book.
6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 28, 2011
Good plot but more detail on ancient vampires would be awesome.
6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 16, 2012
The book might be good once it was edited and rewritten. I couldn't get passed page 58. The story sounded good, however I felt like I was reading a ruff draft of a book, one that needs lots of editing. Not worth my time.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 21, 2012
This book was kind of hard to get into based on the typos and all around bad editing. The most annoying thing is that it switches between characters very frequently but there is no break in the text so suddenly you are reading another scene and it is very confusing. Also it was unexpectedly more a war novel then anything with lots of descriptions of battle. But, I actually started to like the story a bit. Really this author just needs some help from an editor who can cut out all the overly excessive descriptions and extra characters and I think this would be a great story.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 12, 2012
I thought the storyline was very good, plenty of action and good plot; however grammar, punctuation, word use and sentence structure was terrible.
I think this is a good writer who needs a good editor.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 1, 2012
I'm afraid I only got through a few pages of this book. Run on sentences and poor paragraph seperation made it too difficult to follow. I'm sorry to admit I did not feel the desire to continue.
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 4, 2012
What a horrible book. Poorly written. Dont buy
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 28, 2012
Well i got this book as something to do but after the first couple of pages i got bored it didnt catch my attention it was slow for a while i actually stopped reading it for a few months then when i tried again it got better in the end but not reccomended for people under 15 lots of foul laguage
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 30, 2012
As i read many new writers i look past editing & typos. I really enjoyed the plot & charactor developement. This is an enjoyable read & i look forward to reading more of his novels.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 15, 2012
I really enjoyed this book. I like the story line. It is a somewhat different take on the usual vampire story. I can't wait to read the rest of the series. I do wish these authors would get better proof reading. The grammar, punctuation and spelling are at times very appalling and make the book harder to read.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted June 15, 2012
The teeth on the cover are disgusting!
1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted June 4, 2012
Despite the gramatical errors and jump from one scene to the next with no warning. I found it a good book and a good change from the other vampire novels.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 31, 2012
Good read, but a little confusing to follow as the story jumps from one scene to another on the same page.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 22, 2012
Could not make it more than a few pages. Run on sentences, typos, and just plain ol' boring writing. I love fantasy and vampire stories (twilight doesn't count), but just not this one!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 22, 2012
There are grammatic errors in the story. As well as weird ? in boxes.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 21, 2012
This is more of a novel about the enduring spirit of humanity using vampires to set the tone. It is very well written and a welcome change to the genre.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 16, 2012
I enjoyed this set of vampire storys. Books 1 and 2 should be read to understand story line. Sad to say lots of errors. Makes parts of book hard to follow. Where are the proof readers?
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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