Waiting

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After her brother’s death, a teen struggles to rediscover love and find redemption in this gripping novel.

Growing up, London and Zach were as close as could be. And then Zach dies, and the family is gutted. London’s father is distant. Her mother won’t speak. The days are filled with what-ifs and whispers: Was it London’s fault?
Alone and adrift, London finds herself torn between her brother’s best friend and the handsome new boy in town as she...

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Overview

After her brother’s death, a teen struggles to rediscover love and find redemption in this gripping novel.

Growing up, London and Zach were as close as could be. And then Zach dies, and the family is gutted. London’s father is distant. Her mother won’t speak. The days are filled with what-ifs and whispers: Was it London’s fault?
Alone and adrift, London finds herself torn between her brother’s best friend and the handsome new boy in town as she struggles to find herself—and ultimately redemption—in this authentic and affecting novel from award-winning novelist Carol Lynch Williams.

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Editorial Reviews

Publishers Weekly
First-person stanzas convey the emotions and memories of high school student London as she grieves over the suicide of her older brother, Zach. Initially, London is overwhelmed by loneliness and the quietness that permeates her house. Her father, a missionary, has barely spoken to her since the tragedy, and her mother’s silence, laced with hostility, is even more painful. (“When I step in the house, I feel the emptiness, feel me/ the only person breathing in here./ For a moment I think of my mother being here every day/ by herself/ thinking of her dead son and the daughter she hates”). The cause of her mother’s resentment and the circumstances of Zach’s death gradually unfold as London reaches outside her family, welcoming the support of her ex-boyfriend, Taylor, and two newcomers who know little of London’s past. Exposing the heartbreak of a broken family, the complexities of denial, and the healing power of friendship, Lynch’s (Miles from Ordinary) writing is characteristically gritty but also inspirational as London challenges her mother’s misplaced anger and creates her own route to recovery. Ages 14–up. Agent: Stephen Fraser, Jennifer DiChiara Literary Agency. (May)
From the Publisher
"With a format and voice that will resonate with teens, Carol Lynch Williams offers a poignant story of strength and healing, all bound by the power of love and friendship. This is YA at its very best!"

—Daniel L. Darigan, Professor of Education, West Chester University.

starred review SLJ
"Gut-wrenching."
Rita Williams-Garcia
"Thoroughly engaging, heartbreaking, with a taste of hope."
VOYA - Beth Andersen
Sixteen-year-old London battles her way through every second of the nightmare that has become her life since the death of her brother, Zach, the previous year. The children of missionaries, now settled in the United States, Zach and London were best friends until he killed himself. London now walks the halls of her school and sits in class nearly catatonic with grief and guilt. She is isolated by friends "From Before" who do not know what to say. A newcomer, Lili, at first oblivious to London's story, befriends her and then works to save her with her determined good heart. Taylor, Zach's best friend and one-time boyfriend of London; Lili's alluring older brother, Jesse; and London's father circle around this broken teen whose path forward seems possible only if her mother will stop her hateful rejection of the daughter who desperately needs her. Williams's stunningly powerful free-verse story of a family decimated by the loss of a child paints a brutal picture of an unimaginable situation that is exacerbated by London's mother, who actively and shockingly blames her daughter for Zach's death. This book is impossible to put down—factor into your reading time tear-blurred vision. Reviewer: Beth Andersen
Kirkus Reviews
A girl copes with the death of her beloved brother Zach, and the devastation it has wrought on her family. London clearly has sunk into despair. She goes to school but doesn't interact with her friends. At home, her mother refuses to speak with her at all, eventually becoming openly hostile to her. Her father does his best to hold the family together on his own, but he has his own limits. London does find herself strongly attracted to Jesse, a new boy in school, but he's in a relationship with London's former best friend. Another new student, Lili, manages to penetrate London's mental fog with her inexhaustible energy, apparently on a mission to make London her friend. London finds herself caught between the old and the new as she delves ever more deeply into the chaos that her brother's death has caused. Williams, as always, keeps her prose, this time arranged on the page as prose poems, sensitive, intelligent and completely absorbing. She slowly peels back the veils on London's, her father's and her mother's psychology, eventually revealing the strong and the weak and, ultimately, how Zach died. The family she depicts are former missionaries, giving the book strong spiritual undertones that should appeal to religious as well as general audiences. Exceptional. (Fiction. 12 & up)
SLJ
"Gut-wrenching.
Children's Literature - Claudia Mills
"After it happened, no one in school would talk to me." With this haunting first line, Carol Lynch Williams plunges young adult readers into a searing story of a family shattered by tragic loss. Teenager London's beloved older brother is dead (we do not find out how or why until a devastating revelation late in the book), and London's mother has retreated into rage and depression, unfairly blaming London for the loss of her favorite child (London does not blame her mother for loving Zach best: "I loved him best too"). In a wrenching kaleidoscope of fragmentary prose poems, London speaks directly to the reader, sharing her puzzlement at her own paradoxical way of dealing (or not-dealing) with her numbing grief: filling the hole in her heart with conflicting love for not one but two boys—her brother's best friend and a charismatic new boy at school. Williams provides an even deeper level to this multi-layered novel by making London the daughter of an evangelical missionary who has led his family across the world as he preaches God's word. Now London mutters to herself, "There is a God. There is a God. There is a God;" she still believes in God, yes, "But does He believe in me?" A stunning, gut-punching, heart-wrenching, heart-healing story from one of the most brilliant talents in young adult fiction today. Reviewer: Claudia Mills, Ph.D.
School Library Journal
Gr 8 Up—Told in first-person stanzas, Williams's novel in verse is gut-wrenching in its portrayal of a family that implodes under the strain of tragedy and loss. Since the death of her older brother nine months earlier, London Castle has felt like a pariah. Her father, a former missionary, spends most of his time in his church office, and her mother, who blames her for what happened to Zach, completely ignores her. No one at school, not even her former best friend, talks to her. Grief-stricken and alone, the teen is understandably cautious when Lili, the new transfer student, approaches her. Is she truly interested in becoming friends, or does she merely have a morbid curiosity about how Zach really died? London initially rejects her attempts at friendship but eventually finds herself opening up. She renews her relationship with her ex-boyfriend Taylor, but she's also infatuated with Jesse, Lili's brother. The two guys, together with Lili, provide her with the strength she needs to begin her recovery. While London's anguish and her father's detachment are typical responses to tragedy, her mother's outright animosity seems extreme, making it difficult for the audience to feel any sympathy for the woman. When the truth of her role in Zach's death surfaces, her continued condemnation of London makes her more of a caricature than a real person. Although there is no happy ending here, the appearance of an unexpected character at the end of the book offers London hope for herself and her family's future.—Audrey Sumser, Cuyahoga County Public Library-Mayfield, OH
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Product Details

  • ISBN-13: 9781442443532
  • Publisher: Simon & Schuster/Paula Wiseman Books
  • Publication date: 5/1/2012
  • Pages: 352
  • Sales rank: 639,310
  • Age range: 14 - 17 Years
  • Product dimensions: 5.36 (w) x 7.10 (h) x 1.16 (d)

Meet the Author

Carol Lynch Williams is a PEN Award winning author of more than a dozen books and a graduate of the Vermont College MFA program. Carol facilitates the children’s writing conferences at Utah Valley University and Brigham Young University. She lives in Utah with her family. Visit her at CarolLynchWilliams.com.

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Waiting


  • After it happened, no one in school would talk to me.

No one. Not even my best friend, Lauren Hopkins, who has hair to her waist, and who let me dress like her until I figured out how to dress for myself.

She had said, “You know what, London? You homeschool types never look like the rest of the world. Even when you wear the right clothes.”

(I had on blue jeans and a Billy Talent T-shirt and Vans, too. It must have been my face. It must have. A look. I’ve seen it myself in pictures. Wide-eyed, surprised. Happy.

But that’s gone. That look is long gone.)

“So teach me what to wear,” I had said, shrugging. Like I didn’t care, you know? But I did. I cared a lot.

And while I didn’t buy anything different from normal, she did show me how to use kohl eyeliner.

And that should be enough to keep you tight, right?

 

Clichéd.
So clichéd.
The whole thing.

Me sitting there, like I’m minding my own business. Eating a cheese sandwich from home. Just the right amount of mayonnaise. Swallowing, yes. But having a hard time with it. Like there’s a fist blocking my throat.

 

The five chairs around me are empty because no one sits with me now. (Including Lauren Hopkins.) Maybe they’re used to me being alone? Maybe they’re afraid my tragedy will rub off on them? Maybe it’s because I can’t quite talk still? Whatever, they leave me on my own.

 

Lunchroom noises . . . Popping sounds of sodas being opened. Trays dropped on the table. Forks scraping on plates. Lunch bags being smushed closed.

The clichéd part is me on the inside.

I am ready to bust wide open. I feel it. I feel it coming up from the pit of my stomach, like a fast-growing foam. Like vinegar added to baking soda (and there’s Zach pouring the liquid and saying, “People of Vesuvius, run for your lives.” And I’m laughing hard and so is Mom.). Like the feeling wants to burst out of me.

I’m the volcano.

For a moment I think, Don’t do it. Don’t do it. Don’t. Do. It.

That’s how strong the urge to scream is.

The words I didn’t KNOW! echoing in my head, the o sound going on, screeching toward the ceiling. Higher higher.

Will they look then? Will they even hear me? Talk to me?

Sit next to me again? Leave me alone?

I hold it in, hold the scream back with both hands on my throat, tight, tighter, and it hurts. It all hurts. From the inside out. Tighter and tightest. Black in front of my eyes, no breathing for me.

The next clichéd part?

This new guy walks into the lunchroom and I gasp in air.

 

So I don’t see him.

I don’t see him.

I don’t see him.

Second half of the day just about over. I walk the halls alone. Check out the bathroom, make sure no one’s there. Lock myself in a stall. Take off my shirt, bundle it in a ball, and scream right into an armpit.

 

Then when I come into English class late (even this is clichéd—I used to read. I know.), I see him, right there, sitting in the row closest to the windows. His long legs spread out in the aisle. He’s grinning at what? Me? Can’t be. I’m just here. Late and all, with a wrinkled shirt now that’s wet from my scream and tears.

If my face would move, I’d smile. I’d laugh! Like before.

I would throw back my head and let the laughter burst from me.

But I just step over his feet, notice his dark brown eyes, dark hair, and head to the last chair in the row next to his.

“London,” Mrs. Pray says, “I’d appreciate you getting to class on time.”

 

“Yes, ma’am,” I say, not looking at her. Because I know what her face is. Full of sorrow for me. And after a screaming-into-my-shirt session, I cannot hold up under a look of sorrow. No way. That’s too much.

 

Somebody snickers (about me?) and I stumble. Why do I have to care what everyone thinks? Why do I have to care that I’m alone?

 

At home, all life has stopped, even though it’s been a while. You think things get going again. And they do.

Sort of.

Here’s how it works—

You become a shell. Fragmented. Soul seeping through the bigger cracks.

You walk. Move. Arms into sleeves. Zip zippers. Run your fingers through your hair. Swish mouthwash around your mouth. Avoid flossing.

 

Nod when someone asks, “London, how are you?”

Look away when someone says, “I heard about your loss.”

Want to tear skin with your teeth when someone says,

“Oh, he’s in a better place.”

You pass the closed door when you walk down the hall.

Wish things were different so we could sell. Move from this house. Get away from here. Run.

 

Dad at work all day. More than all day. Sleeping under his desk sometimes.

Drinking so much coffee that I can smell him from across the room.

 

And Mom. On her knees. On her knees. Weeping into her pillow.

Looking the other way when I’m near.

 

“London?”

I look up from a stack of newspapers I haven’t even read. Don’t even know the name of the top one. I look only for stories of death. And nothing touches it.

“You’re London, right?”

My eyes don’t focus at first. How did she recognize me out of school? What was I doing? Nothing? Just sitting here? I nod.

She sits next to me. “Can I sit with you?”

She’s in the chair. Why does she ask? I want to say that, be my old sarcastic self. Instead, I think shallow sarcastic thoughts that are only half feelings, really, and nod again.

“My name is Lili.” She holds her hand out for me to shake. I don’t. She drops her hand. “I just moved here with my family. And I heard about you so I thought I’d sit here. Do you care?”

 

I nod a third time, then shake my head no. Meaning yes.

I want this warm body next to me till she finds out and leaves. Like everyone else.

 

Everyone’s the same, you know?

Even when they say they’re different, they aren’t.

I scare them.

No one wants what happened to me to happen to them.

And I can’t blame them at all.

“Oh good. It’s hard to be in a new place. Especially this close to the end of the school year. I’m from Utah. It was cold when we left. And look at the weather here.”

She holds her hands out like I’ll see a sample of the weather—Utah, Florida—on each palm.

 

I glance out the library window. The sun’s bright today, I squint. I hadn’t even noticed. And I’m sitting in a rectangle of light so hot that all the sudden my neck starts to itch and I feel all sweaty under one arm.

 

Look at this. See it.

There are dead people everywhere. Not like in that movie. I mean, everywhere.

In real life. On the news. In the papers. In history books.

In my life.

I cannot wait to get away from this.

So how do I? Get away, I mean?

Die myself?

Cause that much more grief.

Tear a hole open in the universe and just get the hell out of here?

 

Mom wouldn’t like it that I swear. She hates it when we do. I mean, when I do.

Or maybe not.

God expects more, is the whisper in the back of my head.

Well, the truth is, so do I.

A missionary’s kid can’t kill herself. It’s against all the rules. It’s against God’s law.

But

But would He stop me?

Would Jesus come here, right here in this library, if I was getting ready to off myself, and stop me?

I didn’t think so.

So I just have to stick around. No matter how I struggle to breathe. Be part of the plan. Part of the deal. Why?

Because accidents happen.

My whole family is aware of that.

 

Lili is settled all around me. She has on shorts and a long-sleeve T-shirt with SONS OF HELAMAN MOMMA’S BOYS written across the front of it (huh?), and I don’t even see her coat.

“It’s February,” I say. It’s hard to get the words out, but I do. Like that’s enough. But she seems to understand and smiles.

“Isn’t that great? Back home there’s snow everywhere!” Her library books slide all over my newspapers, pushing one to the floor. I ignore it. She puts her laptop on the table. “I’m writing a book,” she says, and I think of Daddy with his nonfiction, talking about our family Before and the travels and the people we met and missionary work. I think how he used to read every section out loud to all of us.

Before.

I look at Lili. She’s talking, but I don’t really hear her. Her teeth are so white, and when she smiles she seems happy. I wonder if Zach would have liked her.

 

Would you have liked Lili, Zach?

 

Here’s how I know God doesn’t hear me:

Daddy, my daddy the missionary, traveling us all around the country, all around the world, serving others.

Oh, what I have seen, what I have seen. Earthquakes, murders, orphans, flooding, people lying dead by the side of the road—the list goes on and on. And all that happening with us praying together, as a family, whole. All in a circle, holding hands, my daddy’s voice piercing the ceiling and headed straight to heaven.

And not one thing changed.

“You’re changing,” Daddy said. “Maybe God isn’t sweeping the world clean of injustice, but, London, you’re changing. You’re getting stronger. Learning more. Loving God with a fierceness no one would expect.”

 

And Zach just nodded, wide-eyed.

He believed. More than me. Always more than me.

He held on to his faith, even through his sad times, his hard times.

 

“It’s gonna be okay, London,” Zachy said. “It’s never what we think.”

I remember it was a hot November night. Our first

Thanksgiving in the South and here was this freak weather.

“It should be,” I had said.

Zach slipped his arm around my shoulder and we sat there, quiet between us, for the longest time. Then he said, “I know.”

Zach was right.

Daddy doesn’t know. Mom doesn’t know. But on those trips, I think I started wondering about a god that would let all this bad stuff happen. All of it so awful. I was changing. Stretching from my old religious skin. Feeling itchy with the worrying and the cracking free.

 

And just know this. You don’t have to be the daughter of a missionary to know what’s going on. Watch the news.

Read the paper. Check online.

I told you so.

 

So when I was little, Daddy said, “God answers prayers through Jesus Christ.” And I believed. One day, believing, I wrote this note to Jesus. It was like, Are you there? Check one box, yes or no. And I folded the note up small and set it on the bar in the kitchen. I spied around for a while, watching, to see. Left. Came back.

 

“What are you doing?” Zach said.

“Waiting,” I said.

“For what?”

I couldn’t say, “For Jesus.” Or maybe, with Zach then, I could have. But I didn’t. That’s all I’m saying now.

 

I didn’t.

 

Now with this company I don’t look for a quiet moment. In fact, there’s nothing quiet about Lili. She runs her mouth and never takes a breath, I don’t think.

 

She’s here, that strange Lili. Sitting up close, hands folded, ponytail falling forward, leaning at me as she chatters.

Utah this and that, she says.

Grammy and Grampy this and that, she says.

And what about Disney World, it’s waaaay better than Disneyland, right?

Sure.

I look at her and stay quiet. I let out a sigh.

She can talk. Wow.

This talker saves me from having to speak.

This talker is better than being alone.

 

How did Lili happen upon me here at the library? I shift in the sun, glance at the clock. Forty-five more minutes before Daddy will pick me up.

 

“Tell me about your family,” Lili says. “Do you have any brothers or sisters, London?”

Just like that. Like she has a right to know.

I swallow, swallow, look at her side-eyed, back at the clock. In the sun her dark hair has a red tint. She’s thin, looks like an athlete. I catch my breath and there’s time for my words because she’s stopped talking. She waits. Quiet.

 

After the account of the long drive from Utah, after Provo High, after being the middle of five kids (four boys and her) and being an aunt when she was twelve, after how her father is the new football coach at the local university, after how her mother can’t get bread to rise in the Florida humidity, she looks me right in the eye and waits for my answer.

 

That’s an ugly question sitting on the books between us.

“Do you have any brothers or sisters?”

 

My body takes over.

I’m up, going, headed toward the door. Leaving everything behind.

I look back once, flip her the bird. Her mouth drops open.

How the hell did she find me, anyway? All tucked away in the back like that?

For a moment I imagined her as a friend. A good friend.

I could have lived with all the talking, turned my ears off, nodded when I needed to, if I had a friend again.

 

But she is, I see, just like everyone else—wanting to know the end.

 

Daddy beeps as he passes, makes a U-turn. Pulls up alongside me. I climb in the car.

“London, you didn’t wait for me.”

My mouth is dry as a sock and I’m cold. I want to say something, answer him, tell him what just happened, but my voice is trapped in a box.

Lili and her stupid T-shirt and shorts.

“Honey, I told you I’d pick you up. You’ve been walking a long while. You’re halfway home.” He sort of looks at me.

We pass a huge orange grove. This is why we live here now. After Daddy retired and decided to settle down in one place. We came here for the oranges and avocados and hot, steamy weather.

“Are you okay, London?”

I glance at my father. My eyes are dried out too. Now

I’m hot all over, though my fingers remind me of ice chips. And I can’t stop trembling.

“Let me get you home,” Daddy says.

I open my mouth to speak, to say anything, but Lili seems to have used up all the words I might have said today.

 

She has four brothers.

Count them. One, two, three, four.

And my one is none.

 

When almost all the shivering has stopped, Daddy says, “Honey, your mom’s resting again today.”

I look at my hands, empty of everything. Not one library book, not even a magazine, though I’d thought of putting together a stack on the table, if I hadn’t been so tired, and checking them out.

I stare at what might be the lifeline on my palm.

The truth is, books used to connect us.

They’re something we always had, even in Africa, though not like what’s here in this house.

I can do without the books this weekend—I haven’t read anything I wasn’t forced to in months. What I need is to share the air with what’s left of my family. Take small steps. Sleep on the edge of life.

 

“I’m going back to the church to look over photographs for this next book. I’ll work in my office some more.”

 

Sunnyside Baptist Church opened its arms to us when we arrived, because Daddy is a well-known missionary. They wanted him here. Gave him an office to work from. He’s even spoken from the pulpit several times over the past three years.

 

I mean, Before.

Not as much now.

He needs time.

When I glance at Daddy, I see he doesn’t look in my direction. He grips the steering wheel. Holds tight. Stares ahead. Just stares ahead, hanging on to the steering wheel. Looks at the road like it’s his best friend.

I bet it is. I bet the road is his best friend, because he has always loved to travel.

“Right,” I say. I’m surprised I found my voice, like all along it was hiding in the backseat or near my lifeline or something. “Thank you for picking me up.”

“Sure thing, honey.”

We drive down our street, so green. Trees hunch over the road, cold sunlight splashing through, houses set far apart, wide spaces between, and a breeze moving American flags like a gentle wave, like they’re saying good-bye to an almost-friend. A talkative almost-friend.

“I’ll be home by dinner.”

I nod.

We pull in the driveway. The house seems all closed up, the windows dark-eyed. The sidewalk even feels like it might roll up and pull the welcome sign off the tole painting Mom did so long ago.

“Check on your mom for me, huh, London?”

When I touch the car door handle, a shiver runs up my arm, makes me look Daddy in the eye.

For a moment we stare at each other.

Who would think someone could get old in just a few short months? But it’s happened to my father. His hair graying like it is at the temples. Wrinkles that make him look sad, even if he smiles. He just seems brittle somehow. We all are, I know.

 

Then I see it. Past the age. Past the gray and sadness. I see him—

Zach, my older brother,

hidden in my

daddy’s face.

 

“London, come with me.”

That long-ago night, my eyes popped open. Zach stood over me, in his pajamas. His hair was all messed up from being asleep. He was right in my face, so close I clapped a hand over my nose to keep from smelling his breath.

He laid a finger on my hand like he was silencing me. “Come on. You have to be quiet.”

I got out of bed, clutching Mandy, my little one-eyed doll.

The wooden floor was cold.

“Guess what I found?”

“What?” My voice came out low and full of gravel.

“Shh!”

“I’m tired.”

“You’re going to like this. You will.” He took my hand in his.

We went down the hall to Mom and Daddy’s room. The door was open just a bit.

Everything was gray. Even Zach. But the hall night-light was a yellow blob with shadows spreading away. It scared me, seeing it like that, but I didn’t tell Zach.

“They’re sleeping in there. So really shush now.”

“Okay.”

He pushed the door open. I could see our parents in bed. He pulled me to the closet. Their big walk-in closet. Opened that door. Led me in. Closed the door. I could smell the leather of Daddy’s shoes and Mom’s perfume.

He flicked on the flashlight.

“Look.” The beam of light circled the tippy-top of the closet. Christmas presents. Wrapped already. Way up there. “Santa’s been here.” He lighted the presents again.

“How do you know it was Santa?” My voice was a growl.

“Right there. See?”

I saw. FROM SANTA in black marker.

Zach flipped off the light. We stood in the dark closet.

The space smelling of our parents. I felt disappointed. I had thought, well, that Santa did work at the North Pole.

That he brought things from there on Christmas Eve.

Not that he stored presents in my parents’ closet.

I felt Zachy’s hand. He tugged me out into the bedroom, out the door, back down the hall. He tucked me into bed.

 

“We won’t tell them we know,” he said.

And we never did.

 

Mom is in her room. I knew she would be when I stood on the front porch and watched Daddy leave. I open her door, which is closed almost all the way, remembering that Santa night even though we lived in a different house then.

 

“Mom?”

She moves in bed. I can see she’s lying on top of the covers. She’s fully dressed, so that means she’s been out.

But she doesn’t answer.

“Daddy wanted me to look in on you. Is there anything I can get for you?”

Nothing.

She hasn’t spoken to me in months. Not when it’s just the two of us. Not when Daddy is home. Not at all, not at all, not at all.

 

“He’s put dinner on,” I say.

Has she plugged her ears?

Does she hear me?

Do my words make their way to her?

I see her roll over, turn her back to me.

A part of me wants to run in there. Run in and shake Mom. Scream in her face. Make her SEE me. I touch my throat, squeeze my eyes shut. Turn around and pull the door to, leaving it cracked open just a bit.

 

I finish making dinner—glass pitcher of iced tea cooling in the fridge, brown-and-serve rolls ready to bake as soon as Daddy gets home, a Sara Lee pie pulled out of the freezer to thaw.

It’s quiet here. Like I live all alone. The house breathes opposite me, breathing in when I breathe out. Presses its memories on me. If walls could talk, what would these walls say? Would they close their eyes to memories, like I want to?

When I can’t stand it, I turn on some music, classical, so soft it can’t be heard down the hall.

Sometimes, when it’s late, really late, I’ll pull out some of Zach’s music. I hid his iPod when Daddy searched my brother’s room for answers. I don’t listen often. But on a night like this, maybe someone else’s wailing will help me

out.

 

I dream he’s alive.

He wakes me with a low, “London.” I cover my face, hide my nose from his breath that is cold as frost. “I’m okay,” he says. “I promise. Come with me.”

“You’re taller,” I say.

He nods. “Maybe,” he says. “Anything is possible here.”

“Where?” I say. And I’m up, following him. “Where?”

I open my eyes when my feet touch the floor.

He’s gone.

 

Zachy was so good-looking, even grown women did a double take when they saw him.

His hair was blond (mine is sandy-colored with a highlight of auburn)

his eyes so blue they made you think fake and he was way taller than me, more than six three. He might have kept growing forever if he’d stayed alive.

 

But the best part of my brother was when he was happy, and he was, mostly—though there were times— how he would throw back his head and laugh.

 

No one had a laugh like that.

 

Daddy misses dinner. Again.

(This never happened Before.)

Mom eats in her room with a bottle of wine I didn’t even know we had.

 

It’s me

alone

looking at three empty chairs and wondering.

“Why do I even bother to eat?” I ask Zach’s chair. “I can hardly do it.”

And that’s true.

It takes real effort to lift the fork open my mouth chew swallow breathe lift the fork open my mouth chew swallow breathe lift the fork . . . you get the picture.

 

And if there isn’t anyone to help by just being there, well, what’s the use?

So in the end I just eat a huge slice of Sara Lee pie.

“Before you get it, Zach,” I say. My voice is a whisper, but I can imagine him reaching for that pie, eating it from the tin, and Mom laughing. “Before you hog it all.”

 

I’m doing my homework at Zach’s desk when the phone rings.

 

(Right after, there were a lot of people who called.

And then they found out more and the calls stopped coming. People didn’t know what to say. At church they wouldn’t look any of us in the eye.)

 

It’s weird hearing the phone ring.

I stand, step into the hall, and I hear Mom answer,

“Hello?”

Her voice is soft as warm air. I can almost see her in my head, in her room in the dark, sitting on the edge of her bed, hair a bit messy from lying down.

“Yes, she lives here.”

She?

Me?

“Yes, I’ll get her.”

I stop walking.

She’ll get me? She’ll get me? That means, that means, she’ll have to call for me. I don’t move. Can’t move.

I can hear sounds coming from her room, but I don’t volunteer anything. Just wait. Wait. Wait.

She says nothing.

I’m still.

I hear her settle on her bed.

My stomach is thin as paper.

After a while the phone starts that loud beeping sound, and I turn and go back to Zach’s room, where I crawl under the desk and sit where his feet used to be.

 

“Jesus,” our pastor says, “is the answer.”

He says it to a room full of people. We sit in the front, just me and Daddy, almost alone . . . except for the Smiths at the far end of our pew. (People are afraid. Don’t look and it won’t happen to you.)

 

Taylor Curtis sits in the choir seats opposite me here in the congregation. Mom’s not here. She quit church months ago. Anyway, he’s seventeen and has blond hair and this big smile and eyes such a pale green that in black-and-white pictures he looks crazy.

 

No one knows this except Zach—I mean he knew it— but I think I loved Taylor before he decided he wanted to be with Heather Nelson.

 

“I’ll beat the crap out of him if you want me to,” Zach said. “Look at this.” He showed me his muscles. Flexed. Tried to make me laugh. “Long skinny muscles can pack a punch. Want me to bust his butt?” They were friends, my brother and Taylor. Good friends. On the football team together.

 

“WWJD?” I had said.

 

“Probably send Taylor’s soul into a herd of pigs that would leap off a cliff and drown in the sea below.” I had laughed then, though I’d been crying before.

 

Now Taylor looks at me and he lifts his eyebrows, something he did when we made out, like he’s asking if I want to meet him again.

 

No.

No. Way.

Even though kissing right now might make me feel better. For sure would make me feel less lonely.

 

“He’s right,” Daddy says in a whisper, his hands folded in his lap like he might be praying when he isn’t talking, and for a minute I think he means Taylor was right to like Heather (it didn’t last long). “Jesus is the answer.”

Oh.

“He is the answer.” And to hear him say it, why, I know, I know, he believes, even if he carries the whole Castle family belief on his own back.

 

Every day.

Every day is the same

is like the other

they run into one another

look alike.

I can’t tell a Monday from a Thursday

only the sadness links me to them.

 

In school, in English, that beautiful guy is back.

I get there early to watch for him. Hurry so I can see him walk into class. And when he strides into the room, his jeans hitched a little low, that shirt open so anyone can see his throat, I know why vampires want to bite necks. My face colors at this stupid thought.

 

He’s opposite of what I’m used to—of light-haired Taylor.

He’s dark-eyed, with nut-colored hair that’s trimmed short. He’s lean, not football hardened.

I can’t stop looking at him.

“Hey, Jesse.”

It’s Lauren Hopkins. She’s run in after him, linked her arm with his, and now she slides down the aisle with him. He glances right at me, just for a moment. Shows a bit of his teeth in an almost-smile. Then looks down at her.

“Hey,” he says, and I’m not sure if he’s talking to me or to her, and I say, “Hey,” back, but my voice is lost in the room of kids.

“You and I are on for tonight, right?” Lauren says. She’s so pretty. Dressed up, like she’s off for a job interview or something.

 

He shrugs. “Sure,” he says, and he’s glancing in my direction, but I look away before I can see if he sees me.

 

When Mrs. Pray starts teaching, I close my eyes and I think about Jesse walking into the room and in my mind it’s me following, holding on to him, and setting up the date.

 

Taylor waits for me after English, another week gone.

Like he did those few months before a weekend changed his mind. He’s standing there in the hall, leaning on the lockers, waiting.

 

I stop so fast that someone runs into me and then gives me a shove, saying, “Jesus,” at the same time. I stumble forward and Taylor steps to greet me. He says hello by lifting his chin and eyebrows, then he cuts through the crowded hallway and when I start walking away, he’s there, walking in time with me.

 

“What?” I say. And I wonder where that Jesse is.

“I thought,” Taylor says, then he stops me by grabbing hold of my elbow. “I thought I could pick you up tonight.

And we could do something.”

His hair’s combed forward and he smells good, clean. I can only watch his teeth when he speaks. They’re white.

He flosses, I know it.

I just look at his mouth and the whole time I’m thinking,

Kissing might help me, but I don’t say anything more and so he says, “Me and Heather. We’re over.”

 

I shrug. I know that. It didn’t last even a month. It just came at the wrong time, the leaving. I start walking again.

Jesse’s in my head, so pretty, and Zach’s there saying,

“Long skinny muscles can pack a punch.”

“We had fun,” Taylor says.

“You and Heather?” There are too many people in the hall.

“You know I mean you and me.”

I nod. “Sure we did,” I say. “Until my brother died.”

Someone slams his locker closed and I jump a little. It’s cold here in the hall, even with all these people.

 

Taylor’s all quiet and then he says, “It’s been a while now,” all sad.

I stop moving, but Taylor walks a step or two farther.

Then he comes back and stands there in front of me.

He’s not as tall as Jesse. And he’s not dark-haired.

Something moves in my chest.

I think of Mom and Daddy and my brother gone and Jesse who doesn’t know me so what does it matter and Lauren Hopkins and me alone, and I touch Taylor’s lips with one finger and his eyes close and I say, “Sure. Why not?”

 

The phone’s ringing when I get home.

I answer it this time. Mom’s car is gone anyway. Maybe she’s with Daddy, helping him look through photos. Ha!

 

“Hello?”

“May I speak to London.” It’s a girl and I almost recognize her voice.

“This is she.” I walk to my room, holding the house phone between my shoulder and cheek. Taylor will be here just in time for me to not eat dinner alone so I want to change my clothes.

“Well, this is Lili Fulton and I wanted to call and apologize if I hurt your feelings in the library. I didn’t know about your brother. I just heard you were homeschooled and so were we for two years until my mother was ready to pull her hair out and ours, too, and I’m always saying stupid things. That’s what my brothers say. But, London. I’m so, so sorry.”

 

I take a deep breath for her. She didn’t know about Zach? Maybe people aren’t talking still. Someone said something, though, because NOW she knows. Whatever. And then I say it. “Whatever.” It sounds really mean coming out of my mouth, but the word is there and I can’t scoop it back up so I don’t even try. WWJD?

 

What would Zach do?

WWZD?

“Do you forgive me, then?”

I choose a shirt from my closet. “Sure,” I say. “Yes.” My face has gone bloodred because of my rudeness. I can see it in the mirror on the door. I look away. “Sure, you’re forgiven.”

 

Lili lets out this little squeal. “Homeschoolers are the best. I know it’s weird, but I’ve always been best friends with homeschoolers. You should come over. And we can talk. Or cook something great, but not anything like cinnamon rolls, because my mom still hasn’t figured out the humidity. Can you?”

 

I slip off my jeans one handed and pull on leggings.

They’re black. Would Mom notice? And if she did, would she stop me from leaving the house? Would she actually talk to me? I check out my butt in the mirror. I avoid my face because this is me looking at my body in tight clothes in case a boy might want to see my butt too.

The whole thing is sick.

The whole thing is not me.

Why am I doing it?

“I can’t tonight.”

“Then tomorrow?”

“Sure,” I say again. And I don’t let myself think anything about the answer because I’ll cancel right then and there if I do.

 

“Tomorrow night,” she says, and as Lili says something else, I hang up.

 

When Zach had sex the first time with Rachel, he told me three days later.

He said, “London, I can’t believe it. I can’t. She was so soft.”

I screamed and covered my ears and he laughed, red-faced. Then he said,

“I love her, London.” And I could tell he loved Rachel as much as Daddy loves Jesus, when he said those words.

 

I know what you’re thinking. You’re thinking what brother would tell his little sister he had sex?

Mine would.

Zach would.

You travel all over the world where there are just the two of you, and you become best friends.

 

Best friends.

 

Taylor picks me up as the sun dips away from the sky. Daddy is still at his office.

Mom still hasn’t come home.

When I walk outside, Taylor looks at me all green-eyed and smiling. The color of the early evening sky reminds me there is a God. It’s just that beautiful. The color of a crayon before you swipe it across paper.

There is a God. There is a God. There is a God.

I believe that. I do.

 

But does He believe in me?

 

“So what do you want to do?” Taylor asks.

He looks so warm and good I can hardly stand it.

I climb into the car, fasten my seat belt, and wait for him to slide next to me in the driver’s seat. It smells like aftershave in here. I squeeze my eyes shut to the memory.

 

“I like your hair.”

I can’t answer.

“You okay, London?”

I shake my head.

Taylor was my brother’s best friend.

Not including me.

Not including Rachel.

Something is lodged in my throat. Aftershave maybe?

“Should we go back inside?” he says after a long minute.

I nod.

“Do you want me to go home?”

Yes. No. Yes. No. Yesnoyesnoyesnoyes.

I shrug.

“I can always come back.”

“Okay.” My voice isn’t a whisper. It’s less than that.

He’s out of the car because now I can’t move right.

He comes around the front, slouched over a bit, hands shoved in his pockets.

 

What’s wrong with me?

Who am I now?

How can one person leaving change you so much?

Taylor opens my door, unfastens my seat belt, takes my hand. He almost has to make me walk. I wonder for a second if I’ve forgotten how to live.

 

When we get up on the porch, Taylor puts his arms around me. He pulls me so close I can feel the thread count of his shirt on my cheekbone. “It’ll get better,” he says, then he opens the front door for me, and I go back inside.

 

It will get better.

People always say that.

Like it really will.

I lean against the door, eyes closed, that aftershave smell in my mouth.

 

Maybe he meant we will get better.

Me and him.

Not Mom and me.

Or just plain ol’ me.

But Taylor and me.

Like Before.

 

Weekends kill me.

No pun intended.

They are sad. Lonely. Heartbreaking.

Three of us left and still we’re all alone.

 

And what about this?

How did I end up responsible?

How?

 

I choose not to go to Lili’s house, and when she calls I ignore her.

 

What if my mother started to care again right this second?

Would I care if she cared?

Would I forgive her?

Yes.

Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes.

 

I’m weak and needy.

I need my mom.

I want my brother.

I don’t have either.

We need each other to be whole.

How can one person take so much with him?

It is not fair.

 

Monday morning, when I walk outside for Daddy to take me to school, I see Taylor. Fog sits close to the ground and Taylor stands next to his car, right there in front of my house, like Before. Like this is normal and we’ve never stopped seeing each other. It’s like my eyes are going bad, the way he kind of fades from view a bit as the fog thickens.

 

Daddy sees Taylor too, and I see Daddy pause, take a step, pause, take a step, and then he walks right over to Taylor and throws his arms around him. They’re the same height.

 

“How are you?” Daddy says, and Taylor says, “I’m okay.

Doing better.” Daddy claps Taylor on the back and they stand there a second and Taylor says, “I was going to take London to school. If you want. If that’s okay with you.” And Daddy says, “I’d love for you to. I’ve been so busy down at the church,” and Taylor nods and says, “We’ve heard the first book is doing pretty well. My mom told me to tell you we pray for your family every day.” Then Daddy nods too and says, “Thank you. London? Are you okay with Taylor helping me out?”

 

I stand in the doorway, half in, half out, feeling like a burden to my father, like the fog holds me back, books tucked to my chest, the loneliness and safety of my house just a step behind me. “Okay.” But, really, I’m not sure.

 

The grass is wet with dew and the tops of my shoes cool as I walk to the side of the road.

You can do this, I think.

I’m shaking.

What if the car has my brother’s smell still? As I head toward Taylor, I know it does. Taylor and Zach were like brothers.

 

And when Taylor opens the car door for me, I smell I am right.

 

The drive’s quiet.

Taylor taps the steering wheel, glancing at me every once in a while.

I look forward, breathing through my mouth.

“Sorry about the aftershave,” he says.

I sort of nod.

“It makes me feel better.”

When I glance at Taylor, I see he’s hurting too.

Zach’s circle was a big one—it touched lots of people. I know that with my brain, but my heart hasn’t let me see past me too far.

All of us are missing something, I realize as I sit there, the Florida morning sweeping past my window. Like, lots of people. Lots. Everyone knew Zach. Everyone loved him.

 

“How?” My voice feels unused and sounds that way too.

I don’t look at Taylor.

The sun is bright. Cold. I can’t wait for warmer weather.

Soon, right?

“It reminds me of him.” Taylor taps at the steering wheel again. Pulls the car to a halt at the stop sign. “We bought this stuff together.”

“I didn’t know that.”

I hear him swallow. “He told me you’d like it.”

Now I do look at Taylor. The road to school is busy.

We’re only a few blocks away.

“I do like it,” I say. “But it reminds me too much of him.”

We look at each other. The space between us feels so huge. Someone beeps and Taylor, he doesn’t move. Just sits there. Then reaches across the distance to touch my face with his fingertips.

 

He walks me to study hall. Drops me off at the door.

Waits for me to look him in the eyes. But I can’t. I give him a one-armed hug and feel his lips in my hair, feel one hand on my hip bone.

 

“I don’t need a ride home,” I say. Then I hurry into class, stumbling on a bit of sand, maybe, as I go through the door.

 

No one talks to me.

They don’t even look my way.

There’s a death bubble around me and I know it. It’s a thin film, one that only I can see through, and I have proof no one can see me, because they never look in my direction

and I refuse to look in theirs.

 

As soon as I sit down, I wish I were with Taylor again, riding to school or to the beach or to Tallahassee even, my eyes closed, smelling my brother all around me.

 

It’s that afternoon, in English class when Jesse walks past with Lauren on his arm, looking so fine I want to slug Lauren right in the face, it’s that afternoon that I start talking to Zach.

 

Just in my head.

Maybe my lips move.

But no one talks to me.

Except maybe Lili if I would let her.

And Taylor, with his Zach smell.

“Zach? Zach? How are you? Are you there?”

He doesn’t answer, and for a moment, sitting in that hard desk chair, watching Lauren kiss Jesse full on the mouth until Mrs. Pray tells her to stop or else, I miss my brother so much that I think I feel my heart is still split wide open.

 

I remember how Daddy said, “Jesus died of a broken heart.”

And I think I know how that feels.

 

Right after he was gone, when we knew he was really gone, and we all stood with Zach as he died a second time, I thought I’d crawl right out of my skin with grief.

 

(Mom was done talking to me by then, had already screamed at me there in the hospital until a nurse asked her to quiet down.)

 

At home, I’d run to my room and cried out to Jesus.

There would be no Lazarus miracle here. I knew that.

But

there was a pause in my grief

as I felt my brother edge his way into my room

like he had so many times before

and come up close to me.

I waited

quiet

afraid to move

like I might chase him away if I turned.

I could smell his aftershave, and I knew he was there to

let me know he was okay.

 

That visit? It was real. I swear it.

But that visit wasn’t enough.

I want more.

I want him back.

Why does death have to be so final?

I want to scream my question

pound at God’s door

demand an answer

ask Him to forgive me

if I’ve done something wrong

and then give my brother another chance.

 

Taylor tries three times to take me home that afternoon, but I cannot do it.

 

“I’ll walk,” I say.

“It’s too far, London.”

“Not really.”

We’re in the parking lot. Cars are everywhere. Driving away. Beeping at one another. The cool air smells of exhaust.

The noise makes me nervous, shaky. Maybe Mom’s silence has made me more sensitive.

Taylor puts his hand on my arm, and some kid leans out a window and hollers, “Just say yes!”

 

I panic. Want to run. Want to get away. And so I do. I rush right past Taylor, right in front of a car that almost hits me.

“Stupid bitch!” The passenger screams the words, but I don’t stop moving until I’m stopped by the crowd of students leaving C wing.

“London?” Taylor is close behind. I can hear him. He grabs the sleeve of my jacket. “Please.”

I see Lili then. She’s coming out of the double doors just down from where we are. She waves, her face breaking into a tentative smile.

I’d smile back if I could.

“She’s taking me home,” I tell Taylor. “I can’t ride with you.” I don’t even look at him. I start toward Lili, whose smile grows a bit bigger, though she looks behind herself

once.

Taylor grabs my arm. Turns me toward him. “What did I do, London? What?”

 

I feel a hand on my throat and realize with a start it’s my own. I glance up at him. “You smell too much like my brother.” Then I walk away, even when he says, “I can change that.”

 

“That guy is hot,” Lili says. “And he’s still watching you.”

I shrug. “I told him you’d take me home,” I say. “Just nod like you agree.”

 

“We can so do that,” Lili says, sweeping her dark hair over her shoulder with one hand then giving Taylor a thumbs-up sign. “Where do you live?”

 

“You don’t have to really,” I say. Someone bumps into me, knocking the notebooks from my hands. I don’t even have the energy to pick them up. I’m not even sure I can squat to gather these spilled things. I’m lucky that the crowd has thinned or I’d get trampled. Why am I so tired? All-the-time tired. Lili helps, grabs stuff up, hands it all to me. She’s the only girl in the whole school dressed in summer clothes. What will she wear when it warms up around here? Nothing?

 

“Let’s go.” She’s got on one big smile. Her face is so happy. I feel guilty about this, too, for ignoring her. How can she even forgive me when my mother can’t?

 

“No, I just . . .”

“You just nothing,” she says. “You just need a ride. Come with us.”

 

I’m too tired to argue. And I need a ride. This once.

Next time I’ll walk. Or ride with Taylor. Or maybe call my mom. Ha!

 

We head down the sidewalk, passing Taylor, who watches me, and to the sidewalk.

 

“Gosh, he’s hot,” Lili says, like it’s an apology. We cross the parking lot, to the far corner where an old van sits.

 

“The Beast,” Lili says. And then, “Once we were at the mall in Utah and we stopped in the parking lot and this old lady climbed up inside our van like we were a bus or something.” Lili laughs, and I nod, because what else should I do?

 

She slides the side door open. “Gross!” she says, and she’s so disgusted I’m scared there must be some monster in the back. “I’m telling Mom if you don’t get your mackdown sessions under control.” Lili looks at me and rolls her eyes. “We’re taking London home.”

 

So I’m all about clichéd crap, right? And yet I don’t see this coming. Jesse, moving from the backseat, wiping lip gloss from his mouth. Lauren, coming up to the front, Jesse letting her hang on to the back of his shirt, then grabbing her hand and helping her to sit in the passenger seat.

 

Of freaking course.

 

All the way to my house, Lili chatters.

I don’t have to give directions, because Lauren knows the way. We were friends for a long time. I liked her.

I really did. Lots of people do. Guys, too. She reaches across the open space between her and Jesse, running her hands through his hair every once in a while, pointing the way to go, resting her hand on his thigh.

 

“Stop touching my brother in public,” Lili says, and I can tell she is not happy. “He may not care, but I do. And so does my family.”

 

She looks at me and mouths, “I can’t stand that girl.” I almost smile.

 

The truth is, I still like Lauren. I would like her better if she cared. But Lili doesn’t need to know that.

 

“Your brother’s a big boy,” Lauren says. “We’re just having fun.”

Jesse grins at Lili.

“I live here,” I say as Lauren shouts, “Stop!”

The van screeches to a halt, and I open the door, taking the huge step to the ground. My house seems lonely sitting there, like its insides have spilled out. Can everyone tell?

 

“Thanks.” When I look up, Jesse stares at me and so does his sister. They’re practically twins. I can see that they are related, though I have no idea how I didn’t notice this before. “Thanks,” I say again.

 

Lili leaps out of the van, hitting the ground with a thump in the gravel. “Now that I know where you live, we can hang out,” she says. “We don’t live so far from here. Want us to pick you up on the way to school in the morning?”

 

I don’t say anything. Think how I should ride with Taylor because that’s the right thing but know that I won’t. Not now. Not right now.

 

“Taylor’s back, isn’t he?” Lauren says. “You know he dropped Heather.” When I look at her, the sun seems to have picked her out and shines there, making her hair fiery. “She cried for days.” No one says anything, and she speaks again. “That’s what I heard.”

 

I swallow. My skin tingles. “I’m not going with him. I mean, I did this morning, to save my dad the trip, but . . .” My voice dwindles away.

 

“You back to talking?” Lauren says.

I just look at her, and she shrugs.

“Oh, that hot guy’s named Taylor?” Lili says, and she breaks out in a smile brighter than the sunbeam Lauren sits in.

“So we’ll take you home and pick you up in the a.m. Is that good?” She turns to her brother. A cool breeze picks up and I can smell the ocean. “You okay with that, Jesse?”

 

“Sure.” He looks me right in the eye, and all the sudden I want to kiss him. Is Lauren’s lip gloss still on his lips? I want to find out. I almost take a step forward, there’s that kind of draw. It’s almost spiritual. Does he feel it too? He looks at me like he does. Then, without warning, Lili hugs me, and for a moment the places where her skin touches mine burn like ice.

 

“This is going to be so fun. We’ll pick you up about seven tomorrow morning.” She releases me.

 

I open my mouth to say okay but can only nod.

 

It’s been a long time. My mouth, it only sometimes works.

I don’t have that much to say

didn’t have anything to say when it all happened and now

with Lauren and Taylor and the others, maybe I’m used to being silent.

 

But this Jesse, this Lili, they’re new and they don’t have one bit of a clue what my life was.

What it is now.

So maybe I can start over a little on the inside.

 

I’m all alone.

When I step in the house, I feel the emptiness, feel me the only person breathing in here.

 

For a moment I think of my mother being here every day by herself

thinking of her dead son and the daughter she hates and doesn’t want to have anything to do with.

 

I walk into the foyer, which is dark as an artificial night, and know I wouldn’t want to sit around here either. I’d leave too.

 

There’s a mirror by the front door. I force myself to look at my reflection.

 

Am I so bad that my mother has to hate me?

Would I quit talking to me?

Was any of this my fault?

There’s not one answer on my face, only sadness.

I have to look away.

I flip on the light and start through the house, turning on switches and opening curtains and blinds.

 

The mother who hates me can close them all later. If she comes home.

 

She loved him best.

We all knew that.

I even heard Daddy telling her to love me better and she just laughed—saying she loved us both, but especially Zach.

 

I didn’t blame her.

I loved him best too.

People who saw the three or four of us together knew.

It was obvious to everyone he was the favorite.

And sometimes my brother used that to his advantage.

But mostly he didn’t. Because, except for a few small little itty-bitty tiny things, my brother was all right.

 

It was Lauren. Of course. Lauren told Lili everything. At least what she knew, which I’m sure isn’t accurate. That’s

how gossip is. Bits of truth sprinkled in with lots of crap.

And Jesse, too, I bet.

I bet he knows.

I bet she told him first.

They both know by now.

A weight settles on my shoulders. I can’t even stand up under it.

I have to go to bed.

So I do.

 

In bed I wonder.

Does she tell Jesse that she wanted my brother bad?

Does she confess he never was that interested in her?

That once he found Rachel, he never looked back at Lauren?

Does she tell them that one time, when she spent the night with me, my dad caught her sneaking into Zach’s room, late?

Does she tell them how we laughed together?

Does she tell them that she was an expert at teaching someone how to put on makeup?

Does she say that we were best friends. Best. Before?

Does she say how I called her after he died?

Does she whisper how neither of us could talk?

Does she tell them that Zach loved Rachel?

 

And that Rachel.

That Rachel was something else.

 

At first, I was like Lili. Jealous when Zach found Rachel.

But he so totally fell for her, and she didn’t mind sharing their time with me, too, so I totally fell for her. I mean, if

you could have seen Zach with her.

My Taylor (he was my Taylor then) was like, “Okay. Wow.

That girl is smoking, London.”

I punched him a good one for that. “How’d your brother manage to catch her?”

Mom and Daddy hated that she didn’t believe in the same God we did.

 

But Zach? He just grinned.

Took her hand at the table, kissed her once full on the mouth, right in front of Daddy, who looked away and would have crossed himself if he’d been Catholic.

Who could know everything then? Besides God?

Who?

 

Lying in bed all dressed and on top of the covers, I hear Mom come home. She’s moving around, muttering, mad, closing the blinds. Closing the curtains. Snapping off lights too, I expect.

 

She has to know I’m here.

She has to know I’m the only one who would go against her wishes and let the light in.

 

Well, there’s light when she drives, isn’t there? Can she block the sun out, with her sunglasses?

 

She has to know I’m here. She has to see my book bag on the table. She has to know I’m in my room. Where else would I be?

I know she knows. I know it.

But she doesn’t come looking. Just mutters and closes curtains and blinds.

 

How long would I be dead before she found me?

 

She’s not coming in my room.

I know she’s not going to look in here.

What’s so different about today?

Light in the house?

Still, I wait for her. And when she doesn’t come to tell me hello after twenty minutes, I turn away from the door and pretend to sleep for no one.

 

Here’s what I remember best about Mom. My old mom.

My Before mom.

Afternoon snacks when we came home from school.

Dancing in the living room with my girlfriends and me.

Teaching me the hard parts of speech, all that grammar I didn’t think was important.

 

She would do anything for anyone. She turned the car around to give homeless people money. She combed lice out of little kids’ hair. She helped mothers hang mosquito netting. She made people dinner when someone they loved died.

 

But when Zach died,

Mom didn’t accept one meal,

not one visitor,

not even me.

 

She hasn’t come in my room, not once, since my brother passed. Not even to peek in to see if I’m still breathing.

I check on her, though.

 

I only go to school because they make me. Mom is so done with homeschooling.

 

When Daddy comes home, late, late, Mom is already in bed.

 

I’ve gotten up. Done my homework. Made a sandwich.

Watched a little TV. Talked to myself in the shower.

Picked out what I’m wearing to school. Whispered words to Zach.

 

“You see how you left me? You see how you left me, big brother?”

My eyes burn, but I don’t cry.

Some late-night show is on and I should have been in bed long ago, but I want to hear someone’s real voice.

The voice of someone who loves me (is there anyone?).

Not just Jay Leno or Jimmy Fallon.

“Want some hot chocolate, Daddy?” I ask him as soon as he comes in the house.

I can see the tired all around his eyes.

I can see him looking for Mom but acting like he’s not.

I can see that he’s sadder than he was yesterday. There’s pain in his voice.

 

Is he missing my brother a little more tonight?

Or my mother?

“Do you, Daddy?” I ask.

The room is dark around us, just a soft light that falls from the family room, where I sat watching TV.

 

Daddy hesitates, then nods and says, “Yes, London. I love it when you make me hot chocolate.”

 

“We used to do that a lot together, remember?” I say this as I head for the kitchen. I pull out milk and cream and a Hershey’s chocolate bar and vanilla and sugar.

Mom taught me this recipe, I think, warming the cream and milk and breaking the chocolate bar into bits. I remember me standing close by her side. Her letting me use the whisk to stir the drink. Her laughing at my brother as he tried to steal chocolate. All of us sitting together. How old were we? How long ago was that? It seems ages and ages.

I pile marshmallows into two cups.

I can hear my father speaking to Mom. His voice is low and hers is soft, chocolaty. I almost stop moving. Will she drink with us? I open the cabinet, just in case. Reach for another cup. My fingers tremble.

 

“We about ready?” Daddy says. He stands in the doorway, alone.

“Yes,” I say, and pour the thick hot chocolate into two matching cups.

 

I don’t even dream.

Maybe I should drink hot chocolate more often.

 

Some days, like this morning, I walk to Zach’s car (I have the keys now. Daddy gave them to me. But I’m afraid to drive. I’ll do it soon. I’m sure I will.), where it’s parked at the curb. With the morning sun just right, I can sort of see him in there. If I squint.

If I squint, I can see him, head tilted, laughing. Taylor’s in the backseat, Rachel, in the front. I should be next to Taylor, but I have to close my eyes awful tight to see that.

When I get up close, there’s dew that has settled all over the car. Someone has written MISS YOU in big block letters on the window. I can see a handprint on the hood, where the someone leaned, and streaks where the water ran.

For a moment I wonder if I did that. Did I sleepwalk out here and write those words? I’m pretty sure I didn’t.

So who did?

Does it matter?

I close my eyes tight.

I feel this bit of calm, knowing that someone crept here in the night and that that person misses my brother too.

 

It’s cold out here, and my robe and pj’s aren’t enough to keep me warm. The sun is just waking, just breaking the horizon, slipping through the orange grove. I should have worn my slippers.

I clutch the keys. Imagine getting in Zach’s car, even in my nightclothes, and maybe following my mother wherever it is she goes. I know I won’t, but I like the thought of bravery. Maybe today will be a good day. Maybe someone new will talk to me. Maybe the person who wrote on Zach’s car.

When I open my eyes, a bit of fog is moving in and the smell of trees gets caught in the back of my throat. Right near those words written for my brother.

 

When the van arrives, I run outside before Daddy can ask me where Taylor is. A bit of me feels sick that maybe he’ll come here to pick me up. Will knock on the door for me. I think this as I run through the grass. The morning is cold, the sky still a bit gray.

Lili rolls down her window and says, “We have like eight minutes before Queen Suck Face gets in the car.”

“Oh,” I say. “Okay.” I heave open the back door, squeeze in without opening it all the way.

Lili’s been in the front, but she plops on the bench seat next to where I sit down. My books are between us.

She’s pulled her hair back with a hair band I bet her mom wore. It’s leather with tiny painted flowers.

“There,” Lili says. “On to Queen Suck Face, driver.” She gives her brother a nod, and Jesse puts the van in gear.

“Lauren’s not that bad,” I say, but I’m not so sure who she is now. I’m not sure who I am.

“See,” Jesse says. “London says she’s not so bad.” He glances at me in the rearview mirror.

I have to look away. He seems so different than . . . than what? “I haven’t really talked to her in a while though.

Your sister might be right.”

“No, you’ll see,” Lili says, settling the seat belt around herself. Over her shoulder, out the window, is the orange grove we were going to do something with. The leaves are so green this morning.

“She can’t keep her lips or hands to herself. I expect her to pull his clothes off in study hall.”

“Okaaay,” Jesse says. From where I sit I see the side of his face go pink. For some reason, right at that moment, I think I fall in love with him. He’s so beautiful and that shy thing is way appealing.

What? I am crazy. Have I gone crazy with all life and God have handed me? You can’t fall in love, just like that, because some boy is gorgy and shy. My pulse quickens.

“She’s . . .” I clear my throat and start again. “Lauren has always been like that. She’s”—I pause—“physical.”

Lili mumbles something not so nice under her breath, and I wonder if Zach would have spent more time with Lauren if Rachel hadn’t found him.

Lili and Jesse go back and forth with each other, and I only hear the sound of their voices, not their words.

Then this thought strikes me. If . . .

If Lauren had been his girlfriend, Zach might still be alive.

 

Zach? I mouth, staring out the window looking at nothing. Zach?

Can you hear me?

Do you see me in this van?

Do you know I miss you?

Do you miss me?

 

By the time we get to school, I understand what Lili means.

Lauren is Queen Suck Face.

(Did she do that tongue thing with Zach? Why doesn’t she care that we’re in the van with her? Why does he kiss her back, stopping only when Lili hollers for them to?)

Lili gets out of the van in the school parking lot. When I climb out behind her, I can see she is madder than a hill of disturbed fire ants. Her face has two red splotches on the cheekbones and she grinds her teeth. Her hands are parked on her hips.

“Uh-oh,” Lauren says, stepping to the ground in a pretty way. She adjusts her short skirt. “Little sister is mad.” I know her well enough to see she’s nervous. And Jesse must know Lili pretty well, because he’s hurried to our side of the van.

“Keep your hands off my brother when I can and can’t see you, Lauren.” All around us cars are pulling into the parking lot. There’s a smell of gas and cold and the sound of people getting ready to face a new day in school. Lili seems to hear none of it. “I mean it, Lauren.

He’s not going to have sex with you, and he’s not going

to marry you either. He has a girlfriend back home, and we won’t be here in Florida forever. Jesse, you know that.” She pokes him hard in the chest, and her backpack slides down to her elbow.

“I broke up with Shelly before we left,” Jesse says.

He looks at his sister, wearing a bit of a smile—an I care

smile—and his eyes are dark brown. So dark I almost can’t see the pupil. All the sudden he leans forward and puts his arms tight around his sister. “I won’t do anything stupid,” he says in this voice that melts me. Or is that the morning sun? Or a memory of Zach hugging me this same way? “We’re just having fun.”

Zach.

Oh, Zach.

I turn and hurry away.

 

They say time heals.

When?

It’s been months now and I see my brother in everything.

 

Instead of going to class, I hide in the library back in a corner where the school librarian caught Jason Easton smoking weed. I stay there, heart burning, wishing my brother would come back and hold me. Just one more time. That’s all I’d need. Just one more.

Or—

I can almost not think it—

my mom.

I’d love a hug from my mother.

After a few bells ring, I make my way out of the library.

Taylor will hug me. And I think I know what class he has, too.

 

The hall’s empty.

The floor reflects the overhead lights, and as I pass classroom doors, I can hear the buzz of students’ voices or teachers speaking.

It smells weird in here. Like dirty shoes or Fritos.

“Zach,” I say. “It could be easier.”

But is that true? I’m not so sure.

If my mother loved me still, would this horrible time in my life be better?

I would still ache, right?

I would still miss him.

It would still feel as though part of me left when we buried him, right?

And then I know: It would be easier. Because of Daddy.

He doesn’t do it often, but if he just touches my shoulder, I feel like I’m not alone.

Without meaning to, I’m running.

Just a touch.

 

I tap on the window. Faces turn toward me. But not Taylor. He’s writing something from the board into his notebook.

The chair next to his is empty. Zach’s chair. My brother’s chair.

They retired his football jersey.

Did they retire his chair, too?

He’s everywhere but here.

Wait, that doesn’t make sense.

I tap on the glass again, and Mr. Crowe strides over and swings the door open. “Yes, London?” How does he know my name?

I’m mute.

Taylor glances up. His face changes when he sees me, and he’s on his feet and walking to the door. No one says anything. Do they all know? They all must know.

Everyone knows how it happened but me.

Wait, I know the how, not the why.

Wait again, I do know the why. . . .

I’m shaking.

 

Taylor brushes past Mr. Crowe.

“Hey,” he says. His hair looks so blond.

“I miss him,” I say before the door even closes behind Mr. Crowe, who has left us here. “And there’s no one to tell.”

“You can tell me.”

 

He folds me close, pulls me right up to his chest. We stand there and I want to cry. I want to cry but I can’t.

Before,

when Zach was alive

and then gone

gone

I cried so long so hard so much that I couldn’t breathe through my nose and my eyes were almost swollen shut.

Now there is nothing for Zach but my broken self and not a thing to repair it.

 

In the car Taylor says, “Talk.”

And so I do, while he drives.

I start when we were little:

how Zach would babysit me and squeeze my guts out when he held me on his lap,

how he found me when I went to sleep in a closet and everyone thought I was lost,

how once, when I was sick, he gave me his very favorite Matchbox car (a big deal, seeing we were in Africa at the time and hadn’t brought that much from the States).

I tell everything I can think of.

My mouth dries out. My eyes sting. Taylor drives and drives.

“Remember what a bad surfer he was?”

“Remember how he couldn’t sing at all?”

“Remember how he loved Rachel?”

The remembers go on until my head aches.

We drive along the beach. There aren’t that many birds, and the water looks like oil on the sand as it rolls up in waves. Oil with bits of lace.

There are some things I don’t say.

It’s not all good.

No one is all good.

His unhappiness, I mean.

Taylor knows, Taylor knows, must remember, though he never says anything about it.

 

After the beach, Taylor and I drive to his house. No one’s home.

I know where his room is and go there. Through the front room, down the hall on the left, past two doors (the bathroom, a closet).

I stand in the doorway. It’s dark in here. The shade’s pulled. A crayon width of light shows around the window covering.

(Has his mother caught something from my mom?)

Taylor snaps on the light.

His room is so neat.

Fully clothed, I climb into his bed, pulling the covers to my neck, turn my back on him, adjust his pillow under my head.

He’s quiet.

On the wall nearest his bed is a picture of Zach on the football field, Taylor and a few of the other players gathered close. They won that game. I snapped the shot of the few of them, and Taylor printed it because, he said, “I can see a bit of your finger, London.”

He was so corny.

Is he still?

After a moment he flips off the light and the room goes gray. I hear Taylor pad across the carpet. He pushes me over a bit, then lies on top of the blanket and wraps his arm around me. I can feel his breath in my hair. His knees are bent behind mine. He’s pressed close. Does my hair stink?

“I miss him too,” he says. He pulls in a big gulp of air and is quiet.

 

I jerk awake when Mrs. Curtis says, “Who the hell are you in bed with, Taylor?”

I feel him kick awake. He sits up, fast. “It’s just . . . ,” he says, and his voice is deeper than normal. “Mom? What are you doing here?” He gets up.

“I live here,” she says. “And I’m home from work.” She’s mad.

For some reason I can’t quite move. I’ve slept so hard I’ve drooled on Taylor’s pillow. I smear my hand on the pillowcase, then try to flip it over.

“Is that you, London?”

“Yes.” I try to get out from under the covers, but I’m stuck.

Mrs. Curtis is across the room in a few strides. She takes my face in her hands. Her palms are so cool I close my eyes. “Hey there, girlie,” she says. “I’ve missed you.” She untucks me, pulls me to my feet, and hugs me so close I think I can stand here forever in her arms.

 

When I get home that night, Daddy waits, arms crossed over his chest. He stands on the porch, right by the swing that I once flipped out the back of when Zach pushed me too high. I was fourteen. He laughed for hours over that. We hadn’t been in New Smyrna but a few days.

Taylor takes my fingers in his hand. “We’re still here, London,” he says. “We’ve been trying to tell you so.” He clears his throat. Looks at our hands. “I want to be with you.”

“Heather?” I say. “What about Heather?”

He shakes his head. “No.”

No. Okay, no.

“I lost so much,” I say. It feels like the ghost of my brother crowds the front seat of the car. My father stands on the porch, waiting.

My father hasn’t waited . . . “He hasn’t waited for me in months.”

Taylor says nothing.

“My mom, she doesn’t really talk much anymore.” I can’t believe those words come out of my mouth. I’m embarrassed by them. The deal is, I want to say, “Doesn’t talk much to me anymore,” but my head won’t let my mouth admit that fact.

Taylor brings my fingers to his lips. He talks over them.

“Just remember, I’m here, okay? I can keep waiting.”

 

As I walk up to Daddy, I can see he’s not waiting for me.

Not really. Yes, he pats me on the back as I pass him, but he doesn’t follow me into the house.

“You hear from your mom, London?”

I stop, my hand on the doorknob, backpack hanging from a shoulder. An almost warm breeze rushes past, ruffles my hair, moves on. Tonight’s almost comfortable. And the sky threatens a late rain maybe. I glance back at my father, hoping he’ll look me in the eye. Lightning splits the distant horizon. He stares away.

“What do you mean?” He knows she doesn’t speak to me. I’ve heard him asking her to. I’ve heard her silence at his request.

“She hasn’t come home today.”

Okay. Okay then. “Where did she go?”

He doesn’t answer, and I turn away. I’m numb inside. I’m ice. I’m raw. I’m cruel, unkind, alone, alone,

alone.

 

When the best part of a family dies, everyone falls apart.

 

I close the front door with a soft click.

How long will he stand out there?

Will he come in and check on me?

Will he remember I’m inside?

Where has she gone?

Did she go alone?

Does she miss us?

When I close my eyes here in the foyer, I see Mom’s face in the hospital.

She was so mad. So mad.

At me.

Like I had killed him.

And maybe I did.

Maybe I did.

 

In slow motion I make my way down the hall to Zach’s room.

Mom hasn’t changed a thing about it. It’s exactly as it was.

The broken door hinges

splintered wood

marks on the white paint.

His clothes are on the floor. The covers on his bed are still messed up, like he left them that morning. You can almost see where he may have put his head on his pillow.

Here’s the thing about life.

It twists away.

It feels right-perfect—and then it makes a wild turn worse than a roller coaster.

And how can anyone expect that?

I haven’t seen Daddy in here. Not since a week or two after.

But I have seen Mom touching his bed.

It’s so private, so mommy-ish, the way she touches where he’d slept, that I never let her know that I’ve seen her do this. She’d see it as an intrusion. Maybe she’d slap at me again. Maybe she’d scream her sorrow at me again.

Instead, when I catch her

I am quiet

watchful.

I see her kneel sometimes, rest her head on his pillow, spread her arms wide in the place he slept.

Sometimes her lips move, and I know she’s talking to him. You know, like I do. The whole thing, it’s like she’s waiting for him to come back

home.

 

I want to say, “We’re all waiting, Mom.”

I want to shout it at her.

Shake her. Make her see make her see me.

I want to say,

“No one wanted this.”

“I miss him too.”

“Look! at! me!”

But Mom is gone. Not just gone in the car, but gone gone gone.

 

If anything like this ever happens to me again anything

like

this

And I am the mom

And if there are other kids

I swear to God in Heaven that I will pull all who are left close, and

never

let them

go.

I won’t leave one out.

 

Lili calls right after I’ve finished my homework. It’s like she somehow knows I’ve closed that last book, have just rested my forehead on the cover.

“London?” she says.

“Hey, Lili.” My head’s still down. The second L in CALCULUS is huge and blue. An ugly blue, at that.

“It’s Friday night,” she says.

“Yes.”

“Are you going out with that really hot guy I saw you with the other afternoon?”

“No,” I say. “Taylor and I aren’t dating.” I just slept in his bed all day, him so close I could feel his heart beat.

“Well, we do movies as a family on Friday nights. Want to come over?”

I swallow. Twice. “I’m not part of the family.”

She laughs. She has a nice laugh. A laugh that means it.

“We can have friends over,” she says. “We’ll come get you. If you want. Will your mom let you?”

You mean the mom who hasn’t wandered in yet? The mom I haven’t had a conversation with in months? The mom who hates me? “She won’t care.” Truer words haven’t been spoken in this house.

“You want to then? We’re watching this old movie called

Blast from the Past. Have you seen it? It’s hilarious.”

“Sure,” I say, just like that, because now Daddy is gone, driving around looking for Mom, and the house is so quiet, so quiet, that I could stay here, yes, I could, or I could call Taylor or I could try to sleep but I am way awake and Lili has been trying so hard to be my friend and I still remember what is was like to be the new kid—twice at the same school. “Sure. Yes. I haven’t seen the movie, but I’d like to.”

 

“We’ll be by in a few,” she says. “See ya!”

 

Lauren isn’t with them.

Lili drives, almost running into the deep ditch next to the road when she pulls up.

“In Utah we have curbs.” She shouts out her brother’s window and does that cute laugh.

“I’ve been praying she won’t kill us,” Jesse says.

“Praying doesn’t keep people alive.” The words are out of my mouth before I can stop them.

Jesse looks at me wide-eyed. Surprised.

If I knew how to chuckle, I would. Ease the discomfort.

He opens his car door, leaps out, and then opens the van door for me.

“Wow, thanks,” I say. Even after my faithless comment, he’s done something kind. Something my daddy used to do for my mom.

He takes my elbow. Holds me back. Lili watches from the driver’s seat.

“Don’t be sad, London,” he whispers to me, then helps me into the van. He smells so good.

 

Don’t be sad, London. I think it over and over. Don’t be

sad.

 

Lili’s house is the opposite of mine.

Piled up with things, things all over, like people and voices and toys and shoes taken off right here and just left.

This is sensory overload.

Mr. and Mrs. Fulton in the family room. Two more boys—who look just like little Jesses—on the sofa. The one in Pull-Ups can’t be more than three. He stares at me with eyes like dark chocolates. His bangs have been cut too short.

“I’m sitting with you,” he whispers. Then he stands and takes my hand. Something slivery stabs at my heart.

I’m not sure what he’s been eating, but it’s still on his palm.

His mom and dad laugh like this is the funniest thing they’ve seen all day.

“Nathan likes you,” Mrs. Fulton says in a voice that sounds just like Lili.

(Do I sound like my mother?)

Mr. Fulton gets out of his La-Z-Boy, shakes my free hand—the wrong one—because Nathan holds tight to the other. “He knows what he likes.”

What can I say to that? Okay? I nod.

Mrs. Fulton says, “Natey, no. She’s here to visit Lili.”

The room is all overfilled with noise. Steve (“Hey guess what? I’m nine tomorrow!”) walks across the sofa till he’s right in the middle, then plops down.

“Mom,” Lili says. She makes the word two syllables. I remember when I used to do that.

 

“They’re okay,” I say. “I like little kids.”

“I’m not that little,” Steve says.

“Right,” I say.

Where is Jesse? I guess he’s not watching the movie with us. My heart sinks.

Lili sits, pats the sofa next to her, and I ease myself down.

This family is too much.

This family is my family not that long ago.

This was my family, smaller, yes, but together.

Laughing. Snuggled close.

Alive.

 

The lights are out, the opening credits rolling, when Jesse comes in with three bowls of popcorn, which he hands out to his parents, Steve, and me. He picks Natey up, then plops down close, settling his little brother in his lap.

“Off the phone with Queen Suck Face?” Lili fake whispers at him.

“I wasn’t talking to her,” Jesse says.

When I glance at him, he’s looking at me. In the dark he looks so familiar, so comfortable that I think maybe I have known him all my life.

 

I sort of watch the movie.

But mostly I feel Jesse so close, and Lili right there, and Steve and Natey and Mr. and Mrs. Fulton. Everyone breathing. Everyone smashed together and warm.

It’s like we are all on the sofa, all seven of us.

Squished side by side.

All the sudden the TV screen goes a little dark and no one notices. No one but me.

“Hey,” I say, and Jesse moves closer. His face near mine.

“What, London? Ya need something?”

Natey is asleep, his little hand loose in mine.

“The TV,” I say. But I almost can’t hear my words. There’s this buzzing in my ears, and I want to run, RUN!

 

Then Jesse does this weird thing.

He slips his arm around my shoulders, pulls me closer to him.

I can hear his breathing, and I match mine to his.

“Queen Suck Face isn’t going to like that,” Lili says. On the darkening screen Brendan Fraser dances.

“You all right, London?” Jesse asks.

But I’ve closed my eyes by now, and I’m just concentrating on Jesse’s breath going in and out until I’m okay.

 

“You better?” he says near the end of the movie. He moved his arm when my eyes cleared and I could see the movie again. How did he know?

I nod. “Yes. Yes.” I nod again.

“I thought we were going to lose you.”

Around us the whole room is quiet. Both boys are asleep. So’s Mr. Fulton.

“I’m not sure what happened.”

Mrs. Fulton moves on light feet, pulling the boys up, both at once, to tuck them into bed. “Don’t go anywhere other than to and from London’s home,” she says to Lili and Jesse.

Then she says, “I am so glad you’re here, London. Really.”

She means it. I can hear she means it.

“Can you spend the night?” Lili says. She’s on her knees, looking at me. She has the best hair. “Would your parents let you? I have something you can sleep in. Some kind of jammies. We can talk all night.”

How can she be so nice when I can hardly make a word come out of my mouth?

“Give her a chance to answer, Lili,” Jesse says. He moves away and my arm, I notice, goes cold. “I gotta go call Queen Suck Face.”

“Make me vomit, why don’t you,” Lili says. She rolls her eyes. “What do you say? Do you want to?”

“Sure.” And I do. I take a deep breath and try to shake off this ever present feeling of grief. I can feel it dislodge a bit. Move some, from my shoulders.

“Oh, goodie!”

Goodie?

“Call your mom and see if it’s okay.”

I clear my throat. “I don’t have to,” I say. “She’ll be all right with it.”

 

We talk about:

* Boys at school

* Girls at school

* Queen Suck Face

* Utah

* Africa (and other family travels)

* How long ago we stopped traveling and settled down

Then, just like that, Lili is sound asleep.

“Lili?”

I’m on a pallet next to her bed. Her arm hangs down, creamy white, fingers relaxed. Her pretty face is almost hanging off the bed too, her mouth a little bit open.

“Lili?”

There’s no sound from her but deep, slow breathing.

I lie on my back, look at the ceiling that seems clouded with the darkness.

Down the hall I can hear Jesse still talking to Queen Suck . . . I mean Lauren, my used-to-be best friend. I can’t hear his words, and all the sudden I want to.

Should I?

Should I go listen in on him?

My heart pounds at the thought. I haven’t done anything daring like this in so long. Well, not including sleeping all day with Taylor. But that doesn’t count because it wasn’t planned. My lips tingle.

I get up on my knees.

What’s my body doing? I haven’t decided to listen, and yet, here I am getting up like I’ve made a plan. Like I’m

Lauren. How embarrassing!

But it’s my body that’s doing the decision making.

I crawl toward the door.

Look back at Lili, who sleeps on, her face like an angel’s, in the dark room.

 

Outside the door, I stand up. Well, sort of stand up. I’m crouched over but I’m off my knees. My heart thumps.

My mouth has gone dry. Do I have toothpaste on my lips? Why do I feel so giddy?

Jesse’s voice is low and I can’t make out the words still.

In fact, I have no idea where he is.

Down the hall I go, crouched over like I have a spine problem. I cover my mouth with my hand. I’m grinning.

Grinning.

There! He’s there, behind this closed door. I can hear him, voice soft, deep from the late hour maybe? He speaks only a few words every now and then. A sigh from the bed. Maybe he’s turning over. For some reason I think of French toast, me flipping it over on the greased skillet for Zach and him saying, “I could eat your French toast all day, London,” and me saying back, “I’m not making it for you all day, Zacheus.” I was mad that day. Why was I mad?

I don’t hear anything about me, though I listen. I’m so dumb! Why would Jesse and Lauren talk about me? Ha! They’ve probably talked about sex. Or making out. Or how good-looking Jesse is.

It’s quiet for a long moment, and I run my hand on the door. It’s cool to the touch. Smooth. I imagine myself opening it, sliding into the room, sitting beside Jesse, kissing him right as he says Lauren’s name.

Across the hall, one of the Fultons makes a sound. Are they getting up? And just like that, Jesse’s door opens.

He looks startled, then he smiles down at me.

“What are you doing here, London?” He’s so pretty it takes my breath away. Or maybe I’m having some kind of attack again. The truth is, I can’t see him that well, because a light is on behind him. He’s backlit. Glowy.

 

“I’m just. I. I can’t,” I say.

“You were listening.”

I shake my head. “No. Not really.” My face burns. “Lili’s asleep and . . .”

He leans against the doorjamb. He’s not wearing a shirt, and his chest looks so smooth I have the urge to run my hand across his skin, maybe rest my cheek on his . . .

“What are you looking at?”

“Huh? I’m not looking at . . .”

“I saw you.”

Is he kidding? I think he’s kidding. I try to smile, but my lips shake. “I better go back to bed.” I fake a yawn. I turn, walk back, hands sweating, knowing, knowing that he watches me the whole way to his sister’s room.

 

I dream about Jesus.

He’s on a hill—a big hill—like a mountain or something.

And just like that, there’s Zach. My brother. The two of them stand together, and Jesus smiles like nothing else.

Like He’s so glad that Zach’s with Him. It’s like they’re pals or something.

When I wake up, the sun is just starting to rise. I can see the morning at the window, peering in.

I lie still. I want to keep this feeling, this Zach feeling, this Jesus feeling, with me. Things seem so . . . I don’t know . . . so right.

I go back to sleep before the sensation slips away, and I don’t dream again.

 

“Morning, London,” Jesse says when I walk into the dining room with Lili. He has this funny look on his face, like he’s daring me to confess something. Confess my infatuation? I want to walk over and kiss him a good one, but instead I ignore him.

“You sleep good?”

“Did you sleep well,” Mrs. Fulton says. “Well, Jesse. Did you, London?” She mutters to herself, “We have got to get a pull-out bed for guests.”

“Sure,” I say. I glance at Mrs. Fulton. Her back is to me as she pours huge bowls of Cap’n Crunch for her little boys. I stick my tongue out at Jesse. He just looks at me, waiting. But Natey sees what I do and gasps. He lets out a squeal of laughter along with, “London did something very naughty, Mommy. Very naughty.”

“What’s that, baby?” Lili says. She picks Natey up and tickles at him.

I have to look away.

“She sticked her tongue at Jesse,” he says.

“Yeah, Mom,” Jesse says, “London sticked her tongue out at me.”

 

I’m horrified. “You’re acting ugly,” I somehow manage to say.

 

“Am I?”

I nod. I feel my face flame.

“How?”

I have no answer.

Lili watches us. “Keep flirting,” she says. “You both know how I feel about Queen Suck Face.”

 

There’s this photo of me with Zach.

I’m newly born and he’s just over a year old.

He’s got me crunched up to his little self, and he laughs as I kiss his face.

It’s not a real kiss, of course, just a baby kiss.

I loved him from the moment I was born until the moment he died.

I love him still.

 

I know I should go home. You don’t spend the night with someone—last-minute invited—and then stay all day on Saturday. Moms don’t like that.

Still, I have to make myself leave.

“I can walk,” I tell Lili after breakfast as she hurries to get ready. She has a dance class that she’s off to. Dance?

Who does that? Normal people?

I am so not normal anymore.

Was I ever? I think so.

“Jesse will take you home after he drops me off,” she says. She’s brushing all that gorgy dark hair. She smiles at me in the mirror. “Do you like him?”

I’m holding this unicorn of hers. It’s small, has a golden horn and tiny golden hooves. I don’t expect her question. “Who?”

She sets the brush down, then takes me by the shoulders. Her room is a mismatch of colors that somehow work together.

“You know,” she says. “My brother.” Her voice is full of italics.

“Natey and Steve are just too young for me,” I say. I can hear them in the other room. It’s the first time I’ve made a joke since Zach died. Wow. It feels good to say that silly thing.

But it also feels like I’m betraying him. My brother gone too soon.

My knees go a little weak, and I have to sit down on the edge of her bed. The blankets from my pallet are all folded. Resting.

 

“You know who I mean, silly,” she says. She has a nice smile.

 

I swallow. “I like him fine.”

“Would you date him?” She still holds my shoulders, even though I’m rag-doll sitting now.

I give a weak shrug. “He’s not interested.”

Lili turns back to the mirror, pulls her hair into a loose ponytail. “I sure would like for him to be.” She’s muttering. Bothered. “I do not like Queen Suck Face.”

“Oh really?” Another joke.

Again Lili turns to me. She’s dead serious. “She was all

over him that very first day we came to school. Like all.”

I nod because I’m not sure what to do or say. At last I get out the words, “He’s pretty damn hot.”

 

“Sure,” Lili says, wrinkling her nose. “Sure he is.” Then, “Ready?”

 

I nod.

I want to say, “I’d be all over him too.” But I don’t. I just follow her out the door.

 

Lili gives me this face/look when the three of us get in the van. It’s like a wink without the wink.

“Take London home after you drop me off,” she says.

She pats my hands that I’ve folded in my lap.

“You are such a weirdo,” Jesse says. He glances at us in the rearview mirror. “My little sister is weird,” he says to me. Then he zooms off toward I-4.

 

Lili starts talking and doesn’t stop until we’ve pulled into the Xtreme Dance Studio. A guy with auburn-colored hair leans against the wall, but when he sees our van, he puts this smile on his face. He saunters toward the parking lot and the stall where we pull in. And I’m not kidding about saunter. He really does.

“Oh great,” Jesse says. “Little Lord Fauntleroy’s waiting for you.”

 

“Jeffrey’s a gentleman,” Lili says, and she looks at me and raises her eyebrows. “That’s Jeffrey O’Rourke. He can really move. And he hasn’t groped me even once though I want him to.”

“I’ll break his face if he gropes you,” Jesse says, and I can tell he means it.

 

“I’m sure you will,” Lili says. She pops out of the van, leans in the window. “I’m off to be groped.” Then she skips over to Jeffrey, her dance bag swinging from her arm. He tucks his hands in his pockets and rocks back on his heels, smiling like all get-out.

 

“Right.” Jesse throws the van in reverse. “I’ll be back for you,” he says to Lili, who turns, waves at me, calling, “See you later. Thanks for the sleepover. Love you, London!”

 

Love you, London!

Love you!

 

“Come up front,” Jesse says.

I can’t move. Love you, London.

He looks at me over his shoulder.

“Okay.” And just like that, I can’t get the image of him shirtless out of my brain either. I don’t look at his face as I move forward, fasten my seat belt.

Love you, London.

We’re quiet for a few miles.

I stare out the wide-open window, the wind blowing in.

I’m a little cold, and I roll it closed.

Don’t look at him, I think.

Remember Taylor, so blond. So tender to me.

Think of Zach with Rachel.

They’re so connected.

Zach and Taylor and Rachel. They’re all together in my head and heart. Almost one.

ZachTaylorRachel

and me

with them.

 

And this Jesse.

With Jesse, there are no memories.

He’s free and clear except for Lauren.

Jesse says, “What are you thinking, London?”

Outside, the morning tries to get warm. The sun’s so bright I squint.

“Nothing,” I say.

“Not thinking about me?”

I can’t find my tongue for a moment. When I do, I stumble over it. “Lauren’s my friend. I mean, she used to be my friend.” I glance at him.

 

His grin is wicked. “She doesn’t own me,” he says.

We pull up in front of my house.

In one glance I see that Mom’s home. There’s her car and Daddy’s, too.

 

Jesse parks the van. Turns off the engine. He unbuckles his seat belt and then unbuckles mine.

With his fingertips, he turns my face to his.

His hand cups my chin, and he kisses me. Nothing big deal, that kiss. Except it is a big deal. His lips taste like syrup, but I know he didn’t have pancakes for breakfast.

He didn’t have waffles, either. He ate Cap’n Crunch with his brothers.

His fingers leave burn marks on my cheek.

“I’ve been wanting to do that since English class that first day.”

 

“Oh,” I say. I can’t look him in the eye. If I look him in the eye, I might kiss him again. No, I will kiss him again. “Well, thank you.” Somehow, I open the van door and stumble out onto the green, green grass of our lawn.

 

I am the stupidest girl at Smyrna High.

I am.

 

Daddy is in the kitchen.

Has he watched me from the window? He stands at the sink, coffee cup in hand, eyebrows knit together.

I try to glide past, but I’m on shaky feet.

“You know what Jesus says about fornication,” he says.

“Excuse me?” I slow.

“You know what He says.”

“Ummm.” Coming in from outside makes the house seem darker than usual. Why hasn’t he opened the curtains? He knows they’ve been closed for months. Or maybe there’s something wrong with my eyes.

“You didn’t come home last night.”

I look him straight in the face—no problem looking at

him—and say nothing. What does he care, huh? What.

Does. He. Care?

“First your brother and now you,” he says.

My daddy knows I promised to wait to have sex. To wait until I’m married.

“I can’t watch you do the same things he did. Destroying our family. Destroying himself.”

Here’s my voice. I find it now. “Don’t you dare say anything about Zach.” I clench my hands into fists. “Don’t you dare.”

I find my feet, too. I turn around and go right back outside.

 

His lips were so soft.

Love you, Lili.

 

I just walk.

There’s no place to go, really.

But when I get to the cemetery, I know I’ve been out a long, long time. We live a good ways from the cemetery.

 

Zach’s burial site is on the east side, because Daddy wanted him closest to Jesus when He comes again. “He’ll come from the east,” Daddy has said. Is that Scripture too? Like fornicating?

Daddy’s written about both and preached that to the little congregations everywhere we traveled. But that’s not what he said in Africa or South America or Mexico.

There he said, “Charity never faileth.”

I walk to the farthest, most eastern part of this plot of ground. The sky looks like it’s been covered in marshmallow fluff, there are that many clouds. Every once in a while one creeps over the sun, and for a moment I feel colder.

Then there it is. His tombstone.

ZACHEUS LEE CASTLE
GONE TOO SOON
DEAREST SON AND BROTHER

I lie on the ground, right where I think his casket might be. I wish I could put my arms into the earth, put my arms around Zach, just one last time. The grass isn’t soft, but tough, strong, Florida grass.

“Dear Jesus, dear Jesus.” This is a sincere prayer. “Please let my brother hear me.”

I tell Zach everything. It’s a repeat, these words, a cry of loneliness.

How I miss him.

How I’m starting to feel alive again, but only a little bit alive. Sort of zombie-ish.

How I’m scared to death (no pun intended) to do this alone.

Without him.

This wasn’t part of my plan.

Part of his? Maybe.

But not mine.

“Why did you have to go so early, Zach?”

I wait for an answer. Sometimes—and this is the God’s honest truth—sometimes I know he’s near. If only for a moment. But not this time.

 

A bit of breeze moves past, and even though my eyes are closed, I imagine that the grass is bowing before that wind.

Maybe bowing to Zach.

My brother.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 5, 2013

    MAD!

    I haven't even read the book yet and i'm already serioisly angry with myself for purchasing it. I paid $10 for this book and it was over 2MB in size ....and ends up being only 105 pages long (but the story doesn't even start until pg. 15) AND... the words don't even fill the pages...when I noticed the first couple pages weren't filled, I skipped ahead and and noticed that some page sonly have 1 sentence...flippin' ridiculous! Maybe the author was trying to go for a poetic/artsy flow...and more power to her...but nobody should have to pay $10 for such little content. I read reviews on "Waiting" before purchasing .... and maybe I should have read every single review ... but not one of the reviews mentioned these issues. I still plan on reading this book and will keep an open mind going into it, but I highly doubt the author was successful in sufficiently fleshing out the characters and giving the story any sort of depth in such a small amount of pages and words. Who knows...maybe i'll be proven wrong and if so...I will post an apology. Here's hoping....

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 5, 2012

    Great!

    This book was amazing! I cried whenever i read it. Its really good though. It helps you realize that you will get through tough times and kill.ing yourself is NOT the answer. Cause all it does is hurt everybody around you.

    5 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 30, 2012

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    Resd this book. Its one if the best books I've read in a really long time. Highly recommended

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted October 21, 2012

    Anonymous

    I reallt liked this book but i cry everytime i read it at least it gives hope. I think the mother was a ass excuse my french.

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 17, 2013

    Not the same book

    The book i read was okay which is why I gave it two stars but the description given is nit the story told. The nvook i read had characters Londan and Taylor and others. A Hope was never mentioned. Good book for what i read byt a rip off due to the fact it was ten dollars and i,the book was completely different. Very dissappointed wanted to read the book described not the book i did.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 4, 2012

    Tear:(

    When things just coulnt get any worse londons brother jusr couldnt take it anymore.When Zack was misunderstood from his girlfriend about an ambortion he does something stupid.When Loncon struggles to find comfort in family,friends,and 2 guys she can't decide between.She gets threantened from her mother.Her mother blames everything on London.When London craves attention from her mother she tells her about the two boys and all the $.. shes been doing and the drugs she been taking and even tells her shes two months pregant when shes lieing about it.HER MOTHER DOSENT DO ANYTHING IN INTEREST LET ALONE CARE ABOUT LONDON.When hurt evolves in the family and tensions are arised when death takes tole and hearts are filtered through the bloodstream.Confusion confuses and tally marks are made clear and are being counted.How long will it take before things are slapped around.Theirs only one thing this family is fighting for before it is all lost love.But how long has this love remained or how long has this loved even lasted?Without Zack things no longer matter but the darkness and tears.Everyone will look for anwsers towards God untell time has given up and its to late to change things...if only the door was unlocked sooner.This book will leave your hearts touched anyone will be left with grinding teeth and tears.

    1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 6, 2012

    highly recommended!

    I really liked this book...it was good but i think the ending could have been different, but that is just my opinion. i really think anyone should read this book!

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 29, 2012

    ShoUld i read ths?

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    Backs off suddenly* "What was that noise?"

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    Mike to Aliania a

    Do u want to do it with me?

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  • Anonymous

    Posted March 23, 2014

    Lol

    I don't know and see you later. she walks to result three.

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    A purple unicorn gallops in and yanks poor Alana's head off.

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    Nope kicks him in the stomach

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 3, 2013

    Great!

    Amazing book

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 27, 2013

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    I Dont' know. Should you read this book????????

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