Waiting for Odysseus

Waiting for Odysseus

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by Clemence McLaren

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Four women.
Four stories.
One man's journey.

Odysseus. His epic tale has been told countless times, but rarely is it heard through the voices of the women who loved and served him. Penelope, Circe, Athena, Eurycleia: Theirs are the silent voices, the voices of longing, waiting, strength. They are the women who moved him and motivated him.


Four women.
Four stories.
One man's journey.

Odysseus. His epic tale has been told countless times, but rarely is it heard through the voices of the women who loved and served him. Penelope, Circe, Athena, Eurycleia: Theirs are the silent voices, the voices of longing, waiting, strength. They are the women who moved him and motivated him. And now they shed new light on his age-old journey.

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From the Publisher
Swift, powerful writing.

Booklist This is a retelling that will hook modern teens — it has the original's adventure, heroism, sex, and romance, made even more accessible by the intimate voices.

School Library Journal McLaren adds variety and richness to this already dramatic tale, full to bursting with love, adventure, and hard questions about life.

Kirkus Reviews A riveting page-turner that...brings a feminine perspective to a classical adventure....This book shines new light on mythic figures and their voyages, and may send voracious readers back to the original.

Publishers Weekly
This "colorful feminist reimagining" of Homer's The Odyssey offers four female characters' perspectives. "Readers may be better off having at least some acquaintance with Greek mythology ahead of time, but the uninitiated could easily get swept up in the swift, powerful writing," noted PW. Ages 12-up. (Mar.) Copyright 2004 Reed Business Information.
Four silent women from the original epic are finally given a voice in this simplified modern retelling of the fabled travels of Odysseus. Helen of Troy, depicted in the early chapters as a beautiful young girl whose many suitors vie for her hand, is left in the shadows when the charming Penelope beguiles Odysseus instead. Later in Ithaca, years after their son Telemachus is born, Odysseus's sense of honor propels him into the Trojan War. The story line begins here with Penelope waiting patiently for her husband's return from a series of harrowing adventures. The second chapter finds Odysseus succumbing to the wiles of the sorceress Circe who puts him through the ordeal of Hades and a meeting with the prophet Tiresias as a condition to resuming his journey back to Ithaca. Having survived the whirlpool Charybdis and the six-headed monster Scylla, he washes up on the shores of Kalypso, the lovesick nymph. The sea god Poseidon, an uncle whom Odysseus has angered, threatens to harm him until the goddess Pallas Athena intervenes on his behalf. Finally, with the help of his son Telemachus and the guidance of Pallas, Odysseus lands on his home shores again and is recognized by his childhood nurse, Eurycleia. Through the eyes of the watchful and benevolent Eurycleia, Odysseus and Penelope subject each other to tests of fidelity, a series of disguises and some trickery, before finally revealing their identities. The first-person perspective of the women in this novel makes for a lively tale of love and deceit, trust and betrayal, with Odysseus a seeming pawn in the hands of women who often seem more powerful than he does. The author creates suspense in the final pages as the reader anticipates themanner of the final test and revelation. Young readers who lack either the time or the energy for the original Odyssey can still gain an appreciation for this timeless tale of journey and adventure. KLIATT Codes: JS—Recommended for junior and senior high school students. 2000, Simon & Schuster, Pulse, 178p., Ages 12 to 18.
—Phyllis LaMontagne
School Library Journal
Gr 7-9-For generations, the story of Odysseus has intrigued readers who have followed the Greek hero's journey from Ithaca to Troy and then from island to island as he attempts to return home after the Trojan War. Like many retellers before her, McClaren uses the basic tale first recounted in Homer's Iliad and Odyssey, but instead of narrating the events in the voice of Odysseus, she tells the story from the point of view of the four women who were most intimately affected. The tale begins romantically as Penelope tells of meeting, falling in love with, and marrying Odysseus. The seductress Circe, in love with the willing though homesick Odysseus, continues his story, which is then picked up by the goddess Pallas Athena. She helps him reach home where he must rid his palace of suitors who demand that Penelope marry one of them. Here, his old nursemaid, Eurycleia, continues the narration and relates the satisfying ending of this journey. By changing the narrator a number of times, McClaren adds variety and richness to this already dramatic tale, full to bursting with love, adventure, and hard questions about life. The women's voices are distinctive, and their stories broaden readers' understanding of the meaning of this timeless journey. In her fine epilogue, McClaren discusses characters, themes, and symbols, and she explains some of the underlying questions that made her tell the story in a way that addresses the concerns and interests of modern readers.-Barbara Scotto, Michael Driscoll School, Brookline, MA Copyright 2000 Cahners Business Information.|

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Phoenician traders reported seeing the Greek fleet assembling at the Bay of Aulis, commanded by High King Agamemnon, older brother to Menelaus. An old seer who read the flights of birds prophesied that my husband would sail with them and would not return for nineteen years.

We never talked about this prediction, though it was common gossip in the town. Still, I knew they would come for him, even as I struggled to find a way to keep him home. Rising before dawn to scan the bay for Greek ships, I was first to spot Palamedes' galley — the red speck on the horizon that would cancel my happiness.

I found Odysseus lacing up his leather vest to go welcome whatever visitors were sailing into port.

"I know of a way to trick them!" I cried out.

He looked at me with pity in his eyes. "Dearest Penelope, they cannot compel me to go. You've said so yourself. I never swore the oath."

"Hear my plan...for our son's sake." I knelt at his feet, sobbing quietly. "They will not be put off so easily. They have to think you're incapable of serving their cause."

He lifted me to my feet and wrapped his arms around me. "All right, tell me your plan."

Odysseus didn't go down to the harbor to welcome the ship. When Palamedes arrived, my husband was working in the fields wearing filthy clothes and a pointed foolscap. Instead of oxen, he'd hitched two goats to his plow, and he was weaving in and out of furrows, pretending not to see his royal guests. Palamedes and an older king named Nestor stopped to watch underneath a stand of trees.

Having captured their attention, Odysseus laughed a cackling laugh as he grabbed a handful of salt from his pouch and cast it onto theearth.

"He's been like this for weeks," I told Palamedes, approaching with Telemachus on my hip. I'd brought along the child to enlist their pity, an idea that turned out to be a fatal mistake. I said, "He's been sowing his fields with salt instead of seeds. When he's not out here, he's sitting on the dung heap ranting and tearing his hair."

Palamedes narrowed his ferret eyes, squinting into the morning sun.

"My Lord, I apologize for this poor hospitality...."

Only desperation could have made me think I could fool Palamedes, who had a reputation for cunning that was almost equal to my husband's. It happened with no warning. His glance darted from me to Odysseus. Suddenly, he leaped forward and snatched my son from my arms. He ran into the field and, stooping, placed the child directly in the path of my husband's plow.

"Let's see if you're crazy enough to run over your son!" Palamedes shouted.

Of course Odysseus pulled to a stop and knelt to pick up Telemachus, who was only then beginning to cry.

"Stop this nonsense, Odysseus," Palamedes said. "Obviously you're sane enough to go to war."

Telemachus's wails pierced the silence.

"Indeed, a certain madness is a requirement for war," Odysseus said, looking down at his son, stroking the boy's silky hair.

"Odysseus, raider of cities, you know you're itching to feel the heft of a good sword in your hand." Palamedes smiled his crooked smile. "Admit it."

Odysseus dropped his eyes, and I knew this charge was at least partly true.

"Besides," Palamedes was saying, "wars are won by superior tactics and the gods' favor, both of which you possess in abundance. You cannot refuse your countrymen in this time of humiliation."

I stood there hugging my sides, hating them both.

Palamedes and Nestor spent the day telling Odysseus about the Greek coalition — the water and food supplies, the men and ships already arrived at Aulis, a bay on the coast opposite Troy. Agamemnon had sent the two kings to enlist Odysseus and a second warrior, whose presence was even more crucial to a Greek victory — a young man called Achilles, the son of a mortal king and a minor sea goddess. Oracles had prophesied that the Trojan War would not be won without him, but he had disappeared. According to the prophets, Achilles had a choice of destinies. He could lead either a long, uneventful life at home, or a short, glorious life fighting and dying in the Trojan War. Naturally, his mother, Thetis, was determined to secure the long, peaceful destiny for her only son.

"We think we know where she's hidden him," Palamedes said.

Nestor, who was famous for long-winded speeches, launched into the story. "She's put him with relatives on Scyros. Living in the women's quarters disguised as a girl! But there are rumors...." Grinning, the gray-bearded warrior slapped his knee. "The young stud has got one of the cousins pregnant."

Palamedes leaned forward. "I don't think the boy will offer much resistance, but we need Odysseus, master of disguises, to get close to him."

Like my husband's reputation as raider of cities, this was another side of him I had never seen. It made me wonder if I knew him at all.

Odysseus, Nestor, and Palamedes spent the better part of a month sailing to Scyros, where Odysseus had little trouble persuading Achilles to leave with them. My husband told the story in the men's hall the night they returned with the boy to Ithaca.

Arriving on Scyros, Odysseus had dressed as a peddler and visited the king's daughters with a pack full of shimmering veils, jewel-encrusted robes, and bronze mirrors from the Orient. The girls quivered with excitement, squealing and grabbing at his wares.

"All except one tall, ungainly maiden," my husband said slowly, drawing out the suspense. "She stood aside, arms crossed over her chest, smiling scornfully until I withdrew from its wrappings a magnificent sword, a gift to my father from Agamemnon...."

The men in the hall sat forward in their chairs, charmed by my husband's liquid voice.

"Then this tall, muscular maiden sprang forward and grabbed the sword, swishing it around her head." Odysseus laughed, pointing at Achilles. "And here she — he — sits, ready to shed Trojan blood!"

That's how I came to know Achilles. The boy who would soon strike terror into the hearts of Trojans was still a beardless youth unstained by the blood of battle, but even then there was something terrible about his thin-lipped smile. I knew he would relish the killing, that it would be, for him, like an act of love to plunge his sword into the body of an enemy warrior — or maybe a fellow Greek. I was afraid my husband — or even High King Agamemnon — would never be able to manage him.

The next day, Palamedes and Nestor sailed for Aulis to deliver their prize warrior to Agamemnon. Odysseus stayed behind for another month to gather his fleet of twelve vessels from Ithaca, the mainland, and neighboring islands. But I had already lost him. Just once, I wanted to walk together at sunset in the orchard, to imprint that moment into my husband's memory. He never found the time. On the rare nights he held me in our olive tree bed, he was still thinking about provisioning ships and recruiting foot soldiers from the villages.

The morning he left, I brought my parting gifts — a finely woven tunic, a fleecy maroon cape, and to clasp it, a brooch in the shape of his favorite hunting dog, Argos. I'd commissioned the piece from a master goldsmith to remind Odysseus of the good life he was leaving behind.

We had only moments alone. After packing my gifts, he sat down on the bed and reached for my hands, looking up at me. "Take care of my parents, as you have always done," he said. "I leave all things in your charge. Mentor will instruct our son in the martial arts. The old warrior will be a friend to you, too." I held his head against my breasts, drinking in the smell of his hair.

"But if I don't return..."

"Please...that cannot happen. I would die."

"Let us not lie to one another; we've never done that. Here, sit beside me so I can look at you." He stroked my face. "My beautiful Penelope, these years with you have given me more happiness than I could have known how to ask for." Then, after a silence, he said, "The Trojans are skilled warriors. Not every Greek will make it home."

I bit my lip, tasting blood on my tongue.

"When you see a beard on our son's face, you must marry again."


"Look at me, Penelope! When our son becomes a man, you must leave this house for Telemachus to rule. Make a new life for yourself."

I twisted away, covering my mouth with my hand. I felt sick to my stomach.

"You cannot wait for me forever. Promise me, Penelope!"

There was a knock on the door, and then Mentor's voice. "Master, the rations are loaded in the hull, all the wine jars, barley meal double wrapped in leather sacks. Shall I order the crews to man the oars?"

* * *

Down at the port I watched Odysseus holding the mast of his blue-prowed ship, shouting orders as if he had no thought for me or our son. I watched the ships drift toward the horizon, water churning behind each rhythmic stroke of the oars. Seven hundred men in twelve ships, and not all of them would return. Selfishness gripped my heart as I stood there, making bargains with the gods. I don't care about any of the others. Only Odysseus has to return. Please let him return.

Eurycleia stayed beside me and held my arm. I was grateful she didn't try to cheer me with false hopefulness. My throat ached; I longed for the release of tears as the ships disappeared into the summer haze. But I was the queen. People were watching, expecting composure.

"I hate him for leaving us," I said between my teeth.

"For shame!" Eurycleia whispered. "That's not like you at all!"

"He told me he wouldn't go! He could have refused!"

"You cannot blame him for following his warrior's heart. And his destiny."

"What's to be my destiny?"

Eurycleia didn't answer. We both knew that my destiny was to wait, to become expert at waiting.

I need not tell of the great war; traveling bards sing of it all over the civilized world. Only one thing: I was right about Achilles. He did not submit to his commander's authority. He and Agamemnon hated one another on sight, and conflict erupted into revolt when Agamemnon took a favorite slave girl Achilles had captured in a raid. Only my husband's intervention kept the boy from attacking his chief.

As nine years of siege outside Troy's walls dragged on, stories drifted to us of Odysseus's courage and ingenious tactics. It was said that the great Athena, goddess of war and wisdom, fought at his side, that the wooden horse that ended the siege was his design. In time, I created an image from these stories, and it became more real than the man I had known.

After the war, Odysseus and his men sailed for home, flushed with victory and loaded with Trojan gold. But a squall blew them off course to the Land of the Lotus-eaters, where friendly natives fed some of them a magical fruit, which erased all memory of home. Although badly in need of food, Odysseus drove his men to sail on. The next landfall belonged to the Cyclops, a savage race of one-eyed giants descended from the sea god, Poseidon. A search party located a cave well supplied with cheeses and sheep; the men wanted to help themselves and sail away. Of course, Odysseus was too honorable to take food without meeting the owner, asking for hospitality, and trading wine in exchange.

But there was no hospitality when the one-eyed giant, whose name was Polyphemus, returned home. He trapped them inside with a huge boulder and promptly devoured six of the men, crunching their bones and wiping blood off his chin with the back of his hand while their shipmates watched in horror. Odysseus refused to give way to panic. He offered the giant bowl after bowl of undiluted wine. When Polyphemus passed out drunk, Odysseus had them sharpen a tree trunk, which they used like a battering ram to put out the Cyclops's only eye. They escaped the next morning when the blinded Polyphemus let his sheep out to pasture.

But this rescue would earn my husband the wrath of Poseidon, for Polyphemus was not only the sea god's descendant, he was the god's favorite son. And from that day forward, the blue-maned Poseidon, who rules the oceans that wrap the earth, was determined that Odysseus and his loyal shipmates would never reach home.

Copyright © 2000 by Clemence McLaren

Meet the Author

Clemence McLaren writes:

"When I was a sixth grader, I used to read The Odyssey with a flashlight after I'd been sent to bed. I was both fascinated and frustrated when the women characters left their endless weaving to make brief, intriguing appearances in the men's hall. I always wanted to know how they felt about what was happening, but that was almost never revealed. Did Helen enjoy having the world's most beautiful face? Did Penelope blame her for launching the great war? And why did Circe keep changing men into pigs? I suppose I began retelling these stories to answer my own questions. When I became a teacher, I told my stories to my students, always embroidering on the characters' personalities.

"My fascination for Greece began with that early reading, and I grew up to live out my dreams for six years (on and off) in a tiny Greek village named Mylos, where we had a cottage between the one-room schoolhouse and the bakery.

"I now live in Hawaii, where I'm again studying the language and the legends, amazed at the parallels with Greek mythology. There's a Hawaiian Helen of Troy (named Hina), and a Polynesian equivalent to the Trojan horse (a wooden shark god, engineered to conceal enemy warriors). I'm still telling stories to my students, sharing my own passion for the classics and also teaching them to look more deeply for the silenced voices."

Clemence McLaren has also written Inside the Walls of Troy and Dance for the Land.

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Waiting for Odysseus 4.1 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Calypso. He washed up on Ogygia where she lives.
EmilyD More than 1 year ago
This was a good book. The writing was catchy and easy to follow, so it will only take you a couple hours or so to read this. It was interesting to see Odysseus' story told from all different points of view. To me, the most interesting part of the book was the portion told from the goddess Athena's point of view. This book wasn't completely mythologically accurate, but at least the author said she changed some things in the afterword. Esther M. Friesner, for example, completely botches up Greek myths in her books Nobody's Princess and Nobody's Prize (but she is still a very good writer). And believe it or not, the Percy Jackson and the Olympians series is also pretty mythologically inaccurate. So the point is, don't base your knowledge of Greek myths on YA fiction. My only criticism of this book is that McLaren kind of brushed over the actual Trojan War. I think it would have been really interesting to read about and was disappointed that the author skipped it. But, that could have to do with the fact that this is based on The Odyssey rather than The Iliad. Overall, this was a great book, and if you liked it I recommend Aphrodite's Blessings and Inside the Walls of Troy, also by this author.
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Guest More than 1 year ago
this book is awesome! dont let anyone tell you otherwise! its romantic and adventurous..just the right combination for a fantastic book. i love to read so i know a good book when i see and read a book. READ IT!!
Guest More than 1 year ago
I am a 9th grade student from Delaware MIlitary Academy and i was assigned as a summer reading projectto read this book. I myself could not stand it and thought that it was completly intolerable i would not recocmend this book to anybody beacause it was absolutly dreadful
Guest More than 1 year ago
Dimarie Garcia,TCHS,Class of 2008.Waiting For Odysseus by Clemence McLaren was incredibly written.This tragic but yet uplifting romatic tale was told through the eyes of the women Odysseus encountered. The story was filled with action,passion and even comedy. I personally have never been interested in Greek Mythology but I can honestly say I've read the book 3 times and enjoyed the story each time.I recommend this novel to any deep thinkers of any age, any one who truely wants to reveal the importance of family,love, and self awarness.
Guest More than 1 year ago
Waiting for Odysseus is one of the only greek novel written in the eyes of the women who lived through the greek period. As Clemence McLaren stated, 'I always wanted to know how the women felt about what was happening, but that was almost never revealed.' I believe Waiting for Odysseus was an excellent book which everyone should read.