Average read 3 ½ stars
I believe this is the third novel in a series. I have not read the first two; however, that is not necessary as "What a Duke Wants" does well as a stand alone book. Lavinia Kent does nothing extraordinary with this novel. In fact, she conforms to all the prescribed Historical Romance dos, don'ts, and clichés. In short: (this is a review, not a book synopsis) Runaway Isabella Masters, currently known as Isabella Smith and employed as a nursemaid, finds herself "moved" to the stables by some haughty Duke's employee, where she is trying to lull her wailing charge to sleep. It is there, in the stables, while muttering to herself about "covering cocks" that Isabella encounters Mark Smythe, the Duke of Strattington, who, as the book excerpt suggests, does not reveal his true identity. Thus, the not-so-Cinderella story begins. Even though Lavinia Kent tried an engaging, comical opening to this novel, - the double entendre of the above mentioned "covered cocks" - she failed to capture my attention, as there was nothing original in that beginning; the small misunderstanding on Mark's part (about whose cock should be covered) was well anticipated and, therefore, neither humorous nor winning. And that is pretty much how the rest of the novel progresses, with attempts at originality that fail because of their predictability. Isabella Smith, or Masters, or whatever is running from her past, from deeds done that hold dire consequences. She guards her secret to the end, unable to trust. How many such Historical Romance damsels in distress have we, the readers, met? Mark Smythe is learning to be a Duke because he never expected to inherit the title, being a first cousin; and he only feels "himself" while in the presence of Isabella, necessitating his "false identity" - how many "Marks" can we recall? Even the sexual tension in this book is predictable - with Mark being beautiful, and Isabella unbelievable. All the formulaic, run-of-the-mill "How to Write a Romance Novel" gibberish. Then there are the actual sex scenes, glazed over yes, but annoying as well. I think one scene was actually ten pages long (I am exaggerating, but bear with me; I have a point). When Isabella and Mark finally get down to business, they, all of a sudden, stop and have a lengthy discussion about naughty books Isabella has read and THEN resume- REALLY, hmm . I don't see myself saying right in the middle of the action, "stop honey, I want to discuss this picture I saw wherever, it didn't reveal that move!!!" Come on! I know that Kent's attempting to illustrate Isabella's naïveté; however, reading about positions or how large a man's size is in comparison to statutes or pictures grows tiresome, and yes, predictable. However, all this criticism aside, this novel does possess redeeming qualities, which make it a 3 ½ star read. Isabella is more mature than her 21 years. Her despondency, while Mark's mistress, is well portrayed and can be felt. The fact that she resolved her "past" issues on her own, in an adult fashion was very appealing to me. Mark also conquers his internal struggle - figuring out how to be a Duke, realizing his mistakes, realizing how he's hurt Isabella, how he's functioning solely to please society's expectations of his new station. And, there is dialogue that is witty, painful, and joyful as well. Basically, this is not a bad book; it is just nothing special. Originally on romancecritic
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