Likeable Romance with an Unlikeable Heroine
This is the first book I've read of Robin Kaye's Domestic Gods series. By some accounts it's her best, other's her worst. I can't really be the judge of that since it's my first, but here are some of my thoughts after reading Yours for the Taking.
Ben is a cowboy at heart, but also a Manhattan metrosexual who enjoys women...lots of women, just without any complications. His grandfather, a wily though manipulative loving relative, has given Ben a short period of time to marry, otherwise his grandfather is going to sell Ben's childhood ranch in Idaho where he holds cherished memories of his mother and father who died when he was younger. He's a driven, but caring person who is determined to have the ranch, pretty much at any cost....to the tune of many millions of dollars. Just as long as the woman he marries knows that it is a marriage of convenience only...no emotional strings attached.
Gina is a survivor who grew up feeling responsible for the care and nurturing of her siblings. She's a fighter, who has learned the hard way to only rely on herself. Consequently, she is at times abrasive, off-putting and needs to have control of her own destiny so that she won't ever have to be reliant on someone else for her wellbeing again. She came from nothing, but through hard work and diligence she's made a good life for herself and her sister. So when she's offered a chance to marry a man she knows only through mutual acquaintances, for which she will be paid a substantial amount of money, she thinks not of what it will gain her, but how she can in return help those she loves the most.
I didn't really know what to expect from this modern day take on a marriage of convenience. I was somewhat skeptical about what would motivate two people who barely know each other in a contemporary romance to marry, but the circumstances that the author places each character in makes it believable that they would both benefit from the arrangement.
Ben is a very likeable hero, and despite his need for a wife that he has no emotional entanglements with he quickly falls in lust and love with Gina...but for the life of me I couldn't really tell you why. Because you see, Gina isn't really a likeable person...at least that is the way she comes across. She's hard and because of her situation growing up she trusts and relies on no one. She has a hard time asking anyone for help, and isolates herself and her feelings to protect herself from further hurt and disappointment. She's always looking for people to fail her, so in the end she gets exactly what she looks for because if you look hard enough you can always find fault.
I never really liked Gina as a person and felt that her character never progressed from someone who needs no one, to someone who needs the man she loves in her life. I never really got why Ben loved Gina, but I certainly understood why Gina could fall in love with Ben. As a result their love story seemed very one sided and that was a big disappointment.
Despite my feelings about Gina as a character I did enjoy my first Robin Kaye book. I loved Ben. I loved the cast of supporting characters, the interaction and dialogue between the characters, and the overall plot and writing style. I just wish that Gina's character would have evolved more from beginning to end because that would have made this 3 star read a definite 4+ star read.
Ratings:
Overall: 3.25 stars
Sensuality Level: 3.25
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