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Posted March 29, 2014
Great story. Only 130 or so pages eacg, but very fine print. The author might want to proof read occasionally. A lot of type-o's. Well worth the money.
And yes,i know that i made a type-o.
Posted November 27, 2013
Posted June 17, 2013
Please start using contractions when writing. I enjoyed the story but found myself skipping tons of dialogue because the I will not/I can not/I should not etc. was so stilted and frustrating to read. That said- kudos to anyone that has the drive and commitment to put their story on paper and allow the world to read it and critique it! if you love Zombies this is an ok ride . . . .. .Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted March 6, 2013