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32Bny11 On Entropy based on 0 ratings. 2 reviews.
Seems interesting. You didn't capture me until when everything turned around. Here is a writing tip: Do not introduce every detail of the person. Work it in with the story, like, she's talking to someone+ "Yes, I am about to be a graduate from UConn." Oh. Great. You get more reaction then just people skimming over the facts. You have a very great story base, now stretch your talent and oet your mind go wild! --Starry ✧ Night <br> If you wish to contact me for more help, or if you would like a partner, go to 'fijun' res 4. Res 1&2 are story titles I made up. If you see one you like, you can use it for your story :)