Baby Farm: The Story of Alec Thorn

Baby Farm: The Story of Alec Thorn

by Kayresia A Bass
3.4 53

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Baby Farm: The Story of Alec Thorn 3.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 53 reviews.
Gpick More than 1 year ago
Trying to finish. Story all over the place. Use of English language is terrible.
mrose85 More than 1 year ago
I'm not a fan of this genre,but I enjoyed the book. The story line was captivating and kept me turning the pages. I think the description of the characters was somwhat repeative,but I did get a good feel for each of them. My recommendations for future books is a good proof reading. I noticed several wrong words,but I knew what words should have been used and it was not a problem, just a distraction. I look forward to the next book.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The story is good, I could see some more books coming out of it. It could have been great, but the writing style could use some work. I feel that a good editor would make a big difference. Conversations between characters just don't read well, almost like someone translated it from another language without a good grasp of how English 'flows'. I hope the author continues writing, maybe with a college level course or two to help with style. Lots of potential.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Decent read. It pulls you in and has a few twists.
DblGee More than 1 year ago
Coven of vampires grows their population by breeding with humans. The writer seems to have a clear vision of their story but lacks a polished way to say most of it. At times this comes across as immature. I enjoyed the story though - so hope the writer will continue writing - but also working towards developing a more polished/ professional writing style.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is a good story. Twists, turns, and unexpecteds. There are things that still need to be worked on, yet still a good story. I recommend this book to everyone that loves a good vampire romance.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Awful. Written in verybasic english. Characters are flat and emotionless.
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Wow, enjoyed reading this book. Especially the love passionate sex!!!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is the best vampire novel since the orignal Draula...and i read twighlight
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The first half of the book was great, well written, good story line. The second half of the book seems to be written like a play script. "This character said this, feels like this, then goes here. Then the next character replies this, feels like this, and then goes there." It's really weird. Had to keep reading to find out the ending, but it was not well written and really hard to get through the 2nd half of the book.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I struggled through the whole poorly written thing. I kept thinking it would get better because it had 3 stars with 46 reviews, so obviously someone liked it. It's poorly written. It has timeline issues. The plot, or lack thereof is weak.
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Very good story line. Well thought out :)
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
343 pages. I enjoyed reading this story. The editing errors were minor. I have read work from major authors that had worse.
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