Eighteen years ago, Billy Peters disappeared. Everyone in town believes Billy was murdered—after all, serial killer Arnold Avery later admitted killing six other children and burying them on the same desolate moor that surrounds their small English village. Only Billy’s mother is convinced he is alive. She still stands lonely guard at the front window of her home, waiting for her son to return, while her remaining family fragments around her.
But her twelve-year-old grandson Steven is determined to heal the cracks that gape between his nan, his mother, his brother, and himself. Steven desperately wants to bring his family closure, and if that means personally finding his uncle’s corpse, he’ll do it.
Spending his spare time digging holes all over the moor in the hope of turning up a body is a long shot, but at least it gives his life purpose.
Then at school, when the lesson turns to letter writing, Steven has a flash of inspiration...
Careful to hide his identity, he secretly pens a letter to Avery in jail asking for help in finding the body of "W.P."—William "Billy" Peters. So begins a dangerous cat-and-mouse game.
Just as Steven tries to use Avery to pinpoint the gravesite, so Avery misdirects and teases his mysterious correspondent in order to relive his heinous crimes. And when Avery finally realizes that the letters he’s receiving are from a twelve-year-old boy, suddenly his life has purpose too.
Although his is far more dangerous...
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EXMOOR DRIPPED WITH DIRTY BRACKEN, ROUGH, COLORLESS grass, prickly gorse, and last year’s heather, so black it looked as if wet fire had swept across the landscape, taking the trees with it and leaving the moor cold and exposed to face the winter unprotected. Drizzle dissolved the close horizons and blurred heaven and earth into a grey cocoon around the only visible landmark—a twelve-year-old boy in slick black waterproof trousers but no hat, alone with a spade.
It had rained for three days, but the roots of grass and heather and gorse twisting through the soil still resisted the spade’s intrusion. Steven’s expression did not change; he dug the blade in again, feeling a satisfying little impact all the way up to his armpits. This time he made a mark—a thin human mark in the great swathe of nature around him.
Before Steven could make the next mark, the first narrow stripe had filled with water and disappeared.
Three boys slouched through the Shipcott rain, their hands deep in their pockets, their hoodies over their faces, their shoulders hunched as if they couldn’t wait to get out of the rain. But they had nowhere to hurry to, so they meandered and bumped along and laughed and swore too loudly at nothing at all, just to let the world know they were there and still had expectations.
The street was narrow and winding and, in summer, passing tourists smiled at the seaside-painted terraces with their doors opening right onto the pavement and their quaint shutters. But the rain made the yellow and pink and sky blue houses a faded reminder of sunshine, and a refuge only for those too young, too old, or too poor to leave.
Steven’s nan looked out of the window with a steady gaze.
She had started life as Gloria Manners. Then she became Ron Peters’s wife. After that, she was Lettie’s mum, then Lettie and Billy’s mum. Then for a long time she was Poor Mrs. Peters. Now she was Steven’s nan. But underneath she would always be Poor Mrs. Peters; nothing could change that, not even her grandsons.
Above the half-nets, the front window was spotted with rain. The people over the road already had their lights on. The roofs were as different as the walls. Some still wore their old pottery tiles, rough with moss. Others, flat grey slate that reflected the watery sky. Above the roofs, the top of the moor was just visible through the mist—a gentle, rounded thing from this distance. From the warmth of a front room with central heating and the kettle starting to whistle in the kitchen, it even looked innocent.
The shortest of the boys struck the window with the flat of his palm and Steven’s nan recoiled in fright.
The boys laughed and ran although no one was chasing them and they knew no one was likely to. “Nosey old bag!” one of them shouted back, although it was hard to see which, with their hoods so low on their faces.
Lettie hurried in, breathless and alarmed. “What was that?”
But Steven’s nan was back in the window. She didn’t look round at her daughter. “Is tea ready?” she said.
Steven walked off the moor with his anorak slung over one shoulder and his T-shirt soaked and steaming with recent effort. The track carved through the heather by generations of walkers was thick with mud. He stopped—his rusty spade slung over his other shoulder like a rifle—and looked down at the village. The streetlamps were already on and Steven felt like an angel or an alien, observing the darkening dwellings from on high, detached from the tiny lives being lived below. He ducked instinctively as he saw the three hoodies run down the wet road.
He hid the spade behind a rock near the slippery stile. It was rusty but, still, someone might take it, and he couldn’t carry it home with him; that might lead to questions he could not—or dared not—answer.
He walked down the narrow passage beside the house. He was cooling now, and shivered as he took off his trainers to run them under the garden tap. They’d been white once, with blue flashes. His mum would go mad if she saw them like this. He rubbed them with his thumbs and squeezed the mud out of them until they were only dirty, then shook them hard. Muddy water sprayed up the side of the house, but rain washed it quickly away. His grey school socks were heavy and sodden; he peeled them off, his feet a shocking cold white.
“You’re soaking.” His mother peered from the back door, her face pinched and her dark blue eyes as dull as a northern sea. Rain spattered the straw hair that was dragged back into a small, functional ponytail. She jerked her head back inside to keep it dry.
“I got caught in it.”
“Where were you?”
This was not strictly a lie. He had been with Lewis immediately after school.
“What were you doing?”
“Nothing. Just. You know.”
From the kitchen he heard his nan say, “He should come straight home from school!”
Steven’s mother glared at his wetness. “Those trainers were only new at Christmas.”
“Sorry, Mum.” He looked crestfallen; it often worked.
She sighed. “Tea’s ready.”
Steven ate as fast as he dared and as much as he could. Lettie stood at the sink and smoked and dropped her ash down the plughole. At the old house—before they came to live with Nan—his mum used to sit at the table with him and Davey. She used to eat. She used to talk to him. Now her mouth was always shut tight, even when it held a cigarette.
Davey sucked the ketchup off his chips then carefully pushed each one to the side of his plate.
Nan cut little pieces off her breaded fish, inspecting each with a suspicious look before eating it.
“Something wrong with it, Mum?” Lettie flicked her ash with undue vigor. Steven looked at her nervously.
“It’s a fillet. Says so on the box. Plaice fillet.”
“They always miss some. You can’t be too careful.”
There was a long silence in which Steven listened to the sound of his own food inside his head.
“Eat your chips, Davey.”
Davey screwed up his face. “They’re all wet.”
“Should’ve thought of that before you sucked them, shouldn’t you? Shouldn’t you?”
At the repeated question, Steven stopped chewing, but Nan’s fork scraped the plate.
Lettie moved swiftly to Davey’s side and picked up a soggy chip. “Eat it!”
Davey shook his head and his lower lip started to wobble.
With quiet spite, Nan murmured: “Leaving food. Kids nowadays don’t know they’re born.”
Lettie bent down and slapped Davey sharply on the bare thigh below his shorts. Steven watched the white handprint on his brother’s skin quickly turn red. He loved Davey, but seeing someone other than himself get into trouble always gave Steven a small thrill, and now—watching his mother hustling his brother out of the kitchen and up the stairs, bawling his head off—he felt as if he had somehow been accorded an honor: the honor of being spared the pent-up irritation of his mother. God knows, she’d taken her feelings for Nan out on him often enough. But this was further proof of what Steven had been hoping for some time—that Davey was finally old enough, having just turned five, to suffer his share of the discipline pool. It wasn’t a deep pool, or a dangerous one, but what the hell; his mother had a short fuse and a punishment shared was a punishment halved in Steven’s eyes. Maybe even a punishment escaped altogether.
His nan had not stopped eating throughout, although each mouthful was apparently a minefield.
Even though Davey’s sobs were now muffled, Steven sought eye contact with Nan and finally she glanced at him, giving him a chance to roll his eyes, as if the burden of the naughty child was shared and the sharing made them closer.
“You’re no better,” she said, and went back to her fish.
Steven reddened. He knew he was better! If only he could prove it to Nan, everything would be different—he just knew it.
Of course, it was all Billy’s fault—as usual.
Steven held his breath. He could hear his mother washing up—the underwater clunking of china—and his nan drying—the higher musical scraping of plates leaving the rack. Then he slowly opened the door of Billy’s room. It smelled old and sweet, like an orange left under the bed. Steven felt the door click gently behind him.
The curtains were drawn—always drawn. They matched the bedspread in pale and dark blue squares that clashed with the swirly brown carpet. A half-built Lego space station was on the floor and since Steven’s last visit a small spider had spun a web on what looked like a crude docking station. Now it sat there, waiting to capture satellite flies from the outer space of the dingy bedroom.
There was a drooping scarf pinned to the wall over the bed—sky blue and white, Manchester City—and Steven felt the familiar pang of pity and anger at Billy: still a loser even in death.
Steven crept in here sometimes, as if Billy might reach across the years and whisper secrets and solutions into the ear of this nephew who had already lived to see one more birthday than he himself had managed.
Steven had long ago given up the hope of finding real-life clues. At first he liked to imagine that Uncle Billy might have left some evidence of a precognition of his own death. A Famous Five book dogeared at a key page; the initials “AA” scratched into the wooden top of the bedside table; Lego scattered to show the points of the compass and X marks the spot. Something which—after the event—an observant boy might discover and decipher.
But there was nothing. Just this smell of history and bitter sadness, and a school photo of a thin, fair child with pink cheeks and crooked teeth and dark blue eyes almost squeezed shut by the size of his smile. It had been a long time before Steven had realized that this photo must have been placed here later—that no boy worth his salt has a photo of himself on his bedside table unless it shows him holding a fish or a trophy.
Nineteen years ago this eleven-year-old boy—probably much like himself—had tired of his fantasy space game and gone outside to play on a warm summer evening, apparently—infuriatingly—unaware that he would never return to put his toys away or to wave his Man City scarf at the TV on a Sunday afternoon, or even to make his bed, which his mother—Steven’s nan—had done much later.
Sometime after 7:15 P.M., when Mr. Jacoby from the newsagent sold him a bag of Maltesers, Uncle Billy had moved out of the realm of childhood make-believe and into the realm of living nightmare. In the two hundred yards between the newsagent’s and this very house—a two hundred yards Steven walked every morning and every night to and from school—Uncle Billy had simply disappeared.
Steven’s nan had waited until 8:30 before sending Lettie out to look for her brother, and until 9:30, when darkness was falling, to go outside herself. In the light summer evenings children played long past their winter bedtimes. But it was not until Ted Randall next door said perhaps they should call the police that Steven’s nan changed forever from Billy’s mum into Poor Mrs. Peters.
Poor Mrs. Peters—whose husband had been stupidly killed wobbling off his bicycle into the path of the Barnstaple bus six years before—had waited for Billy to come home.
At first she waited at the door. She stood there all day, every day for a month, barely noticing fouteen-year-old Lettie brushing past her to go to school, and returning promptly at 3:50 to save her mother worrying even more—if such a thing were possible.
When the weather broke, Poor Mrs. Peters waited in the window from where she could see up and down the road. She grew the look of a dog in a thunderstorm—alert, wide-eyed, and nervous. Any movement in the street made her heart leap so hard in her chest that she flinched. Then would come the slump, as Mr. Jacoby or Sally Blunkett or the Tithecott twins grew so distinct that no desperate stretch of her imagination could keep them looking like a ruddy-cheeked eleven-year-old boy with a blond crew cut, new Nike trainers, and a half-eaten bag of Maltesers in his hand.
Lettie learned to cook and to clean and to stay in her room so she didn’t have to watch her mother flinching at the road. She had always suspected that Billy was the favorite and now, in his absence, her mother no longer had the strength to hide this fact.
So Lettie worked on a shell of anger and rebellion to protect the soft center of herself which was fourteen and scared and missed her brother and her mother in equal measure, as if both had been snatched from her on that warm July evening.
How could Uncle Billy not know? Once more Steven felt that flicker of anger as he looked about the clueless, lifeless room. How could anyone not know that something like that was about to happen to them?
© 2010 Belinda Bauer
Reading Group Guide
This reading group guide for Blacklands includes an introduction, discussion questions, ideas for enhancing your book club, and a Q&A with author Belinda Bauer. The suggested questions are intended to help your reading group find new and interesting angles and topics for your discussion. We hope that these ideas will enrich your conversation and increase your enjoyment of the book.
Steven Lamb is on a mission: to find the buried body of his uncle Billy, one of several children murdered nineteen years ago. Steven is certain that finding the remains of his uncle is the key to healing the wounds in his severely fragmented family and easing the tension between his mother and his nan. After three years of luckless digging, he turns to the one person who can help his cause—Billy’s suspected killer, the imprisoned Arnold Avery. What begins as a cryptic correspondence between two strangers quickly turns into an enthralling game of cat and mouse, as Avery realizes that the person asking him for clues is the object of his greatest desire: a child.
With thrilling and heartfelt turns, Belinda Bauer crafts a taut novel of suspense that looks closely at what happens when the cloud of tragedy hangs over a family—and how far a young boy is willing to go to try to fix everything.
TOPICS AND QUESTIONS FOR DISCUSSION
1. How does the earth play into the story’s narrative? Consider Steven’s tireless digging on the moor, Arnold Avery’s obsession with Dunkery Beacon, Steven and Uncle Jude’s backyard garden, and the final scene on the foggy Blacklands.
2. At what point does Steven stop being a child? Has he lost some fundamental aspect of his innocence and adolescence to the weight of history?
3. Should the family and authorities have done more to find Billy’s body? What resolution could come from finding his remains? What does that change?
4. Was there a point at which you sympathized with Arnold Avery? Is there any redemption for his character?
5. What is the nature of fear throughout the book? How is Steven’s fear of “the hoodies” different from his fear of Avery? What do you think makes Steven refuse to flee the Blacklands and instead face his uncle’s killer?
6. Did you expect Avery to escape from prison? At what point did Avery and Steven’s correspondence begin to foreshadow a faceto- face encounter?
7. Did the use of actual letters within the text enhance the story? Did you find yourself reading meaning into Avery’s capitalizations?
8. Which of Avery’s obsessions in prison were most disturbing? Seeing pictures of the moor? Playing games with his victims’ families? Or building benches with engraved plaques?
9. The details of Avery’s demise on the Blacklands are inexact. How do you think the scene played out? Consider the involvement of Nan, Steven, Lettie, and Lewis’s father.
10. Do you see any significance in Mason Dingle’s son being the one to shoot Avery?
11. Do you think it’s possible that Steven and his family can return to a normal life? Can their fragmented family heal?
12. Will the changed environment in the household allow Uncle Jude to return and stick around? How do you think each character (Steven, Davey, Nan, Lettie) will be affected by the revelations at story’s end?
ENHANCE YOUR BOOK CLUB
1. Try writing a series of short letters to a friend or family member. See if you can code hidden information into symbols and drawings.
2. Read a comparable thriller (try Richard Doetsch’s The 13th Hour) and see how the energy, tension, and anxiety of the narrative compares to Blacklands. How do they differ?
3. Where do you find the sense of urgency/intrigue begins in each? Visit your library and do some archival research on a local crime. Is there anything left unsolved? Could you see someone being inspired to resolve these open endings?
4. For those near some sort of elevated land, take a trip to your nearest “moor” or similar area. Read a passage of the book when you arrive. Does the land seem ripe for secrets? Could something terrible be buried under the earth around you?
5. In the spirit of Steven and Uncle Jude, plant a backyard garden and see if you can sustain the crops through the seasons.
A CONVERSATION WITH BELINDA BAUER
Arnold Avery is an incredibly depraved individual. Was there ever a moment you felt uncomfortable writing him? Were his sordid desires and memories difficult to articulate? What’s it like to take on the mind of a child killer?
Once I realized that Avery doesn’t feel that what he is doing is wrong, I found him easy to write. His overriding characteristic is his lack of empathy, so he genuinely doesn’t have any concept of, or interest in, other people’s feelings. Every time I wrote from Avery’s point of view, all I had to do was drop the empathy. It was a cold experience but fascinating to imagine the world through such selfish eyes—it’s a very different place. The scene I wrote where Steven has a sudden insight into Avery’s mind was the thing I found most uncomfortable to write, because it has its own horrible logic, but comes from inside someone who does have empathy. It scared Steven that he could grasp that—and that was the one point where it scared me too.
By that same token, is Avery a complete sociopath? Is there any redemption for a man like that?
Personally, I don’t feel there is any redemption for Avery. There is something broken in his psyche that currently we have no way to fix or replace.
The use of scanned letters extended the prose into a more realistic territory. What made you decide to use these images? Who penned Steven’s and Avery’s notes?
My editor suggested we have handwritten notes, and I think it was a great idea because it personalizes Steven so much. His notes were written by a friend’s son, Jack Cryer, who was a similar age. I researched the graphology of serial killers and sociopaths and wrote Avery’s notes myself.
In your author’s note, you mention that Avery’s escape over the Longmoor wall was inspired by a real prison break. What other research did you do for the novel? Are Avery’s crimes and burial methods something you thought up, or is there a real-world basis?
Apart from the handwriting, the prison was the major research I undertook for Blacklands. I was not allowed into Dartmoor Prison, which is the model for Longmoor, but I was lucky enough to find someone who knew the prison intimately. The moment he mentioned the real-life prison break, I knew I had to use it. From that came the whole scenario of Avery making benches, and I think the plaques he puts on them are a chilling touch, so that research was a real piece of luck. I also did some research into the army and their use of the firing ranges on the moor. It’s amazing—you do days or weeks of research and then use only a few small bits of it in the book, but they really do count. Avery’s crimes are based on the Moors Murders of 1960s Britain.
The child victims were buried on the Yorkshire moors and one of them, Keith Bennett, has never been found. It was the thought of the agony this must still be causing to his family that sparked the idea for Blacklands.
For those of us not able to jump continents are the sprawling moors and quaint towns you included in Blacklands actual places? Did you try to depict them realistically, or did you take liberties to add dimension to the story?
Blacklands is a real area on Exmoor, but Shipcott is a fabrication. In my head I know vaguely where it would be on the moor, but it’s handy to make it slightly fluid so no geek can pin me down on geography and claim the village would be in the middle of a bog or something!
To what purpose did you involve Mason Dingle’s son (and his heavy trigger finger) during Avery’s escape? Was it supposed to be biting coincidence, or are there larger implications?
Almost as soon as I thought of that scene, I thought of Mason Dingle. I loved his character and felt I’d like to see him again. I also relished the coincidence. Life is full of crazy coincidences and weird overlaps, and this one hardly impinges on the outcome, so I don’t feel it is cheating. Blacklands is all about the effect of crimes on people through the generations, and I love the irony of Mason Dingle’s son being as much a victim of that as anybody, despite his ambition to escape. I know some readers have thought the scene was an afterthought and sticks out like a sore thumb, but I really like exploring every character—even those who only make a fleeting appearance—in my books. If they intersect with other characters and affect them or the plot, then I like to know why they do what they do.
What advice would you give someone with a family tragedy or secret like Steven’s? Should we all be as persistent, or is there a point at which one should give in to the weight of history and let it be?
I am lucky enough never to have been affected by such a tragedy. My only tool is my imagination, and I can imagine situations where both courses of action would be advisable. I guess that when something terrible happens, you respond to it the only way you can, and make the best of it that you can. Steven is probably extraordinary— but that’s why he’s my hero! Steven’s toiling on the moor is beautifully and realistically rendered.
Have you ever done any digging of your own?
No. I would have given up looking for the body of Uncle Billy at about the time Lewis did! But for Steven it’s his only hope of repairing his family; there is nothing else in his life, so I was completely behind his decision to keep going.
How is writing a prose narrative different from writing for film? Is there one that you’re more comfortable with? Could Blacklands translate to the screen?
With prose you really have to relax and enjoy yourself. Screenwriting is a far more dictatorial discipline, and you’re always compromising on time and space. Now that I’ve made the switch, I have little desire to go back to screenwriting, although it was an excellent preparation for novel writing, as I think it means there’s little padding in my books. I get impatient with padding! My original idea for Blacklands was to write it as a film, so I would love to see it on the screen someday.
Are you working on another novel? If so, is it set to be a thriller? (Or can you see it transforming into such, as was the case with Blacklands?)
I have just finished my second book, a crime thriller called Darkside, which is also set in Shipcott, but is a stand-alone story.