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BNI Networking - A Visitor's Guide based on 0 ratings. 2 reviews.
I think you should use spell check. Don't apologize for spelling errors, fix them! This is how you do spellcheck: scroll allll the way back up to the beginning of your story. Carefully read over it and correct any grammar or spell mistakes. Now, I noticed you had a lot of run-on sentences. Those are were you put more than one subject in a sentence. You should ONLY have one subject unless the sentence has two important things, such as 'The apples and oranges were tasty.'. I don't know if you know how to diagram sentences, but if you try to diagram more than one subject, good luck with the impossible! Once again, if you need help for ideas or have a question, you can contact me at 'fijun'. I will check for posts daily. Have a great day! --Starry Night
Totally awesome writing! Great work! Keep going!