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For the First Time
     

For the First Time

2.0 11
by Alison Grey
 

Taking the train to work is a boring routine for Melissa—at least until she meets Kendra, a gorgeous fellow commuter, for the first time.

Overview

Taking the train to work is a boring routine for Melissa—at least until she meets Kendra, a gorgeous fellow commuter, for the first time.

Product Details

BN ID:
2940044838819
Publisher:
Ylva Publishing
Publication date:
08/27/2012
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
101,067
File size:
94 KB

Meet the Author

Alison has been writing since the age of ten. Her first works were poems and short stories; then she wrote her first novel-length book when she was eleven. It was a Star Trek: The Next Generation fanfiction.


In addition to writing, Alison likes spending her spare time with her friends. The vegetarian also loves cooking and baking. If she’s got enough time, she reads books about history and about social and political sciences.

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For the First Time 2.1 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I'm giving this a 5 star because I'm completely annoyed and amazed that in 7 pages I'm both hooked and finished with the story. I want to read more and angry that I can't. I tip my hat to you, Miss Grey. Well done.
Turtlshellz More than 1 year ago
For an eight page short story that has the feeling that it is the beginning of something much longer this story really is not at all bad. In fact it is very well written. I only hope that the other takes the time to expand it into a full length short story, novella, or novel at some point. However as is it does stand on its own. It is an account of the first meeting between two women on a train. Or perhaps the first two meeting - The first sighting and then the first conversation. For a free story - in my opinion - you cannot really go very wrong. Worth reading if only for the fact that it IS free and the writing skill the author shows.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The other reviews referred to 7 or 8 pages of a short story. I read it on my tablet and it was barely over 3 pages. It was a very good start to what could have been a good short story. The rest of the pages were advertising other books published by this company, but they were written in what I assume is german.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It was very short but was well written. I hope she extends the story as well because the ending stinks.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I know it was free but other free books where that. books. this was nothing more than a very short sample, one page?!?!?!?
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It would be excellent if it had an actual plot. The whole thing is only a single conversation.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The story itself is only 7 pages long even though the total page count is 25. It is well written, and it ended just as I was getting fully invested in the characters and the story. I wish it had been just a little bit longer.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book for a short rad start off good but end terribke with no plot what so ever. Remind me of this author lack of plot leaving everything out
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This goes absolutly nowhere and this review is longer than the story:( major waste of time
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Wasnt anything to this and a bunch of german pages