She wants it.
She needs it.
But she can’t have it.
But she takes it anyway.
Forbidden is a short story about craving for the chocolate. And giving in.
|Publisher:||Tara Jade Brown|
|File size:||276 KB|
About the Author
I live in Switzerland next to the Zürich Lake. I am married, have two beautiful boys, two cats and a dog. In my previous (pre-author) life I was a neuroscientist, a marketing manager and an entrepreneur. Now, my work is my passion: writing. I hope you will enjoy the world of my imagination.
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
I have the hips from chocolate. Sadly!!!! I did like the short story. J... :-@
This was a completely and totally awesome short story! I have never before read anything like it. I felt I was facing the dilemma the character was facing. And, really the ending is like a metaphor, don't you agree? Please. Pray, you will stop drawing attention to the 'vague' ending, and just enjoy the symbol it represents. This was just so honest and so spot on and so trueee! I probably won't need to keep eating chocolate when I am craving it because I'll have this short story to eat up! Cheers to the author for writing something so unique and real.
The description of the absolute ecstacy of exquisite chocolate was dead on. MMMMMM!! But the ending was a total disconnect from the rest of the story. Was she still talking about chocolate or something deeper and unrelated? The end without an answer.
This was a VERY short story. I will give the author kudos for the description of what was forbidden but the ending of it just left you wondering why.
Temptation is what we find that is forbidden to us that we find hard to resist cl