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How to Write a Short Story; an Exposition of the Technique of Short Fiction based on 0 ratings. 1 reviews.
Ash. Fire. Ember. Those words travel repeatively through Ashes mind. She loved fire. Some called her a pyromaniac but shes your simple young girl. She was pale with blue eyes and red hair the color of fire. She stood at the edge of a funeral pyre. Her grandmother, the last of her family, was dead. 16 year old Ashley Jones was alone in the world. "Goodbye." She choked out. Then she burst into tears. Fire engulfed te body of her grandmother as the funeral workers tossed the body in. They didn't do it gently which made Ashes burn with fury. The pyre started to move unnaturally and the flames licked at her. They didn't burn her, soon, she was engulfed in the fire. People screamed in terror. Ashes turned and glared at the funeral workers, "BURN!" The workers burst into flames and died. Please review.