Indomitable (Chronicles of Promise Paen Series #2)

Indomitable (Chronicles of Promise Paen Series #2)

by W. C. Bauers


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ISBN-13: 9780765375445
Publisher: Tom Doherty Associates
Publication date: 07/26/2016
Series: Chronicles of Promise Paen Series , #2
Pages: 368
Product dimensions: 6.20(w) x 9.30(h) x 1.30(d)

About the Author

W. C. BAUERS has worked on the sales side of publishing for more than thirteen years. Unbreakable is his first novel. His interests include Taekwondo, reading and writing military science fiction, toting gear for his Alpha Unit, and French press brewing. He lives in the Rocky Mountains with his wife and three boys.

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The Chronicles of Promise Paen, Book Two

By W. C. Bauers

Tom Doherty Associates

Copyright © 2016 William C. Bauers
All rights reserved.
ISBN: 978-1-4668-4730-9



A round the size of Promise's trigger finger hit her like a maglev. It tore through her mechsuit and mushroomed in her chest, just above her heart. Miraculously, it didn't go off. Promise stumbled backward and off the cliff's face, into thousands of meters of darkness. Neuroinhibitors flooded her system almost as fast as the pain. This is it flashed across her mind as her body flatlined. Tomorrow I'm hero-dead.

Her vision grayed out and she lost all feeling in her hands and feet.

Promise rag-dolled in her mechsuit ... fell and fell and fell, perilously close to the cliff's face. Her heel caught an outcropping several hundred meters below. Her AI, Mr. Bond, sealed the hole in her chest, and patched and packed it with cauterizing goo. Then Bond isolated the round kissing her heart in a null field, in case it decided to go off on its own timetable. Removing it was out of the question, and beyond the mechsuit's capabilities. A Marine Corps cutter would have to brave that. And there were more pressing matters to attend to. Her heart had stopped beating.

The mechsuit intubated her and zapped her pumper. One, two, three ... six times before her heart's arteries and connective tissues remembered how to work in concert. A single stroke came followed by another, and then a stable thrum thrum thrum. Promise gasped, and came to. Her heads-up display blared with error messages she couldn't process. Her ears weren't discriminating sounds. Her body felt disemboweled, as if someone had ripped her soul clean out and now someone else was trying to stuff it back in but the fit was wrong. Insert leg there. No, not there, there. The tube down her throat was the worst violation. Mercifully, Bond pulled it out.

"SITREP," Promise said, the words a faint, hoarse whisper.

"You're in an uncontrolled descent. There's an armor-piercing explosive round in your chest."

"Is the APER hot?"


Promise exhaled, blinked hard, but still couldn't make sense of her HUD.

"Today is a bad day to die." Her voice was stronger now, the sky a starless void. "Why aren't my lamps on?"

"Stand by," said Bond at the same time that her proximity alarm howled.

Promise's forward lamps lit several milliseconds later. She gasped, and threw her hands out in front of her, which sent her tumbling backward end over end. Meters away, the rock face somersaulted in and out of view.

"Could ... have ... warned ... me," she said through clenched teeth. Down became up became down until she couldn't tell the difference between them anymore.

"I tried, Lieutenant." Bond sounded mildly put out. "Tuck your arms to your sides. I'll right you."

Her mechsuit's ailerons bit into the wind, stopped the tumble, and reoriented her: head down, feet up, knifing toward the watery deck. The distance opened between her and the wind-carved face at her six o'clock.


"Twenty-five hundred meters."


"There's an island up ahead, ten degrees to starboard, three klicks out. Because of the headwind, you'll cover one-point-three klicks before splashing down."

That means a long swim ... if I survive impact. "Comm the gunny."

"Your comm is out. The APER pulsed when it hit you, and the pulse knocked out most of your systems, including your heart. My secondary shielding held. You've lost weapons, scanners, countermeasures, braking thrusters, and the gravchute. You're going to hit hard."


"Bail out."

"... Of my armor? You've got to be kidding."

"You tweaked my personality chip to make that impossible, ma'am." Bond sounded a bit too sure of itself for Promise to be sure her tweaking had fully taken hold.

"Mr. Bond, I don't believe my tweaking worked."

Her AI made a tsking sound, three times. "Let's debate that later, ma'am, during my next inspection. Your beegees were recently upgraded. Use your microgravchute embedded in the fabric between your shoulder blades." Her beegees, or standard-issue mechsuit underarmor, were good for a lot of things. Prevented chafing. Absorbed energy fire. Made using the head while suited tolerable. Barely. The microgravchute was going to come in handy. But first she had to bail ... out of her armor ... which was the only thing keeping her alive at the moment.

"It's double-shielded and should still work. Theoretically. I lost my link to it so I can't tell if it's operational. You'll have to manually activate it."

"And if it doesn't work?"

Not one tsk now. "Passing three thousand meters."

This is going to be fun. "Did I see lights overhead while we were flipping?"

"Someone went over the cliff's face with us," Bond said. "I can't tell friendly from foe, not without my scanners."

"It won't matter if we botch the landing," Promise said. She stretched her limbs to slow her fall, and then made a slight correction with one hand, and rotated onto her back. "Open up on three and stay level. I'll rise. You fall away."

"Roger that," Bond said. "Good luck, ma'am."

"On my mark." She counted down from three. "Mark!"

Her mechsuit's chest, arms, and shanks unsealed. The air chilled her to the marrow. She felt the slightest movement upward before the suction ripped her out of her suit and into the open sky. For a moment she felt like a leaf blown about the air by an unrelenting gale. She wrestled the wind for control for several seconds. Far below her the lamps on her mechsuit grew dim.

Promise spread-eagled to kill as much speed as possible. She pressed her right thumb against her pinkie for a two-count. Her mechsuit's lamps vanished. Bond just splashed down. She flexed the thumb again. Prayed the drive-by-wire backup transmitted the impulse from her thumb to her minigravchute. She was nearly panic-stricken when the chute deployed a second later and dislocated her left shoulder.

Her descent slowed to a survivable fall before reaching an all-stop. Her night vision intensified until the darkness around her lifted. The sun crested the horizon. Howling winds fell silent. Promise looked down, looked between her mechboots, looked at the endless indigo ocean for as far as the eye could see. Her arms flailed widely for something to grab hold of as the fear of falling warred with her other senses; contrary to the laws of physics, she was standing on air. No, she was floating. Flying, maybe? Somehow she was hundreds of meters above the watery deck, holding station. After a few moments of abject terror she willed herself to calm down.

I'm not falling. I'm safe. Relax, P, you can figure this out.

A far-off object entered her field of view. A door perhaps, maybe a person. It was moving toward her. The door became a human silhouette and then a heavily damaged mechsuit: armor crushed; helmet lost somewhere in the clouds. The driver's eyes were open, lifeless. Now she could see the rank on the driver's armor and her bloodshot eyes. Then another mechsuit floated into view. Promise turned her head and saw not one but three lifeless bodies, all suited, all closing in. None wore helmets. Their faces were cadaver blue. Their hair waved gently in the air though no breeze stirred it. With nothing to grab ahold of or push off from, somehow Promise was able to rotate in the air and look behind her. The sky was raining dead Marines. Above her. Below her. The nearest boot opened his mouth to speak.

"Lance Corporal Tal Covington, present." The voice howled like a wind-shot cavern. Covington's eyes rolled up into his head and began to bleed. Then his body blew apart.

Promise threw her hands up without thinking, slammed her eyes shut to blunt the bright flash of light that followed. A moment later it dawned upon her that she was still alive, not blown to quarks. When she dared to look, Covington was still floating in the sky, two meters away, but his body was rent asunder. The explosion had frozen in process milliseconds after happening. Covington's armor was cracked a thousand ways, his organs and bones stitched together with little else but air.

To her right, Promise heard labored breathing, followed by an anguished cry that punched her squarely in the gut. A blast of heat swept over her, blistering the side of her face, her lips, and the inside of her mouth; the taste of death was on her tongue. Turning, she saw a mechsuit engulfed in fire. The wearer was desperately trying to put the flames out with what was left of his gauntlets. She couldn't look away from the hands. Metal and flesh clung stubbornly to skeletal hands. Then, as unexpectedly as the blaze had appeared, it simply went out. The smoking remains of a scorched mechanized Marine came to attention, and a blackened skull opened its mouth. Bits of charred flesh dangled from its upper lip. "Corporal Vil Fitzholm, present."

"Private First Class Molly Starns, present," came from Promise's opposite side. Starns started convulsing. She ripped her tongue from her throat and threw it at Promise. Starns's head rolled to the side and off of her shoulders. Bits of connective tissue refused to let go.

"Staff Sergeant Moya Hhatan, present." Hhatan was floating dead ahead of Promise. "All boots present and damned for eternity." Hhatan's lips curled upward, exposing shaved canines stained with blood.

No, this isn't possible, Promise thought. Hhatan was trying to swim through the air toward her. I watched you die. I tried to save you but your wounds ... and the enemy was so close. You sacrificed yourself for me. Told me to go and then ... I ran away.

"I'm so sorry, Staff Sergeant," Promise said. Hhatan was nearly on her. "I tried, really. I did my best, I couldn't stop them all." Promise raised her hands palms-up in front of her and kicked her legs to try to get away. "Please. Please ... you have to believe me."

Staff Sergeant Hhatan drew a Heavy Pistol from her holster and took aim. "You don't deserve to live, Lieutenant." Then something peculiar happened. The staff sergeant's face grew young. Years of experience melted away, the eyes changed from blue to green. "You left me on Montana." The voice morphed so quickly that Promise barely registered the change. Now complete, Hhatan's appearance was for Promise a looking-glass mirror. "Your time is up. Good-bye, Lieutenant."

Promise heard her own voice say, "I'll see you in perdition."

Hhatan's gloved finger tensed around the trigger of the Heavy Pistol, took up the slack. The air cracked in two. Muzzle fire blossomed. When Promise opened her eyes the bullet had traveled half the distance from Hhatan to her. A second later it was a meter away, and then half a meter off. Promise screamed as the bullet pierced her temple, drilled through the crown of her skull, and tore her mind apart.



The screams told her to wake up.

First Lieutenant Promise Tabitha Paen bolted upright, fully alert, First Wave blaring in her mastoid implant. The band was surfing high across the nets with "Alternate You," a throwback of classic metal and new-groove rage, set against a track of cosmic background noises. Week-one sales had topped all previous records. Promise dropped her feet over the side of her rack and hit the cold polished deck of her government-assigned quarters. Back straight, shoulders squared, and eyes focused dead ahead. She started counting "One, two, three ..." as First Wave's lead singer screamed in perfect pitch. "There's another you who's stalking true, better run the 'verse, better strike-back-first!" At forty-nine, Promise fell over, laced her hands behind her head, and stopped when her abs gassed out and her "alternate you" found her "jumping dreams" while her "real self screams."

"Enough." Promise shook her head to clear out the dissonance and pursed her lips. "Um ... play Chiam's Sonata in G Minor." Melody flooded her ears as her pulse settled down to normal.

The nightmares are getting worse, she thought as she rolled again onto her arms, pushed up, and started counting down from fifty. Forty-nine, forty-eight, forty-seven ... To this point, the nightmares had been a rehash of her battles on Montana. She'd watched her Marines die again and again and again, each death more gruesome than the last. Forty-three, forty-two, forty-one ... Perhaps it was her penance for failing them, for leaving so many dead on her birth world, or so she thought. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right? At best that was a hollowed-out truth. What failed to kill you still exacted its own pound of flesh, and not even sleep offered an escape. The nightmares were definitely getting worse.

A jolt of pain caused Promise to cry out at twenty-nine. She collapsed onto her side, clutching her hands over her pounding chest. Surely there was a gaping hole in her heart that must have turned black by now. Perhaps all that remained of it was a deathly hollow, carved out by the worst kind of flesh eater. Survivor's guilt.

I know because most of my first command is dead, she thought.

Her dead wouldn't stop coming to her mind. The Skipper is dead, Lance Corporal Tal Covington shielded me from that blast and got hero-dead, Staff Sergeant Hhatan is dead because I left her behind, my mother — dead, father — dead, all turned to dust except for me.

Tears pooled in her eyes. "Sir, if you're so good, how could you have let this happen?"

Promise willed herself up off the floor and on with her morning. She had a busy day ahead of her. The gunny was expecting her in less than an hour. She didn't bother drying her eyes as she force-marched herself to the head, shedding clothes as she went. "On." A bad memory flashed across her mind. Promise drowned it out by turning on the water as hot as she could stand it. A quick dunk under the faucet rinsed most of the night terrors away. She blindly felt for her towel on the wall. Dried. Stood up straight and punched her reflection in the face. Crack. The woman in the mirror was familiar except for the glass fractures — same eyes colored like sparkling ocean, same pale skin — but where Promise's hair was short, the reflection's was long. Where Promise was angles the woman in the mirror had curves. She was old enough to be Promise's mother.

"Warn me next time." Promise forced herself to breathe.

"Sorry, munchkin. I came as fast as I could." Sandra Paen was dressed in a silk robe with a low neckline. An ornate tail curled over her shoulders, and coiled around her heart. Promise drew a circle around her breast, mimicking the coil of the dragon's tail in the mirror.

"You remember." Sandra's hand was over her heart.

"How could I forget?" Of course Promise remembered the robe. It was the same one her mother had worn shortly before her death.

The gold band on Sandra's hand caught the overhead light. The band symbolized a bond that was supposedly unbreakable. Life had proven otherwise.

"Look, Mom. Now is not the time. My unit has morning PT. I'm needed out there. I have to go."

"The gunny can handle it." Sandra dared Promise to deny it. Sandra reached out of view and came up with a towel. "You need to talk about the dreams," she said as she dried her hair.

I already have. BUMED cleared me for duty, Promise thought. She didn't feel like discussing this particular matter. Besides, her mother was adept at reading minds. Well, hers anyway.

"That's not what I meant and you know it. You told the psychobabbler what he wanted to hear, not what's really going on inside of you." Sandra hung her towel on her side of the mirror and folded her arms.

Promise glanced at the empty hook on the wall and knew she was going mad.

Sandra cleared her throat. "Correct me if I'm wrong."

I told them enough ... and I didn't lie. A Marine never lies, but that doesn't mean I have to tell the whole truth either. I've got this.

"For how long?" Sandra asked. "We both know you're running on damaged cells. What happens when they fail?"

I'll survive. Promise knew it was a lie. She was as close to lying as she had ever been comfortable with. It's just a thought. I'm not responsible for every thought that crosses my mind.


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Indomitable 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 3 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Enjoy Bauers’s work, and I hope to see more soon.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Can not wait for the next in the series
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Even better than the 1st book in the series