Little Girl Lost

Little Girl Lost

by Tristan J. Tarwater

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BN ID: 2940152218978
Publisher: Back That Elf Up
Publication date: 04/14/2012
Sold by: Draft2Digital
Format: NOOK Book
Sales rank: 796,296
File size: 824 KB

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Little Girl Lost (The Valley of Ten Crescents #0) 2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 1 reviews.
ArizonaFlame More than 1 year ago
Tristan J Tarwater, Little Girl Lost, B007UIYEAW , Personally, I think it is silly to publish this short tidbit all by itself.  Why not use at the first chapter, or keep as prequel and include with the first book of the series? It would be different if this were more than 15 pages. This is not a short story, rather it is more like a chapter. It isn't even long enough to connect with the reader.   Along with the irritation of the size, there are also numerous grammatical/spelling errors.  This adds to the frustration.  I like the story idea however it is in desperate need of a rewrite.  In fact, a good rewrite could easily add to this story as there are numerous details which could and should be added to create a top-notch story.  As is stands, there are too many holes in the story as it is too short and does not give the reader time to be drawn in.