Spirit Link (The Demon Akahaziel, Book One)

Spirit Link (The Demon Akahaziel, Book One)

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Overview

Spirit Link (The Demon Akahaziel, Book One) by A J Fincher, Adu Sheppard

When his magic disturbs a slumbering demon, Dmitri the Exarch is sent to France to find the only person that can help him banish the demon that broke through.

Upon his arrival, it is clear that the Demon Akahaziel has beaten him there. Dmitri must then use every last bit of his magic to find the demon and thwart his evil plans.

Product Details

ISBN-13: 9781479133611
Publisher: CreateSpace Publishing
Publication date: 06/27/2013
Pages: 222
Product dimensions: 5.00(w) x 8.00(h) x 0.51(d)

About the Author

A J Fincher is a Victorian-born Queensland resident. He enjoys programming, painting, and wildlife photography. Spirit Link is his first foray into fiction, and this certainly won't be the last time we hear of Dmitri.

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Spirit Link (The Demon Akahaziel, Book One) 1 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 1 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I could only force myself to make it three chapters into this book. The dialogue is stilted and its tags switch back and forth (e.g. he said, then said he). Several sentences ended on 'was' or 'of'. There were several paragraphs that went on with pronouns without naming who they referenced. The elemental magical system didn't feel developed. The magickers seemed to summon elementals at will. Is this well of energy endless? What do the magic users sacrifice to conjure their spells? Right now -- nothing. The author went too far out of the way to ensure the reader got his meaning. The writing style came across as condescending.  It has a fair premise,  but falls short of a strong first draft.