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The Cloud Magician: Book One based on 0 ratings. 1 reviews.
This is not a book. It is either a wandering, pointless long story or the long beginning of a novel. It is 120 pages about a college student and a high school senior abducted by alien magicians as one is presumed to be a long missing master magician. Negatives listed and aside, this is a pleasant story/beginning written, it seems, for a young audience. I don't recall any of the grammar or copy editing errors common in many free books. I think the author has promise and so has the story. Both remind me a bit of Alan Dean Foster and his Xanth novels. No great adventure but diverting. I hope more is planned.