The Haunted Hearse

The Haunted Hearse

by Drac Von Stoller
1.7 7

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The Haunted Hearse 1.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This story had potential. But, it was repetitive and redundant. The same words or phrases were used again and again, often in the same sentence. There were too many run-on sentences and other grammar issues. Although, this story was better than other tales written by the author. A note to the author: Keep writing. You are getting better at it. This short story has a beginning, a middle, and an end, while previous stories were lacking in these essential writing elements. Just remember that an author needs to include an introduction (includes a description of the setting and main chatacter), a central conflict in the middle, and a conclusion (a wrap-up of all loose ends, and conflict resolution). A tidy ending brings the story around full-circle. Best of luck to you! -AvidReader
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is a very short story that seems to be lacking. There were several grammatical errors. It was very choppy and often repeated. This could easily be a great short with some polishing.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Definitely has potential, but rather disjointed and choppy.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I don't like giving bad reviews on any book or author. Everyone has their own opinion. This book only has 8 pages, but I thought it had potential.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Sometimes more is not better. I wish it were possible to block an author when searching for books, this guy has flooded the horror catagory with awful short stories.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
If you look past the grammatical errors and run-on sentences the story is okay.