Duncan is travelling with his new girlfriend when she is attacked and killed by a vampire-slayer. Duncan is convinced his girlfriend was not a vampire.What do you do when someone comes in your sleep and tells you that a lot of evil is taking place in the world and you are the one the Gods have chosen to save the world? And that saving the world involves creating a child with a virgin?
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About the Author
M.N Providence has worked in construction, in sales and most recently as a teacher at some high schools.I enjoy writing stories that I enjoy reading,and always pray that what I like will also interest readers.Thank very much for your time and patience in reading this profile.
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
The Legacy of Hatred based on 0 ratings. 3 reviews.
I agree with the other reviews, it needs editing... Badly! It had the makings of a good story BUT it jumped around too much. It'd say something about a character then move on to another and then go back to the other character with no explanations. At one point something insane happens which results in one character briefly going insane then waking up and he says nothing about it. I thought it was a dream until towards the end when the character goes to get revenge. It was so "all over the place" that I felt like the author didn't know what kind of story it should be. Romance? General fiction? Mystery? I don't know!
This is a really good story but in bad need of an editor. Never boring and fast paced.
I only made it to page 32. Too confusing to follow. Editing is needed. Couldnt get into it.