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Burnedtangle, Burnedbranch, Burnedleaf, Burnedshard, Burnedgrass, Burnedash. Continue, PLEASE!
"You're sure you don't want to come with us?"<br>Rocky nodded. "Clans ain't for me. I may'a been born there, but I was raised here."<br>Shardflight sighed. "Alright, then." They said their goodbyes, and the two Clan cats went out into the forest. Shardflight's thoughts swirled. 'What else didn't I know about my life? And why would she throw him out?' He remembered Thistlepaw's silvery pelt and realized Rocky's fur was much darker than his brothers'. 'No way...she didn't like the color of his pelt?! That's no reason to leave him for dead!'<br>As they trekked on, Burnedpaw noticed something shiny in the distance. "Hey! What's that?"<br>"Don't touch it!" Shardflight shouted as she bounded up to it.<br>"Shardflight, there's a mouse in there!" she said, staring at it.<br>Shardflight looked inside it, feeling sick. "That mouse is dead. This is probably a trap." He looked around. The mouse laid in a shrub–a very leafy shrub. Shardflight started pulling branches away and came across something like the fence at the rogue camp, only much smaller. "It...it's a cage!"<br>Burnedpaw started backing away from it, and Shardflight decided to follow suit. 'This is clearly a trap for cats...could that mean this is Clan territory?' But he couldn't scent any boundary markers. Then again, maybe Twolegs thought Clan cats would leave their territory to come this close to Twolegplace. Twolegs were stupid like that.<br>The two carefully went on their way, steering clear of any traps they saw...except for the one right in front of them. Shardflight hadn't heard Burnedpaw's warning and had wandered into one of the traps. It snapped shut as he tried to escape, and he lashed at the surrounding mesh to no avail. "Burnedpaw!" he yowled. "Keep searching for a Clan! They might be able to free me!"<br>But the apprentice shook her head. "I'm not leaving you. I'll get you out myself."<br>"Do what your mentor tells you!" But she ignored him and pawed at the latch on the front of the cage.<br>Once she figured out how to open it, she said, "Okay, I'm going to open it. Run out right away, because it's going to snap shut as soon as I let go." With that, she bit down on the latch and lifted the door with her paws. Shardflight ran out, but not quite fast enough. The door closed shut on Burnedpaw's paw, and she yowled it pain. Shardflight got it open again so she could get her paw out, and then let it snap shut again with nothing but the dead mouse inside.<br>"How's your paw?" he asked gently.<br>Shardflight was surprised by how stoic she was. "It's fine. I can't walk with it, but it's not that big a deal." She continued on with a limp, and Shardflight followed.<p>They camped in a tree that night. Shardflight could tell a Clan was nearby. 'Our journey's almost over,' he thought. 'Thank you, Kite, Adder, Rocky. You've all helped me learn more than I ever would have in a Clan.' He suddenly caught himself. 'Wait–I was in a Clan. What am I saying?'<br>Burnedpaw stared down at the ground. Something felt off. A strange scent hung in the air, one that she couldn't remember any cat having and yet familiar. 'What is it?' she wondered. 'Where could I have smelled that before?'<br>Several sets of eyes shown in the surrounding darkness, though neither Clan cat noticed them. A deep voice said for only the others to hear, "It seems we missed a couple. Let's finish what we started two moons ago."<p>Okay, so, can anyone think of a good warrior name for Burnedpaw? Just curious.