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Demetra, an alleged test pilot finds herself in 2265, but how did she get there and what do The Watchers want from her...and will she find her way home, back to 2105.
Anonymous
Posted September 29, 2012
Great story, with a short, quick plot, interesting ending, and overall good writing, this book is a must read.
12 out of 13 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 2, 2012
It was a quick read an interesting storyline although the ending seemed a bit rushed.
8 out of 9 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 15, 2012
Good storyline, interesting characters, and a twist ending.
7 out of 9 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 8, 2012
Very good for a short story. I loved it.
6 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 17, 2013
Great premise and story, but the poor grammar and punctuation really killed this story for me.
5 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 26, 2012
I found this book to be very surprising. I would recommend it to anyone.
4 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 19, 2013
There are 31 pages. 33 if you count the title page and the copyright one. Not bad for a short story, but it could use a little editing.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 3, 2013
I think the premise was good, but I don't think the execution was good. The dialogue was very stilted. And it just didn't feel natural. I understand it was a short story, but there was nothing to make you want to keep reading.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 12, 2013
Good not Great. Short, could have done so much more with fleshing out the story. Would make a very good Twlight Zone
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 12, 2012
Even it was short i enjoyed to read it.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 4, 2013
This book totally sucks! What really bugs me is that there are no periods on the end of dialouge sentences. It is really hard to follow. I think this is very close to the worst book that I've ever read. Don't waste your time!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 7, 2012
I liked the twist to the ending
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 30, 2012
Written well enough but way to brief to be called even a novella.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 24, 2012
A short, easy, fairly interesting read.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 10, 2012
Well, I really liked this book. Also I never seen the ending coming. Good job. Thanks for the free read. J...... :)
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 19, 2013
It was ok. There were 11 pages on my Nook. The story was well but there could of been more.
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Posted May 18, 2013
The book was short, and I read it all in about a half hour. I guess it was okay, but a little hard to understand who was talking. It also had a few grammer mistakes. The ending was a twist, and I love those kind of books. -Ian 11
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Posted February 23, 2013
Really wish it was longer. The grammer is also iffy. Great story tho!
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Posted January 31, 2013
Very well written and enjoyable. Short story that kepted me interested through the end. Great jon
0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 13, 2013
Pretty good short. Just 11 pages written like an episode of The Outer Limits.
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Demetra, an alleged test pilot finds herself in 2265, but how did she get there and what do The Watchers want from her...and will she find her way home, back to 2105.