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Anonymous
Posted February 10, 2010
My first free ebook. I thought this book was extremely funny. Kept me laughing all the way through.
57 out of 78 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 6, 2010
this book is entertaining but random! its cute and i would of never guess the ending.
43 out of 64 people found this review helpful.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.This is well worth reading, let me just say that upfront. Everything bad I say simply kept me from giving it more stars, not from enjoying the story. First off, the author has to clean up the language a bit. I am not a prude or anything, but I'm sorry - when every other word is swearing it takes one out of the dialogue a bit. Second, the author has to slow down just a bit. i know that this is really just a short story and all... But let us get to know the characters a bit more. As it is the story moves just a bit too fast. Third, I saw the end coming halfway through the story - it was not exactly a surprise. And the characters reacted to the end in wildly inconsistent ways. I won't spoil it, but you will understand what I mean when you get to the end. All that said, this is still a good, fast read that goes down easy.
28 out of 37 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 13, 2010
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It's like a college freshman's Creative Writing project/draft, but not as good. Very cool concept... poor execution.
19 out of 34 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 19, 2010
This could have been a great book but it turned out to be a complete waste of time. The story line was interesting but it read like a third grader with a foul mouth. I don't think I'll ever read another book from this "writer" (using writer very loosly).
14 out of 27 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 18, 2010
I'm sure that if you could sit and make yourself read this it may have been funny. But it was soooooooooo badly written I could not even make myself read it!
13 out of 21 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 13, 2010
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I downloaded this for my nook and it didn't disappoint. The overall storyline was funny and unusual and it's a shame it's so short. I feel like this could easily be made into a full length book if not an entire series. My only word of caution is that the language is truly horrible with the f-bomb being dropped about every other sentance. If you can get past that then you're in for a quick, quirky story about a women whose life was cut tragically short and lengths she goes to as a ghost to punish her guilty ex-boyfriend and find her MIA body. Because as she finds out, being dead isn't all it's cracked up to be.
11 out of 16 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 1, 2010
This book was so poorly written and very unenjoyable. It jumped around a lot and there was never really a connection to any of the characters. I read the whole thing and wasn't that impressed.
9 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Posted June 28, 2010
it was a fast and simple read
it was worth the free download
:D
7 out of 15 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 11, 2010
Okay, I admit I only made it (almost) through page three. But even that was excruciating. The dialogue was horrible, it was hard to tell who he was talking to, especially since no one seems to be answering back. The story starts with a prologue that is actually more of an afterword. My eleven year grandson has written more cohesive and infinitely more entertaining stories. I am not sure this was worth the time it took to download it.
7 out of 13 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 30, 2010
Ms. Kramer has a very interesting idea here, and it's one that could be very funny in the hands of a better author. Unfortunately, her skills need a significant amount of polish before they're ready to stand up to the plot. Dialogue is flat, listless, and riddled with "wit", with an overall sound like what you'd expect from a seventh grader. Her characters are cardboard stereotypes and their motivations are never really explored or explained. The "twist" is so far out of left field that it's unfair to call it a surprise- it's more as though she discovered the book she was writing was incredibly dull and needed a sudden shock, so she threw in something and pretended to have foreshadowed it. Give Ms. Kramer a few years and see if she matures well, but don't bother with this book.
7 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 19, 2011
I really hate to give a bad review on a book, but this book was terrible. There is no start, no plot, confusing middle and I didn't even bother to read the end.
6 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 29, 2010
This is definitely a quick one. Not a very original plot but still very fun to read with an unexpected ending.
6 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.This short story has some pretty silly parts, and almost every character is dislikable. And yet... you finish it mostly to see if the author will pull the pieces together in a satisfying way. While that never really happens, this thin story does show promise in places and give you hope that the author might try harder next time. In the meantime, it's worth the quick read as a free story.
6 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 29, 2011
There is alot of cursing in like two senteces. DONT GET IT IF ONLY THERE WAS A ZERO STAR RATING
5 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 30, 2010
Written in the style of a poor man's Christopher Moore this short story was choppy and left out some important details. Would not read another story by Naomi Kramer
5 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 19, 2010
Such a fun read. Even worth a second reading in the future. Sad that it was so short because I wanted more of the characters. Look forward to future works by Naomi Kramer!
4 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 17, 2012
Im 14, so im obviously not prude. But i really hated this book. The f word doesnt need to be used that much, and i couldnt understand it? I was so lost. It was like somthing some goth wanna-be wrote it while as high as a kite! ( no offense to the auther) just wasnt that great. And i actully read it because the reveiws were so bad, i wanted to see if they were really right. They were
3 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 8, 2012
I have to say this was a funny book. As an independant comic artist/creator, i have to say this story series would make a nice little graphic novel to read.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 27, 2011
Too much cursing wordsIhad to put one star or i cant post.
3 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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LendMe™
Overview
Linda’s had a bad day. First her boyfriend killed her. Then she woke up, still on this boring plane of existence, and with an odd obsession about her missing body. Mike won’t tell her what he did with her body and she can’t find the stupid thing herself. There’s only one thing she can do - torment the bastard until he coughs up the information.Contains adult themes and ...