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Jason Gouvas doesn't want to believe he has special abilities or that humanity's fate rests on his shoulders, but the dead girl in his mind can be quite persuasive.
Chapter 1
My eyes are crusted shut. Blood I guess. I don't —I don't remember being hit, but my throbbing forehead tells me something solid recently connected with it.
I'm lying face down. The smell of garbage and rancid grease sears my nostrils. I can hear the shuffling of feet around me. But who's there? I battle the haze in my mind, trying to figure out where I am and how I got here. It's not coming to me. Prickly jolts of pain shoot up through my fingers and toes. I stretch out and find my wrists and ankles are tied. They tingle sharply as the blood tries to circulate.
Voices, a woman and a man. He has a thick Italian accent, hers a softer one. I try to catch the words, but my mind is too foggy. There's a constant beating, hammering noise, and after a minute I realize it's just my head telling me it's not very happy. At least I'm still able to think that thought, or any thought for that matter. I probably should be dead.
So why am I still alive?
My stomach drops. Mom is probably wondering why I haven't called today. She'd be hysterical if she had any idea where I was. She didn't want me to be a cop in the first place. Said I was too young and I'd probably get killed. I'd really hate to prove her right. My ex-girlfriend Maria wouldn't be too thrilled either. We haven't talked in months, but I'd like to think that she'd still care if I got shot up by some bad guys. I wonder if I'll ever see her again. I don't want to die. Not like this.
A kick to my chin snaps my head back. I spit blood and wallow in my self-pity some more. Whoever's doing this, they're really enjoying it. Why don't they get to the point? I can't think of a reason to keep me alive. I don't even have a rich uncle to call for a ransom.
I hear a harsh voice in the dark. Is that Russian? I should have paid more attention in that class at the academy. I fight one eye open, but it's only a little brighter in whatever room I'm in. A pile of putrid garbage sits rotting inches from my face. Instinctively I recoil. That gets their attention. Suddenly I'm yanked to my feet. Two, maybe three sets of hands drag me up. It's still hard to tell what's going on. I guess I'm still wearing my own clothes, though they took my gun and belt. My leg holster is gone, so my backup is too.
"Zdraststvooy tyeh, you piece of trash."
Okay, definitely Russian. That's one of maybe three sayings I know. But is this the mafia? What about the Italians I heard earlier? Since when did the Italians hang out with the Russians? Maybe they're not as discriminating as I thought. My mind starts to clear. Things start coming back to me a little at a time.
We were following a tip from an informant. He said there was a meeting of some kind going on down by the Navy Yard on the South Side. He was scared, but not of us. There was something else that frightened him. Marty and I were just... Oh man. Marty.
There's no reason they would have kept us both alive. He's been my partner for the four months I've been on the force. He's a good cop. Twenty years on the job. He even volunteered to train me when I first got on. Said he wanted the challenge of teaching an eighteen-year-old the ropes. And now these scumbags are probably trying to figure out what to do with his body. My own pity disappears as I think about Marty's family. A few people will care if I'm gone, but Marty's got a wife and two daughters. They're never going to see him again. They're going to go to a funeral in the rain, with all the cops dressed in their finest clothes. There's going to be a twenty-one gun salute and bagpipes. The captain will fold up a flag and give it to his wife and his girls are going to cry their eyes out, wishing they could have their daddy back. And there's not a stinking thing I can do about it.
"What do you want from me?!" The scream erupts from my lips before I even know it's coming. I've had my share of good and bad times, and if this is the end for me, fine. But I don't want anyone else to get hurt. I grit my teeth against the bile rising in my throat. The room is momentarily silent. I think I shocked them a bit. Great, now the Russian is laughing at me. I memorize the sound of his voice. He's going to pay; it's my life's new goal. I just have to make it out of this alive.
Someone yanks my head back and suddenly I'm sputtering, spitting out the water that's pouring down on my face. A rough towel that reeks of pine cleaner is brushed across my eyes. I struggle against the dried blood to blink them open. My head is still foggy, but as I squint the shapes start to come into focus. The floor has even decided to stop spinning. A light flicks on in the corner, and I finally get a better view. Though from what I can see now, maybe I should have left my eyes closed.
Five men tower over me, but the woman is nowhere to be seen. I look around, trying to get a view of my captors, and it's pretty much what I expect to see. Vinnie and Ludo, the Moretti brothers, and Sal Florenazio. Apparently I've gotten the attention of the Giovani crime family. These other thugs must be with the Russians. But it still doesn't make sense. The Italians have been in Philly for years. The Russians have been slowly trying to push their way into a cut of the action for a while. But now all of a sudden everybody's best friends?
Something is very wrong here.
The clacking of high heels sounds on the floor behind me. I gingerly turn my head and see her—Nicole Giovani, the late Angelo Giovani's only daughter. She's a stunning, olive-skinned beauty. Rumor is she's as ruthless as she is gorgeous. She walks deliberately, her dark eyes burning a hole through me.
"Good morning, officer," she says with a sneer.
"Morning already?" I try to laugh, but it's a big mistake. My head reminds me it hasn't had the best night. I wince and drop my chin to my chest. "So, what can I do for you, Miss Giovani?" I manage. Go for the charm. Mom always said I was a charming guy, but I wouldn't expect Maria to back that up. I raise my head to meet Nicole's gaze. She's not impressed either. She and Maria should hang out and compare notes.
"You can start, officer, by telling us how you found us last night. Your partner has not been very forthcoming. Though in his state..."
He's alive? My heart leaps. Hang in there, Marty. There's a chance we might just make it out of here. You're going to see your family again, if I can just get us out of here, or at least buy us some time while we wait for a miracle.
"We were just on patrol in the area—"
I don't even have a chance to finish the lie before my legs are caved in from behind. Was that a baseball bat? The throbbing in my head gets some company as I try to figure out if I'll ever be able to walk again. If I get out of this alive, if I get Marty and myself out of this alive, we're taking a vacation. Somewhere they don't have mobsters. Utah, maybe. But as for right now, I'm writhing on the ground, trying to convince my body to not give up. The pain in my legs dulls to a slow steady pulse.
"Care to try again, officer?" she says almost politely.
How can someone with a voice like that be so evil? I'm able to wriggle into a sitting position, but there's no way I'm standing up right now, or anytime soon. Okay brain, we need a lie. Lie like you've never had to before. Some of that creative stuff, like when I completely spaced the birthday dinner for Maria's grandma. My mind races, and then I hear the echoes of a voice. It's a girl. She's saying something I can't quite make out.
"You guys hear that?" I ask.
Nicole looks at the Russian, who shrugs his shoulders. The voice gets louder. I can almost make out the words. It feels like there's something crawling inside my head, trying to get out. The voice grows, bouncing around in my brain, and suddenly I understand it.
"Jason!" the girl's voice says. "Hold on!"
I look up to Nicole again. "You guys seriously don't hear tha—"
A deafening explosion from behind cuts me off. It sounds like the whole wall was ripped away. The blast throws me forward and I smack my face on the concrete. Any other day that might really hurt, but today it's the least of my concerns. People are shooting and bodies are falling. It sounds like somebody brought some machine guns to the party. My mind spins. Has the cavalry arrived? I don't hear the familiar commotion of the SWAT team. No megaphones or sirens, either. It's doubtful that the chief even knows we're missing yet. I hope whoever this is is on our side.
Bright lights and bullets are still filling the room. The laughing Russian crumples to the floor in front of me. So much for my life's new goal. Guess I'll have to come up with a new one. That is, once I'm able to move again. I glance around quickly. It looks like Nicole made it out alive, but the two schmucks standing right next to her weren't so lucky. See ya Vinnie and Ludo. You won't be missed.
The gunfire stops abruptly. I hear footsteps approaching. I turn to look but the blazing lights hit my eyes, and once again, I'm blind. Once again, I'm also being manhandled. At least this time they're being a little bit gentler. And as far as I can tell, nobody has a baseball bat.
teachers_pet
Posted June 29, 2012
This story is creative, clean, and unique. It is appropriate for pre-teens as it is clean and fun to read. Adults who enoy a good paranormal advunture will love it as well.
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Posted June 4, 2012
Starts with a bang and ends with a bang. Both teenage boys and girls will love it. oH and adults too. I can't wait for Dan Harings next book.
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Oldsoul is a fantastic YA Paranormal. Dan Haring has just introduced me to an awesome main character named Jason Gouvas. Haring has also created amazing world in which the Oldsouls are at war with the Athanatos. Dan Haring is a male YA author. I've been reading a lot of novels from men YA authors lately, and Dan Haring is an awesome one. I fell in love with his action-packed scenes, intense writing, and to see romance from a man’s POV… oh yeah! Dan Haring had my heart swooning for Jason's romance with Mela. Dan Haring has delivered a remarkable story with Oldsoul, and I can't wait to read more from this new impressive, talented author.
Jason is a normal eighteen year old guy who lives in Philadelphia. Well, he thought he was normal, until the Oldsoul saves his life, and then they kidnap him. Darrius, the leader of the Oldsouls, tells Jason they’ve been waiting for him for a long time. And that he’s The Ancient of Days that will win the war against the Athanatos. Jason thinks they’re crazy, and he also thinks it’s a good possibility that he's crazy, too, until he hears Erin's voice talking to him in his mind and when he develops special abilities, he can’t deny the truth of who he is any longer. But Jason has kept a few of his new abilities hidden from the Oldsouls, and the last person he ever wanted to see in his life again will be the very person he needs.
Jason has another reason to stay with the Oldsoul. And her name is Mela. Jason has it bad for Mela. I loved Jason’s beautiful feelings and thoughts for Mela. Jason is definitely a charmer. He definitely charmed me right to swoon heaven with his romantic feelings for Mela. Erin is hilarious when it comes to Jason's relationship with Mela. It’s pretty rough having another girl in your head knowing all your romantic thoughts and feelings about the girl you love.
Oldsoul is action-packed, with fantastic humor and swooning romance. Jason will do whatever it takes to save the girl he loves. I'm so looking forward to the second book in the Oldsoul series. I highly recommend Oldsoul as a must read.
Anonymous
Posted April 8, 2012
Old soul
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Posted April 1, 2012
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Overview
Jason Gouvas doesn't want to believe he has special abilities or that humanity's fate rests on his shoulders, but the dead girl in his mind can be quite persuasive.