Mirah Bolender's fast-paced, adventure fantasy debut, City of Broken Magic, features a bomb squad that defuses magic weapons.
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Five hundred years ago, magi created a weapon they couldn’t control. An infestation that ate magicand anything else it came into contact with. Enemies and allies were equally filling.
Only an elite team of non-magical humans, known as sweepers, can defuse and dispose of infestations before they spread. Most die before they finish training.
Laura, a new team member, has stayed alive longer than most. Now, she’s the lastand onlysweeper standing between the city and a massive infestation.
About the Author
MIRAH BOLENDER graduated with majors in creative writing and art in May 2014. A lifelong traveler, she has traveled and studied overseas, most notably in Japan, and these experiences leak into her work. City of Broken Magic is her debut fantasy novel. She currently lives in Milwaukee, Wisconsin.
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
Clae is a professional Sweeper, who gets rid of infestations of nasty beasts who eat magic. Laura is his apprentice, being trained to save the world. More and more infestations with so few Sweepers. Sweepers are non magical humans who act like bomb diffusers. The beasts are smart and once they awake, it's a problem to kill them. Who will stop this before everyone dies? I liked Clae who was arrogant, but knew his business. Laura is young and her immaturity shows. I liked this book, but didn't love it. I received this book from Net Galley and Tor Publishing for a honest review. The opinions expressed are my own.
Ahoy there me mateys! I was excited about this book when I heard about it. The hook - a group of monsters that eat magic and everything else that they can get a hold of. The only thing standing in the way are a group called sweepers. These sweepers are described on Amazon as "bomb squad that defuses magic weapons." The blurb claims that sweepers are non-magical beings and that a sweeper named Laura is all that stands between the city and annihilation. Part of the problem with this book is that the blurb and this descriptions are NOT what the book is about. Laura is not the last sweeper left standing. The sweepers are not non-magical. The sweepers do not feel like a bomb squad at all. The positive things that made me finish the book were: - I loved the characters in this book. The main character, Laura, was intelligent, daring, snarky, and caring. This type of character always floats me boat. I also liked her teacher, Clae, and the other apprentice. I even liked the side characters like Morgan, Laura's aunt who cares about her niece but just doesn't understand anything about her. - I liked the weird monsters and how they manifested. I loved the opening scene told from the monster's point of view. I wanted to know more about the monsters and how they worked. While those things keep me reading, the world-building and plot made it harder and harder to finish the book. Unfortunately, there were major issues that made this an unlikable read for me. - The Monsters - Well this be the entire reason I wanted to read this book. I love me some fierce fighting of nasty beasties. Sadly the fighting was lackluster. There never seemed to be any real tactics for fighting or finding them. The two responses seemed to be throwing bombs at them and running away from them. Luck not strategy seemed to decide every encounter. - The Magic - This was one of those books where ye be thrown into the magic system and have to learn as ye go. There are cool hints to how the magic is used. The main basis for magic use is amulets. I liked the idea that these amulets are highly regulated. They have to be cataloged, recharged, and recycled. However, they also made no sense. For example, if ye use them as an assassination technique there be no guarantee that the target would die. Like why try to kill a rich man by putting one in the kitchen - a place he would never go in? Plus to use one like that means that the city might be destroyed. Dumb. - Info-Dumping - I don't mind learning the world structure or rules as the story progresses. I do hate info-dumping. In this story, the plot abruptly stops so that Laura can give lessons to the other apprentice (a former slave) in history, magic use, politics, etc. And it is furtively done while her teacher is out. I didn't find the history or piecemeal magic explanations to be anything but boring and nonsensical. - Plot - There really wasn't a cohesive story line or decent explanations for events. It felt like the author had filler around the couple of scenes she wanted to write. This book felt more like a very rough first draft that needed massive editing and rewrites. This concept should should have the reader on edge instead of trying to make sense of what is happening most of the time. Fun concepts here. I wish this one would have focused on the monster battles and how the monster fighting community works! Unfortunately it must walk the plank! Arrr!