Blue Moon Promise

Blue Moon Promise

by Colleen Coble


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ISBN-13: 9781595549150
Publisher: Nelson, Thomas, Inc.
Publication date: 02/14/2012
Series: Under Texas Stars Series , #1
Pages: 320
Sales rank: 363,970
Product dimensions: 5.50(w) x 8.30(h) x 1.00(d)

About the Author

Colleen Coble is a USA TODAY bestselling author and RITA finalist best known for her coastal romantic suspense novels, including The Inn at Ocean’s Edge, Twilight at Blueberry Barrens, and the Lavender Tides, Sunset Cove, Hope Beach, and Rock Harbor series. Connect with Colleen online at; Instagram: colleencoble; Facebook: colleencoblebooks; Twitter: @colleencoble.

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Under Texas Stars

Thomas Nelson

Copyright © 2012 Colleen Coble
All right reserved.

ISBN: 978-1-59554-915-0

Chapter One

Lucy Marsh pulled her threadbare coat around her neck and hurried down the snow-clogged street. Glancing behind her, she saw only the snow drifting onto run-down houses. The rapid thump of her pulse began to calm, and she managed to breathe through her tight lungs.

Maybe it was her imagination. For the past week she'd caught a glimpse of the same man every evening after work, and until today, she told herself he must live in the same general area. But she'd left early today and he had still been there. This time he seemed to watch her. A black coat covered him and he wore a hat pulled low over his face, so only the twitch of his smooth-shaven chin appeared. When she stopped and stared at him, he darted around the corner of the building.

She took the opportunity and dashed across the street, skirting the horse and carriage blocking her path to the house. The roof leaked and wind blew through the boards and under the windowsills, but it had been home for ten years. Glancing behind her again, she saw no sign of the man so she hurried up the steps.

Pressing her hand to her stomach, she paused and wished she didn't have to go inside. What was she going to do now? Mrs. Hanson had been apologetic about letting her go. It was hard times and not her work that necessitated firing her. But the hard facts didn't feed them. While 1877 had been a bad year so far, Indiana had been particularly hard hit.

But she would find a way. She always managed.

The steps to the porch took careful navigation. They tilted to the front, and it was easy to lose her balance. She paused outside the door. The children would worry, so she tried on a smile. When it stayed in place, she turned the doorknob. Before she could open the door, Amos Cramer's gruff voice stopped her.

"One moment, Miss Marsh," he panted, hurrying up the steps toward her. He was a large, red-faced man with sparse gray hair and a handlebar mustache. He parked himself in front of her door and wheezed, struggling to catch his breath.

She had tried to be kind to their landlord until Mr. Cramer mistook her kindness for romantic interest. Now she just tried to stay out of his way when he came to collect the rent. Her back against the door, Lucy pressed away as far as she could to escape the strong odor of stale perspiration that drifted toward her.

He crowded closer. "I'm afraid I have some bad news for you." His muddy gaze slid avidly over her face and hair.

Lucy pressed tighter against the wall, though it gained her no space between the odious man and herself. What now? She didn't think she could endure more bad news.

"I've decided to sell out and go back to New York. I've had an offer I can't refuse for this place. The new owner plans to tear it down and build a store here." He hesitated and rubbed his lips with a dirty handkerchief. "I'm afraid I must ask you to leave within the next seven days."

Lucy gasped. "A week? How can I find something else in a week?"

Amos shrugged. "I'm sorry, my dear. You might try that boardinghouse over on Canal Street. They might have an opening." He pursed his lips and raked her figure with his gaze before turning and waddling away.

Lucy's throat grew thick. She couldn't cry, not now. Tears would frighten the children. Fingering her locket, she straightened her shoulders and pushed open the door.

Her three-year-old sister launched herself against Lucy's legs. "Lucy, you was late." Eileen stuck out her lower lip. "We has company."

Lucy looked toward the single chair in the tiny parlor. A man with gray hair and penetrating charcoal eyes sat regarding her calmly before he stood. There was something forbidding in his face, and she inhaled. Please, God, have mercy. Her gaze sought and found her brother, Jed. Twelve years old, he'd been a handful all year. His hangdog expression did nothing to calm her fears.


His gaze remained on his worn shoes. "Uh, Lucy, this is—"

"I'll introduce myself," the gentleman interrupted. He stepped toward her and stared into her eyes. "Henry Stanton of Larson, Texas." He shifted his gray Stetson in his hands. "Your father was my boyhood friend. I came as soon as I heard of his death."

Henry Stanton. Lucy struggled to remember if her father had ever mentioned him. She knew her parents had grown up in Texas. Her Uncle Drew was still there. "I'm delighted to meet you, Mr. Stanton. How did you hear of our father's death?"

"His wife wrote me asking for help, so I decided to make a stop here on my way back from Chicago. Is she here?"

Lucy shook her head. "Catherine left right after Father died."

The man frowned. "Left? I don't understand."

She didn't like to speak ill of anyone, but he had to know why Catherine wasn't here. "Her, uh, friend showed up and she left with him."

"She abandoned her children?" His voice rose.

Lucy looked to where Eileen was playing with her doll. The child didn't seem to be paying attention. "I cared for them anyway," she whispered. "Catherine wasn't good with children."

"I see." He pointed his hat at Jed. "Your brother is in a heap of trouble, miss. He lifted my wallet when I talked with him on the porch."

Stealing? She stared at her brother and the guilt washed over his face. "Jed, how could you?" It was too much. She sank onto the edge of the bed and buried her burning eyes in her hands. Her shoulders heaved as she tried to get her emotions under control. The events of the past few weeks had drained her. When she raised her head, she found Henry with a speculative look on his face.

"Please don't distress yourself, Miss Lucy. Young Jed's behavior will be corrected on the ranch."

"On the ranch?"

"Tell me, Miss Marsh, are you a Christian woman?"

Standing again, she straightened her shoulders and exhaled. "Why, yes, sir, I am."

"I thought as much. God has led me here for a purpose." He smiled. "I have a proposition for you."

Her pulse quickened. Perhaps there would be a way out of these dreadful circumstances yet. "What would that be, Mr. Stanton?"

"Have you read in the Bible how Abraham sent a servant out to find a wife for Isaac?"

"Of course." Lucy's heart sank before beginning a rapid beat against her chest. Surely he wasn't offering for her hand. He was old. Older than her father.

"That was my main purpose for this trip, though my son has no idea of my mission. Now that I've met you, I believe you will do nicely. Nate needs a wife like you."

His son. Lucy's limbs went weak. The room spun, and she sat back on the edge of the bed.

"I can see I've shocked you."

Lucy eyed the man. "Is—is your son a Christian?"

Mr. Stanton smiled. "That just confirms the Lord's leading me here. As soon as I clapped eyes on you, something reared up inside me and I knew you were the right one for my Nate. Yes, my boy is a Christian." He put a hand on her shoulder. "I have my son's signature to act as his agent in all business matters for this trip, so if you agree, I will arrange a proxy marriage. Right after the ceremony we'll leave for Texas. A train leaves at one o'clock tomorrow afternoon."

"Why would we not return to your ranch and see if your son and I would suit?"

"You don't know my boy. He is apt to send you packing rather than listen to reason." He shook his head. "No, this is the only way."

It felt wrong to surprise this unknown Nate. Lucy held up her hand. "I'd rather know we suit before I pledge my life to a man. And give him a chance to get to know me as well."

He thrust out his chin. "This is my offer, Miss Lucy. It's the only one I'm making." He nodded at her siblings. "Think of your brother and sister. They will have warm beds and plenty of food to eat. Fresh Texas air and plenty of room to grow up."

Her main consideration was the children. While the thought of marrying someone she didn't know was most unappealing, Lucy had to consider the offer. They were about to be evicted, and she'd lost her job. How could she possibly support the children? "I'd like time to pray about it."

"I would expect nothing less from a good Christian woman. I'll return tomorrow at nine for your answer. If you're accepting my offer, have all your things packed. There will be no time to spare." His walking stick thumped on the floor as he walked to the entry.

When the door closed behind him, Lucy clenched her hands in her lap and turned to her brother. Too angry to speak, she just looked at him.

Jed swallowed hard and took a step back. "It was a dare, Lucy. I didn't mean to do anything wrong. I was just funnin'. I gave it back to him."

"A dare? You risked jail for a dare?" She buried her head in her hands. "Lord, help me," she whispered.

She lifted her head, opened the locket, and stared at the face of the unsmiling young woman. What would her mother have her do? Lucy squared her shoulders. This wasn't beyond her capabilities.

"On your knees, children." She sank to the floor. "We must pray."

LUCY PREPARED THE last of the beef in a thin stew for her brother and sister. She picked at a piece of dry bread and watched them eat. She'd always risen to the challenge, but tonight all she wanted to do was climb onto her cot and pull the covers over her head. The task appeared overwhelming and she was tired, so tired.

There was a rap on the front door, and she rose from the table to answer it. A glimpse through the window to the porch made her stomach plunge. Albert, Catherine's friend, was standing at the door. She wanted to throw the bolt and ignore the summons, but she forced herself to open the door.

His gaze skewered her. "Miss Lucy. You look lovely today."

His smile made her feel unclean. "What do you want?" She peered past his shoulder to the vehicle in the wash of gaslight, but no one was in the buggy that waited in the street.

He tipped his hat up with a finger. "Your mother sent me by for Eileen. If you'll just get her things together, we'll be off."

She blocked his entrance with her body. "I have no way of knowing if what you're saying is true." She couldn't turn her little sister over to this man. "I find it odd that you don't ask for Jed as well."

"I'm sure Catherine will want him eventually too, but right now, she wants Eileen."

Lucy tensed, her fingers on the door. "Then why is she not here herself to claim her daughter?"

His smile twisted to a snarl and he stepped toward the doorway, but Lucy slammed the door before he could block it. She threw the lock. "Go away!"

His shoulder hit the door, and it shuddered. "Open up," he growled.

The wood vibrated against her, and she held her breath. Please let it hold. Eileen had left the table and was hiding her face in Lucy's skirt. Lucy touched the top of her sister's soft hair. Staring at the lock, she prayed again for it to hold. After a moment, the battering against the door stopped. She wanted to peek out the window, but she was afraid the sight of her face would inflame the man even more.

Eileen whimpered. "It's okay," Lucy said in a soft voice. "I won't let him near you."

"He scares me." Eileen trembled against Lucy's skirt.

Lucy didn't dare admit the man terrified her as well. She had to be strong for Eileen and Jed. She glanced across the room and saw Jed with a rolling pin in his hand. "Check the back door," she mouthed.

He hurried to the kitchen. When he returned a few moments later, he gave her a nod. Lucy dared a glimpse through the curtain. Albert paced along the porch. He glanced at the door, then to his buggy before heading down the steps.

"You haven't seen the last of me," Albert shouted over his shoulder.

He lurched into his buggy. The whip came down on the horse's back, and the animal reared, then took off down the street. Albert glared back at the house as the buggy pulled away.

Lucy sagged against the window frame. He'd be back. She had only delayed the fellow. Next time Catherine might come too, and then what could be done? If Lucy refused to let Eileen go, Catherine would likely call the police.

Lucy's arms were leaden as she gathered the sobbing child in her arms and walked back to the table with her. "It's okay, he's gone, darling." All they had was one another.

While Eileen finished her stew, Lucy thought about her options. She made a list of possible places to apply for work, but the likelihood of finding a position was slim. Many were unemployed in Wabash. Even if the town had a poorhouse, that wasn't an option now that a new law forbade children from residing there. Without a job, she would have to turn the children over to their mother or they would all end up on the street. So what was she to do?

Hiding her fear from the children, she took the dirty dishes to the dry sink. Putting water to boil, she stared out the window at the yard. A tire swing hung from the lone tree. This place was the only home Jed and Eileen had ever known, but they were bound to have to leave no matter what happened. If she accepted Mr. Stanton's offer, at least the children would have food to eat and a place to sleep.

The thought of marriage to a man she didn't know was fearful, but she would do anything to keep them all together. It seemed she had no choice.

Chapter Two

Nate should have felt a sense of contentment and peace, but something was off tonight, and he couldn't quite figure out what it was.

Standing in the corral, he went through the list of chores. The shapes of the cattle shifted on the darkening hillsides as they milled about. He'd checked the windmills and they were all pumping water, so the stock was hydrated. The chicken coop was locked up for the night. The horses were stabled and curried. Yet he struggled to relax the tense muscles of his shoulders.

He walked back to the barn and shoved the door along its tracks. The good scent of hay and horse rushed to his face as he stepped inside. He heard a sound behind him and turned, then saw Percy.

"Boss, supper is getting cold," the cook said. "I called you twice."

"I'm coming."

"What's eatin' you? You look like a new calf spooked by a goat."

There. "Did you hear that?"

Percy tipped his head to the side. "Hear what?"

The noise came again. A sliding, shuffling sound. "Someone's in the back stall," Nate whispered.

He pulled his gun and approached the stall. A figure burst from the shadows. The man leaped past Nate and darted out the open barn door. Nate ran after him. He caught a glimpse of the man's shirt as he vaulted around the corner of the barn. As he raced after him, Nate heard a jingle of horse tack. He rounded the barn in time to see the fellow mount his horse and ride off.

"Bring me a horse!" Nate ran toward the barn.

Percy was standing in the doorway, but at Nate's command, he ducked back inside. When Nate reached the barn, Percy was leading Whisper from his stall. Nate quickly saddled his horse and mounted, but by the time he got to where he'd last seen the intruder, there was no sign of the man.

His gut told him the man would head toward the road. Setting off in that direction, he chafed at the slow pace he had to take with the uneven ground. He didn't want to risk Whisper breaking a leg.

An hour later darkness had descended. He sat back in the saddle and looked down the hillside toward the road where the dim light of a lantern glowed by the darker shape of a buggy. The lantern swung in a man's hand as he stepped out to greet the rider who reined in at the sight of him. The light allowed Nate to recognize the man. Drew Larson.

He watched Larson talk to the intruder, and though Nate couldn't make out any words, there was no mistaking Larson's angry tone. Larson climbed into the buggy and took off. The other man followed on horseback. Had Larson hired the guy to poke around in the barn? It seemed likely. Deep in thought, Nate rode back to the Stars Above.

When he arrived at the ranch, he lit a lantern, then went to the stall where the fellow had been hiding. Holding the light aloft, he studied the space. One corner held a small pile of wood. Nate knelt and picked up one of the logs. The odor of kerosene was strong, and it wasn't from the lantern. The wood had been soaked in the stuff. Nate's gut clenched.

Did Larson hate them so much?

NATE RODE TO town and reported what he'd seen to the sheriff, who wrote it down with a bored expression and promised to look into it. Nate didn't believe a word of it. The man was lazy through and through. And a good friend of Larson's to boot.

Still disgruntled, Nate stalked down to the café, skirting the puddles in the stockyard. He paused to scrape the noisome muck from his boots before stepping into Emma's Café at the end of the street. Nate went to the only empty table on the opposite side of the dining room.


Excerpted from BLUE MOON PROMISE by COLLEEN COBLE Copyright © 2012 by Colleen Coble. Excerpted by permission of Thomas Nelson. All rights reserved. No part of this excerpt may be reproduced or reprinted without permission in writing from the publisher.
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misspeggy More than 1 year ago
Normally if Colleen Coble writes it, I purchase it! Once again she has produced a well written story that has just enough twists and turns to make the plot interesting. Full bodied characters and interesting relationships make this story come alive.
MollyzReviewz More than 1 year ago
Colleen Coble has always been a wonderfully talented author with her ability to take romance, Godly messages, and fabulous characters and mix them all with a bit of suspense. Her stories capture the hearts of readers instantly and before you realize, you're at the end of another fabulous novel. Blue Moon Promise is one of those amazingly written novels filled with a powerful plot line and intriguing suspenseful elements. A story filled with hope, honor, trust and second chances, this book takes the reader on a whirlwind of emotions. Lucy Marsh is left to raise her young siblings, Jed and Eileen, after her father was found murdered. Their mother was gone, and their step mother...well let's just say that she didn't stay around long. So, when she's forced to make a decision of an arranged marriage by her father's friend, or risk being evicted from the home she lives in, she sets off to meet her new husband. Nate Stanton is not only shocked to find his father has brought him a wife, but also that she comes as a packaged deal: her siblings. Knowing that he could never love her, he is reluctant to jump into the marriage. But, when trouble arises for Lucy and her siblings, and Nate's father falls ill, he agrees to the marriage. As each new page turn brings another twist here, and events happen through the book that pushes the turns of the story to the center of the readers heart, you'll be swept away on a head-spinning ride, as Lucy and Nate realize that love and faith in God can over come any circumstance, good or bad. I truly enjoyed this historical 5 Book worthy novel from this seasoned author. Ms. Coble always has a way with her writing that touches the readers deep in their soul. I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I can't wait for another book in this series to release. I loved all the characters in this novel and can't wait for the trip back to Texas to visit with my new friends once again! This review originated at Reviews By Molly in part with a blog tour.
Shay14 More than 1 year ago
"A man's heart deviseth his way: but the Lord directeth his steps." Proverbs 16:9 Colleen Coble is a fantastic writer. Her stories have a way of pulling you in. They don't let you go until the very end. This book is no different. While the mystery and romance are not as prominent as some of her stories, the book is still fantastic. Lucy is beautiful, strong-willed, independent, and likes to have everything under control. She is a "control freak" to a fault. When she's left caring for her two younger siblings, she'll do whatever it takes to keep them together. Even if if means marrying a man, sight unseen. Nate does not want a wife. He wants to ranch, grow his cattle business, and be left alone. That is, until Lucy comes to Stars Above Ranch. Everything changes. The story progresses in a way that allows the author time to develop the characters we've met, while still keeping the mystery and intrigue alive.We see their struggle to let go of control and let love in. We see Lucy's strong desire to be loved. We see Nate's denial of his loneliness. We also see them both try to deny, then control the sparks that fly between them. There are still parts of the mystery that come into play. It's never far from either character's mind that trouble is coming. Little things happen that make your skin crawl! It's what Colleen Coble does best. Overall, the story was a satisfying read. The message of the story is summed up in the "Dear Reader" note by Colleen at the beginning of the book. Who has control of your life? Let go, and let God. I absolutely loved it, and look forward to reading the next book in the Under Texas Stars series, Safe in His Arms.
cleffairy More than 1 year ago
Blue Moon Promise by Colleen Coble is a very inspiring read. I couldn't help but admire the heroine's determination and strength in trying to keep her family together. At some point, I would have thought that she will break down and give up, but she did not, and that, is very admirable. I did not like the hero in the beginning, but I wrmed up to him when he finally accepts his responsibiliy instead of finding his way out of it. You see, I like men whoare responsible and is protective of his wife and his family instead of an undependable one. Overall, I enjoyed reading this book, and I would recommend this book to those who enjoys a good, inspiring read. I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars
CaraPutman More than 1 year ago
If you love Colleen Coble's Gilded Age historicals and you enjoy her Lonestar series, then this book is for you. While I enjoy Colleen's contemporary romantic mysteries, I've decided I adore her historicals. There is a certain style that comes through as she writes stories set in times from the past that I love. This book completely fit that convergence. Lucy Marsh has to protect her younger siblings, but after her father is killed, it becomes ever more challenging. Then a man shows up at her door claiming to be a long ago friend of her father's. He suggests she marry his son, so that she and her siblings will have a place to live. That requires a move from Indiana to the unknown in Texas, but when they are attacked that night, she feels she has no choice. Nate isn't expecting a all. The store of their growing relationship is complicated when the trouble follows Lucy from Indiana to the Blue Moon ranch. Lucy was a heroine I could completely relate to because she feels a need to control her environment and doens't know how to let go. But now she finds herself in a setting and place where she has to choose between trying to maintain control or allowing God to take the reins. I can so relate to the struggle to release something to him then turn and take it back. Over and over. But it's when we let Him lead that true freedom and love can bloom. This is a delightful story that I loved from page one. If you are a fan of historical romances with strong mystery threads, this book is for you.
tmurrell2 More than 1 year ago
Lucy is taking care of her half siblings after the death of her father and the desertion of their mother. But she's lost her job, their home and their safety is questionable. So when an offer of marriage, however strange it might seem, comes her way; she accepts. But her husband is less than happy with the arrangement and wants to send her packing. Lucy and her husband Nate have a lot to learn about each other and their families. But with a little patience and trust, the marriage might work. I enjoyed this book. It flowed smoothly and the characters were likeable. Lucy was definitely not perfect, but her flaws were real and I was able to relate with her struggles. I've enjoyed other books by Colleen Coble and will definitely be reading more of her books in the future. I received this book free of charge from Booksneeze in exchange for my honest review.
love2readnovels on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Lucy March is not sure what she's going to do. She's lost her job at the dressmakers and she's being evicted from her home. On top of that she's caring for her younger brother and sister because her their mother (Lucy's step-mother) took off shortly after their father was killed in a buggy accident. Lucy would like to provide a good home for them but she's not sure how she'll do that. The Lord seems to answer her plea by way of Henry Stanton. Henry says he wants to help her but the only way he will is if she agrees to marry his son, Nate, by proxy. After much thought, she reluctantly agrees. Nate is dismayed to find out what his father has done. How could he marry him off without his knowledge and especially to someone who looks so unfit for ranch life. Not only that, but she has younger siblings that are now his responsibility. Slowly but surely though, he begins to see that she's made of tougher stuff then he thought. They are trying to do the right thing but obstacles seem to be popping up everywhere and danger seems to be lurking just around the corner.This is definitely going down as a favorite of mine. There were so many things I loved about this story. It's easy to read but the storyline is so tightly knit. It seems like there was no extra words anywhere. It all meant something. I really like that! The characters are so full of life and interesting to spend time with. I had so much admiration for Lucy. She inspired me with her courage and determination. Nate was such an awesome guy but a little rough around the edges. Nothing Lucy couldn't fix, of course! The kids are absolute gems. The way the story played out was so realistic and true to life. The slow build between Lucy and Nate is absolute torture but keeps you quickly flipping those pages, right to the very end. I couldn't put it down and when I absolutely had to, I found myself anxious to get back to it. It's got mystery, danger, romance and a great spiritual message about letting God take control. I think this is one of Colleen's best work. Blue Moon Promise is one I highly recommend. A thank you goes to Thomas Nelson who provided me with this complimentary copy through Netgalley for my review. Great job, Colleen!!!Paperback: 320 pagesPublisher: Thomas Nelson (February 14, 2012)ISBN-10: 1595549153ISBN-13: 978-1595549150
judyg54 on LibraryThing 7 months ago
This book was a real winner! I liked most everything about it. It had a little suspense and intrigue, (and an ending I wasn't really expecting), and alot of romance just waiting to happen, loveable kids, a tiny little lady who had lots of spunk, and a cowboy who needed a lady's tender touch. Colleen Coble has written an endearing story and as the author said in the beginning of this book, only God knows the best journey for us. We need to let go and trust Him. He is the one who is ultimately in charge, although we all at times try to take charge of things ourselves.Lucy Marsh was one of those ladies who had to take charge she thought. She finds herself taking care of her little brother and sister after her father is killed and her step-mother abandons them. She is now without a job and soon to be kicked out of their home, when a man who knew her father visits them and offers her a home for her family in Texas if she will marry by proxy his son and travel back to Texas with him. Lucy finds herself excepting the offer and taking her family to Texas. Needles to say Nate Stanton is NOT pleased to find his father has brought home a wife for him. He takes one look at the petite young Lucy and knows she could never make it on their cattle ranch and survive. Lucy though is out to prove she can be the wife Nate needs. It is fun and endearing to watch both Lucy and Nate change and to watch them dance around their feelings for each other. I loved Lucy and her determination. They were both honest and outspoken at times and it was always interesting to see the situations Lucy kept finding herself in and Nate having to help her out of them.Lucy was someone we can all relate to. We say we trust God and what he has for us, but then hard times come and we start relying on ourselves instead of God. I liked the advice given to Lucy in the book, "Life happens, Lucy. Good and bad, they come to all of us sooner or later. We can't will away the bad things. They are part of what shapes us into the people we become." Lucy must learn she can't earn love by being what she thinks people want her to be, but people love her for who she really is. Alot of good lessons to learn in a delightfully entertaining way. Looking forward to more stories in this series. I also want to thank Thomas Nelson Publishing for sending me this story to review via NetGalley.Paperback: 320 pagesPublisher: Thomas Nelson (February 14, 2012)ISBN-10: 1595549153ISBN-13: 978-1595549150
RivkaBelle on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Book provided by publisher for review.Review originally published on my blog AWordsWorth.blogspot.comElements of Blue Moon Promise reminded me of the story of Isaac and Rebekah in Genesis (considering that there are multiple references to this story, I think it's fair to say we should make that connection). Lucy's father has died in a tragic accident, and her stepmother opted to leave her two children - Jed and Eileen - with Lucy while she moseyed off with her boyfriend. It's a bleak situation, made worse by the fact that Lucy suddenly finds herself unemployed, evicted, and being followed by a stranger. When one of her father's former friends shows up with a proposition, Lucy decides it's God's answer to her problems, and she agrees to marry his son - Nate - by proxy.Upon arriving at the Stars Above Ranch in Texas, Lucy finds that she has her work cut out for her in terms of earning the respect - let alone love - of her new husband. Nate's first reaction to Lucy is loud and vehement: he's not interested in a wife, and especially not a wife his father picked out for him. And she's so tiny and from the city - how will she ever survive on a cattle ranch? As Lucy begins to work at making Nate's tiny cabin into a home, and they slowly get to know each other, each realizes they were wrong and God knew what He was doing when things fell into place the way they did. Eileen and Jed do a lot to smooth the transition as well, though all is far from perfect - and there are many struggles and obstacles to face. Obstacles like discovering someone has followed them from Indiana to Texas, and lingering uncertainties about their father's death. Every thing that occurs tests Nate and Lucy to their core, and each has to come to terms with their pride and need to control every aspect.I thoroughly enjoyed watching this story play out - I wasn't sure where it was going, and a few of the twists and turns caught me by surprise. There were enough details to flesh out the context without coming across as a super technical read on cattle ranching and frontier life. Lucy was a delightfully flawed heroine, as was Nate - where most Christian fiction characters come across as perfect (and thus my main problem with a lot of Christian fiction), Lucy and Nate are very human. I could relate to them, and their struggles - it was believable and realistic. And a truly beautiful story.
gincam on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Colleen Coble is a gifted storyteller, and I appreciate her wonderful way with words more and more with each book. "Blue Moon Promise" is the first entry in the "Under Texas Stars" series, and it is a great beginning! Two things really stood out about this lovely historical western romance: the remarkable heroine, and the way that the story line got better and better until I hated to see it end. I could have read more about the characters and the events in their lives. Lucy Marsh provides for her younger brother and sister with great care, often enduring hardship herself so that the children will be fed and sheltered. When their father dies under suspicious circumstances and their stepmother runs off with another man, Lucy is determined to keep her siblings Jed and Eileen safe. An unexpected visit from an old family acquaintance brings a surprising solution to the desperate situation of Lucy and the children. Henry Stanton had been contacted by Lucy's stepmother when her father died, and after sizing up Lucy and her predicament, he offers her marriage by proxy to his son, Nate, and a home at the Stanton ranch. A threat involving a business deal of her father's places the family in peril, and Lucy agrees to the strange marriage arrangement. She and the children leave the city life they have always known and head to the Stanton family ranch to face the promise of an unknown and challenging new world. When Nate meets his new wife and family, he is not just surprised, he is furious with his father! Lucy is small and genteel, and appears far too delicate to survive the rigors of ranch life. Nate has been somewhat of a confirmed bachelor, set in his ways, and used to the rough and tumble life of a working ranch. He never imagined that he would suddenly find himself married to a city woman with a ready-made family. However, Lucy is a woman of great fortitude, and she gradually earns Nate's respect and admiration as she adapts and makes the best of her new life. Young Jed shows an aptitude and eagerness as a beginning ranch hand, and little Eileen effortlessly steal Nate's heart. The four of them settle into Nate's rugged cabin on the family land, and Lucy soon has the place feeling just like home with her good cooking and housekeeping skills. As she and Nate form a tentative friendship, there are those around them with their own agenda, and the lies and secrets of others may keep the couple from ever being truly husband and wife. Lucy and Nate must learn to trust each other as they try to uncover the source of the manipulations and mysteries which threaten their budding happiness. Historical western romance with a suspense element makes for a mighty fine read, and I look forward to the next book in the series: "The Red River Bride". Review Copy Gratis Amazon Vine
ReviewsbyMolly on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Colleen Coble has always been a wonderfully talented author with her ability to take romance, Godly messages, and fabulous characters and mix them all with a bit of suspense. Her stories capture the hearts of readers instantly and before you realize, you're at the end of another fabulous novel. Blue Moon Promise is one of those amazingly written novels filled with a powerful plot line and intriguing suspenseful elements. A story filled with hope, honor, trust and second chances, this book takes the reader on a whirlwind of emotions. Lucy Marsh is left to raise her young siblings, Jed and Eileen, after her father was found murdered. Their mother was gone, and their step mother...well let's just say that she didn't stay around long. So, when she's forced to make a decision of an arranged marriage by her father's friend, or risk being evicted from the home she lives in, she sets off to meet her new husband. Nate Stanton is not only shocked to find his father has brought him a wife, but also that she comes as a packaged deal: her siblings. Knowing that he could never love her, he is reluctant to jump into the marriage. But, when trouble arises for Lucy and her siblings, and Nate's father falls ill, he agrees to the marriage. As each new page turn brings another twist here, and events happen through the book that pushes the turns of the story to the center of the readers heart, you'll be swept away on a head-spinning ride, as Lucy and Nate realize that love and faith in God can over come any circumstance, good or bad. I truly enjoyed this historical 5 Book worthy novel from this seasoned author. Ms. Coble always has a way with her writing that touches the readers deep in their soul. I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I can't wait for another book in this series to release. I loved all the characters in this novel and can't wait for the trip back to Texas to visit with my new friends once again! This review originated at Reviews By Molly in part with a blog tour.
BarbsReviews on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Lucy Marsh has had some bad luck with her father passing away, someone stealing some important merchandise from her fathers pawn shop, raising her two young siblings, and now losing her job. She did not know how she was going to take care of the children then that same night she lost her job she learns they are getting evicted from their home as well. A knock comes to the door when she opens it there is a man standing there that can change everything for Lucy and her brother and sister.Henry Stanton was looking at Lucy and explained her step mother wrote to him and asked for help. He offered Lucy a one time deal of marrying his son. She would be a ranchers wife and her siblings would have a new home and no worries. After much thinking over night, Lucy packed up everyone and left with Henry the next day to her new home and new husband Nate Stanton. Nate wasn't too thrilled to see her and at first thought she was his fathers new wife. How will Lucy cope with a husband who doesn't want her or thinks she can't handle farm life.I throughly enjoyed this nice relaxing book. Nate was my favorite character in the book. He was not thrilled to see Lucy, and was determined to be head strong. He has this way about him that makes you want to like him. Not at first mind you. He is almost set in his ways. He and Lucy have a lot in common as her parents were now all gone and she lost her mom at an early age like he did. He is caring and wants to do right.Lucy was the least of my favorites as she was constantly trying to prove herself to everyone not just herself or even Nate. She ended up getting herself into some scrapes instead of what she wanted to do. She was always afraid of Nate not loving her. It got a bit too much at times. Overall the characters and plot were well-played out. The research was great as you felt like you were back in the same era and wanting to be a rancher or could imagine yourself as one. I will re-read this book.
ReviewsFromTheHeart on LibraryThing 7 months ago
To say that Lucy Marsh is having a really bad day would be an understatement. Today she has managed to lose her job through no fault of her own, its simply a sign of the times and those times are looking up for anyone. However she has also just recently lost her father and her mother decided to skip town with her new "friend" and leave her with the job of raising her younger brother Jed, and her younger sister Eileen.Now just arriving home with no hopes for money, she is met at her door by Mr. Cramer, her landlord, who informs her that he is selling the building and it's going to be torn down. She has a week to find suitable housing elsewhere.Now she finds herself at odds with what to do, not only that but a man has been stalking her outside of her work and home lately and she's afraid with no one in the house but her and the children. When she opens the door to greet the children, she finds Henry Stanton of Larson, Texas who tells her that Jed has attempted to steal his wallet. He was waiting to talk to Lucy when she walked in from work.Learning of her father's death and her mother's recent departure with another man, he offers Lucy a proposal that just may save her, but the cost may be more than she can bare. He asks her to marry his son Nate by proxy and in return will provide them with a stable place to stay and food for the children. Is this the answer to her prayer? Shouldn't she at least meet the man to see if they are suitable? Perhaps true love can come once in blue moon!To find out just what happens, you'll have to pick up Colleen Coble's latest novel, Blue Moon Promise. She wrote this novel with a whole lot of herself put into the character of Lucy. Lucy will have to suffer through her own issues with a lack of control until she realizes that only God is ultimately in control. While we may trust God and are content to rest with what He has for us, when hard times come, we try to rely on our own strength to often instead of turning our burdens over to God and leaving them with Him. This is what Lucy will hope to learn in this novel.I received Blue Moon Promise compliments of Litfuse Publicity for my honest review and being a huge fan of Colleen Coble's there hasn't been any book I haven't come to love. This one is no exception. As a reader, you are immediately immersed in poor Lucy's situation and often find yourself wondering just what you would do. A great story with a great reminder of trusting in God and for that reason I think it deserves a 5 out of 5 stars. This is the first book in her Under The Texas Stars series and I will be reading the rest!
BrokenTeepee on LibraryThing 7 months ago
Lucy Marsh finds herself without a job and trying to care for her young brother and sister when providence seems to drop an answer in her lap; marry the son of an old friend of her father's and go back to the town where her mother was born. But is marrying a stranger the right thing to do? When her house is broken into and she no longer feels safe she takes the man, Mr. Stanton up on his offer and she packs up the family's few belongings and heads down to Texas and a new life.Nate Stanton had spent his life trying to please his father and build the family ranch. He hadn't given much thought to a wife but when he did he assumed he would marry the daughter of the rancher next door so the two spreads would combine. When his father comes home with a tiny city girl he doesn't know what his father was thinking. How can this sprite of a girl handle ranch life?Lucy soon proves him wrong with her organizing and cooking skills and he finds himself building a respect for her that soon turns to love. Lucy comes to realize that Nate is a good man and that she could build a life with him. She learns how to be a ranch wife and even comes to enjoy it. But will a secret from her father's past destroy all they have started to build?This was a very charming tale of two strangers coming to love one another. Two differing personalities learning to cope with those differences and learn from them. Lucy was a young lady who always wanted control of a situation and had to learn to give up that need. Sometimes life is not in our control. Nate had to accept that he needed help. The love story is sweet and it comes along slowly and truly. The characters are defined and the conflict well written. I found myself rooting for their romance to survive. Lucy had a loving mother who she couldn't remember but who left her a legacy that would help Nate bury a long standing feud. The two of them found they are much stronger together than apart. What more can you ask for in a romance?
DNunley More than 1 year ago
Loved the story and how well written it is. I recommend to young and old.
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Pika_ More than 1 year ago
Sometimes historical or motivational novels can be terribly rigid and dry. Not this one! This is a very sweet and fast paced novel that I personally enjoyed immensely. It's my first time reading one of Colleen Coble's works and I will certainly be picking up many more in the future if they're as good as this one was. I espechially loved the humor of the spiders and sweetness of how Nate decided to deal with them for his wife's sake. I can't stand those suckers either!!! Where can I get myself a sweet handsome rancher to get rid of those for me? Well, till I find one I'll definitely be keeping this novel on my bookshelf!!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Great read! Loved it!
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Colleen coble at her best again. Goood book
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