Koschei the Deathless is to Russian folklore what giants or wicked witches are to European culture: the villain of countless stories which have been passed on through story and text for generations. Valente's take on the legend brings the action to modern times, spanning many of the great developments of Russian history in the twentieth century.
Deathless, however, is no dry, historical tome: it lights up like fire as the young Marya Morevna transforms from a clever peasant girl to Koschei's beautiful bride, to his eventual undoing. Along the way there are Stalinist house elves, magical quests, secrecy and bureaucracy, and games of lust and power. All told, Deathless is a collision of magical history and actual history, of revolution and mythology, of love and death, that will bring Russian myth to life in a stunning new incarnation.
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About the Author
Catherynne M. Valente's first book, The Orphan's Tales, was released when Cat was twenty-seven. In the Night Garden won the James Tiptree Jr. Award and was nominated for the World Fantasy Award. Her next novel, Palimpsest, was nominated for the Hugo Award and is a Locus Award finalist, and The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making is a New York Times bestseller that earned starred reviews from all three major review outlets. Valente lives on a small island off the coast of Maine with her partner, two dogs, and one cat.
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By Catherynne M. Valente, Liz Gorinsky
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Three Husbands Come to Gorokhovaya Street
In a city by the sea which was once called St. Petersburg, then Petrograd, then Leningrad, then, much later, St. Petersburg again, there stood a long, thin house on a long, thin street. By a long, thin window, a child in a pale blue dress and pale green slippers waited for a bird to marry her.
This would be cause for most girls to be very gently closed up in their rooms until they ceased to think such alarming things, but Marya Morevna had seen all three of her sisters' husbands from her window before they knocked at the great cherrywood door, and thus she was as certain of her own fate as she was certain of the color of the moon.
The first came when Marya was only six, and her sister Olga was tall as she was fair, her golden hair clapped back like a hay-roll in autumn. It was a silvery damp day, and long, thin clouds rolled up onto their roof like neat cigarettes. Marya watched from the upper floor as birds gathered in the oak trees, sniping and snapping at the first and smallest drops of rain, which all winged creatures know are the sweetest, like tiny grapes bursting on the tongue. She laughed to see the rooks skirmish over the rain, and as she did, the flock turned as one to look at her, their eyes like needle points. One of them, a fat black fellow, leaned perilously forward on his green branch and, without taking his gaze from Marya's window, fell hard — thump, bash! — onto the streetside. But the little bird bounced up, and when he righted himself, he was a handsome young man in a handsome black uniform, his buttons flashing like raindrops, his nose large and cruelly curved.
The young man knocked at the great cherrywood door, and Marya Morevna's mother blushed under his gaze.
"I have come for the girl in the window," he said with a clipped, sweet voice. "I am Lieutenant Gratch of the Tsar's Personal Guard. I have many wonderful houses full of seed, many wonderful fields full of grain, and I have more dresses than she could wear, even if she changed her gown at morning, evening, and midnight each day of her life."
"You must mean Olga," said Marya's mother, her hand fluttering to her throat. "She is the oldest and most beautiful of all my daughters."
And so Olga, who had indeed sat at the first-floor window, which faced the garden full of fallen apples and not the street, was brought to the door. She was filled like a wineskin with the rich sight of her handsome young man in his handsome black uniform, and kissed him very chastely on the cheeks. They walked together down Gorokhovaya Street, and he bought for her a golden hat with long black feathers tucked into its brim.
When they returned in the evening, Lieutenant Gratch looked up into the violet sky and sighed. "This is not the girl in the window. But I will love her as though she was, for I see now that that one is not meant for me."
And so Olga went gracefully to the estates of Lieutenant Gratch, and wrote prettily worded letters home to her sisters, in which her verbs built castles and her datives sprung up like well-tended roses.
The second husband came when Marya was nine, and her sister Tatiana was sly and ruddy as a fox, her sharp grey eyes clapping upon every fascinating thing. Marya Morevna sat at her window embroidering the hem of a christening dress for Olga's second son. It was spring, and the morning rain had left their long, thin street slick and sparkling, jeweled with wet pink petals. Marya watched from the upper floor as once more the birds gathered in the great oak tree, sniping and snapping for the soaked and wrinkled cherry blossoms, which every winged creature knows are the most savory of all blossoms, like spice cakes melting on the tongue. She laughed to see the plovers scuffle over the flowers, and as she did, the flock turned as one to look at her, their eyes like knifepoints. One of them, a little brown fellow, leaned perilously forward on his green branch and, without taking his gaze from Marya's window, fell hard — thump, bash! — onto the streetside. But the little bird bounced up, and when he righted himself, he was a handsome young man in a handsome brown uniform with a long white sash, his buttons flashing like sunshine, his mouth round and kind.
The young man knocked at the great cherrywood door, and Marya Morevna's mother smiled under his gaze.
"I am Lieutenant Zuyok of the White Guard," he said, for the face of the world had changed. "I have come for the girl in the window. I have many wonderful houses full of fruits, many wonderful fields full of worms, and I have more jewels than she could wear, even if she changed her rings at morning, evening, and midnight each day of her life."
"You must mean Tatiana," said Marya's mother, pressing her hand to her breast. "She is the second oldest and second most beautiful of my daughters."
And so Tatiana, who had indeed sat at the first-floor window, which faced the garden full of apple blossoms and not the street, came to the door. She was filled like a silk balloon with the flaming sight of her handsome young man in his handsome brown uniform, and kissed him, not very chastely at all, on the mouth. They walked together through Gorokhovaya Street, and he bought for her a white hat with long chestnut-colored feathers tucked into its brim.
When they returned in the evening, Lieutenant Zuyok looked up into the turquoise sky and sighed. "This is not the girl in the window. But I will love her as though she was, for I see now that one is not meant for me."
And so Tatiana went happily to the estates of Lieutenant Zuyok, and wrote sophisticated letters home to her sisters, in which her verbs danced in square patterns and her datives were laid out like tables set for feasting.
The third husband came when Marya was twelve, and her sister Anna was slim and gentle as a fawn, her blush quicker than shadows passing. Marya Morevna sat at her window embroidering the collar of a party dress for Tatiana's first daughter. It was winter, and the snow on Gorokhovaya Street piled high and mounded, like long frozen barrows. Marya watched from the upper floor as once again the birds gathered in the great oak tree, sniping and snapping for the last autumn nuts, stolen from squirrels and hidden in bark-cracks, which every winged creature knows are the most bitter of all nuts, like old sorrows sitting heavy on the tongue. She laughed to see the shrikes scuffle over the acorns, and as she did, the flock turned as one to look at her, their eyes like bayonet points. One of them, a stately grey fellow with a red stripe at his cheek, leaned perilously forward on his green branch and, without taking his gaze from Marya's window, fell hard — thump, bash! — onto the streetside. But the little bird bounced up, and when he righted himself, he was a handsome young man in a handsome grey uniform with a long red sash, his buttons flashing like streetlamps, his eyes narrow with a wicked cleverness.
The young man knocked at the great cherrywood door, and Marya Morevna's mother frowned under his gaze.
"I am Lieutenant Zhulan of the Red Army," he said, for the face of the world had begun to struggle with itself, unable to decide on its features. "I have come for the girl in the window. I have many wonderful houses which I share equally among my fellows, many wonderful rivers full of fish which are shared equally among all those with nets, and I have more virtuous books than she could read, even if she read a different one at morning, evening, and midnight each day of her life."
"You must mean Anna," said Marya's mother, her hand firmly at her hip. "She is the third oldest and third most beautiful of my daughters."
And so Anna, who had indeed sat at the first-floor window, which faced the garden full of bare branches and not the street, was brought to the door. She was filled like a pail of water with the sweet sight of her handsome young man in his handsome grey uniform, and with a terrible shyness allowed him to kiss only her hand. They walked together through the newly named Kommissarskaya Street, and he bought for her a plain grey cap with a red star on the brim.
When they returned in the evening, Lieutenant Zhulan looked up into the black sky and sighed. "This is not the girl in the window. But I will love her as though she was, for I see now that that one is not meant for me."
And so Anna went dutifully to the estates of Lieutenant Zhulan, and wrote properly worded letters home to her sisters, in which her verbs were distributed fairly among the nouns, and her datives asked for no more than they required.CHAPTER 2
The Red Scarf
In that city by the sea which was now firmly called Petrograd and did not even remember, under pain of punishment, having been called St. Petersburg, in that long, thin house on that long, thin street, Marya Morevna sat by her window, knitting a little coat for Anna's first son. She was fifteen years, fifteen days, and fifteen hours of age, the fourth oldest and fourth prettiest. She waited calmly for the birds to gather in the summer trees, waited for them to do battle over thick crimson cherries, and for one of them to lean perilously forward on his branch, so very far forward — but no bird came, and she began to worry for herself.
She let her long black hair hang unbraided. She walked barefoot over the floorboards of the house on Gorokhovaya Street to preserve her only shoes for the long walk to school — and Marya, like a child whose widowed mother has married again, could never remember to call the long, thin street by its new name, having known it as Gorokhovaya for all her youth. There were other families in the house now, of course, for no fine roof such as this should be kept to one selfish patronym.
It was obscene to do so, Marya's father agreed.
It is surely better this way, Marya's mother said, nodding.
Twelve mothers and twelve fathers were stacked into the long, thin house, each with four children, drawing the old cobalt-and-silver curtains down the center of rooms to make labyrinths of twelve dining rooms, twelve sitting rooms, twelve bedrooms. It could be said, and was, that Marya Morevna had twelve mothers and twelve fathers, and so did all the children of that long, thin house. But all of Marya's mothers laughed at her aimless manner. All her fathers looked troubled at her wild, loose hair. All their children stole her biscuits from the communal table. They did not like her, and she did not like them. They were in her house, in her things, and though it was surely virtuous to share, her stomach had not marched in any demonstration, and did not understand its patriotic duty. And if they thought her aimless, if they thought her a bit mad, let them. It meant they left her alone. Marya was not aimless, anyway. She was thinking.
It takes a very long time to think through something as peculiar as the birds. One cannot simply leave it to the usual bash and bustle of memory and its underhanded tactics. And so, as it became clear that no shrike would come and take her away from her overcrowded house, the incessant noise of all those Blodnieks cooking or Dyachenkos fixing up the staircase; away from her hair growing thinner and more brittle as the communal table had to stretch further and further, from Comrade Piakovsky's sweaty staring in her direction; Marya's mind marshaled itself to the task of sorting out the whole business. No matter what she appeared to do — sweeping out the leaves or studying her history or helping one of her mothers sew a shirt — her heart raced with problem of the birds, trying to outrun it into someplace where everything could make sense again.
Marya pinned out her childhood like a butterfly. She considered it the way a mathematician considers an equation. Given: The world is ordered in such a way that birds may be expected to turn into husbands at a moment's notice and no one may comment upon it all. What conclusions can be drawn? That everyone already knows this, and it is only unusual to me. Or else only I saw it happen, and no one else knows that the world is like that. Since neither her mother nor her father nor Svetlana Tikhonovna nor Yelena Grigorievna had ever made reference to their husbands having been birds, Marya rejected the first conclusion. However, the second conclusion led only to more delicate and upsetting hypotheses.
First resolution: Perhaps one was not meant to see what a husband looked like before he made himself more or less presentable. Perhaps the republic of husbands was a strange and frightening place full of not only birds, but bats too, and lizards, and bears, and worms, and other beasts waiting to fall out of a tree and into a wedding ring. Perhaps Marya had broken a rule of some sort, and visited that country without papers. Were all husbands like that? Marya shuddered. Was her father like that? Was Comrade Piakovsky like that, following her with his wolfish eyes? What of wives, then? Would she turn into something else when she married, the way a bird could turn into a handsome young man?
Second resolution: Rules or no rules, it was certainly better to see these things than not to see them. Marya felt that she had a secret, a very good secret, and that if she took care of it, the secret would take care of her. She had seen the world naked, caught out. Her sisters had been rescued from the city as beautiful girls are often rescued from unpleasant things, but they did not know what their husbands really were. They were missing vital information. Marya saw right away that this made a tilted kind of marriage, and she wanted no part of that. I will never be without information, she determined. I will do better than my sisters. If a bird or any other beast comes out of that uncanny republic where husbands are grown, I will see him with his skin off before I agree to fall in love. For this was how Marya Morevna surmised that love was shaped: an agreement, a treaty between two nations that one could either sign or not as they pleased.
When Marya saw something extraordinary again, she would be ready. She would be clever. She would not let it rule her or trick her. She would do the tricking, if tricking was called for.
But for a long while she did not see anything but the winter coming on and folk squabbling over bread, and her own arms growing so skinny. Marya tried not to come to the third resolution, but it hung there in her heart until she could not ignore it. Birds did not come for her because she was not as good as her sisters. Fourth prettiest, too lost in her own thoughts to steal back bread from the horrible little twins with their matching, cruel laughters. They did not come for her because she had seen them without their costumes on. Perhaps marriage was meant to be tilted, and she was spoiled for everything now, all because she had spied where she ought not to have. Still, she was not sorry. If the world is divided into seeing and not seeing, Marya thought, I shall always choose to see.
But thoughts are not food. Alone and birdless, Marya Morevna wept for her sisters who had gone, for her empty stomach, for the overfull house, which she could hear groaning at night like a woman laboring to bring twelve children into the world all at once.
* * *
Only once did Marya Morevna try to share her secret. If it was wrong to hoard a house, surely it was wrong to hoard knowledge. She was younger then, only thirteen, past the plovers and the shrikes. It was at thirteen years old that Marya Morevna learned how to keep a secret, and that secrets are jealous things, permitting no fraternization.
In those days, Marya Morevna walked to school with her red scarf tied around her neck, like all the other children. She loved her scarf — in the midst of the dreary house, turning grey with so many people scrubbing their laundry in it and sweating in it and boiling potatoes in it, her scarf was bright and gorgeous — and it meant that she belonged. It marked her as part of the young workers' committee, one of the loyal, one of the true. It meant she was one of the good children at school, the children of the revolution, handing out pamphlets or flowers with her classmates on street corners, adults smiling at her scarf, at her goodness.
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Table of Contents
Part 1: A Long, Thin House,
1. Three Husbands Come to Gorokhovaya Street,
2. The Red Scarf,
3. The House Committee,
4. Likho Never Sleeps,
5. Who Is to Rule,
6. The Seduction of Marya Morevna,
Part 2: Sleep with Fists Closed and Shoot Straight,
7. The Country of Life,
8. Sleep by Me,
9. A Girl Not Named Yelena,
10. The Raskovnik,
11. White Gold, Black Gold,
12. Red Compels,
13. The Tsar of Life and the Tsar of Death,
Part 3: Ivanushka,
14. All These Dead,
16. The Constant Sorrow of the Dead,
17. A Pain Where My Death Once Lay,
18. What We Carry Between Us,
19. Three Sisters,
Part 4: There Are No Firebirds in Leningrad,
20. Two Husbands Come to Dzerzhinskaya Street,
21. This House Has No Basement,
22. Each of Them Uncatchable,
23. A War Story Is a Black Space,
Part 5: Birds of Joy and Sorrow,
24. Nine Shades of Gold,
25. Gross Desertion,
26. What Will We Call Her?,
27. The Sound of Remembering,
28. I Saw a Rook in the Ruins,
Part 6: Someone Ought to Be,
29. Every One Written on Your Belly,
30. The Country of Death,
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Most Helpful Customer Reviews
The city has changed names several times over the past century, but currently is called St. Petersburg as everything goes full circle. On Gorokhovaya Street, Marya Morevna was six years old when she saw the bird turn into Lieutenant Gratch of the Tsar's Personal Guard who came to take away her older sister Olga with him. Three years later Lieutenant Zuyok of the White Guard also changed as he came for Tatiana. Finally when Marya was twelve Lieutenant Shulan of the Red Army arrived for the third daughter Anna. Watching the birds change to men come for her older sisters leaves Marya musing over the type of bird her mate will be. Koschei the Deathless Tsar of Life arrives for his woman, Marya. However, she must prove herself worthy as Koschei's mate. In that regard Baba Yaga tasks Marya with three impossible assignments; failure to compete all three proves she is not the mate of the Deathless Tsar of Life. Marya begins her Herculean tasks, Marya starts to lose her humanity until she meets the innocent Ivan "The Fool" Nikolayevich, who pulls her back to Mother Russia; leaving her confused with one foot in Koschei's realm and one in the land of her ancestors. This is a terrific complicated retelling of a Russian folktale that uses The Revolution era as a backdrop to the saga; in fact Marya becomes a Major-General in the Red Army. Fast-paced with a strong protagonist who keeps the engaging story line focused; readers will appreciate this intriguing look at Bolshevik Russia through a fantasy lens. Harriet Klausner
Gorgeous and surreal.
"I am not Koschei the Deathless anymore. After love, no one is what they were before." --- Wow. I'm sitting here trying to find the words to describe this book, to describe this freaking feeling in my chest. I had never heard the story of Marya Morevna and Koschei the Deathless before - which I believe made it a much more richer reading experience. But boy, did it make my heart easier to break! The prose in this book is BEAUTIFUL -- it is so poetic, and so funny, and so, so clever. I fell in love with EVERY dang character in this book, even the ones that were terrible. Especially the ones that were terrible. I related to Marya completely. [SPOILER:] I felt her conflict between Ivan and Koschei, even when I COULDN'T STAND Ivan and loved Koschei. The writing was good enough to do that. I loved seeing Marya's transition from girl to woman, from innocence to corruption. I never stopped caring or being invested in her during that entire time, which takes a GOOD author. Because there was enough in this book to make me scream and throw it if it hadn't been written well. This book broke my heart, and pieced it back together. The character you thought you loved pisses you off, and then redeems themselves. That is the constant pattern in this absolutely enchanting, brilliant work of literature. I mean, the character development! [SPOILER:] How Koschei begins one way and ends a totally other. A completely surrendering of self and heart. Oh, it was beautiful. I admit, I thought it was going to end terribly. But it didn't. It ended with metaphors hanging in the air like the smell of woodsmoke. "Love" is a synonym with "war" in this book -- and the parallels are freaking amazing. The last few pages had me cracking up [SPOILER:] I mean, BABA YAGA. I LOVE YOU. YOU MADE THIS BOOK SHINE EVEN BRIGHTER THAN IT WOULD HAVE ON ITS OWN. Ugh. She was probably my favorite character, after Zvonok, whom I also loved. I mean, both of them were SO well-written. And so so funny. Of course, Koschei will always be my favorite. This is one of the very, very rare books that will stay in my heart forever. I learned so much from it. Experienced so much, felt so much. Catherynne M. Valente, you are officially one of my favorite authors. I'll definitely be reading a good chunk more of her books this week. And hope, that in the meantime, I can shake this feeling of being bereft from my chest. A sort of hole that is filled and emptied at the same time. This book was amazing.
I think of this often; it haunts my brain. A fairy tale of fire burning inside ice. Devastatingly beautiful, both stark and rich. Definitely a must for any Valente fan. This is surely one of her best.
¿You humans, you know, whoever built you sewed irony into your sinews." -DeathlessThis book has the strangest power to pull you in completely and compel you to read on no matter how frustrated, angry, or sad you get. I like what a previous reviewer said about it being "terrible" because it does have this awesome power over the reader, it makes me think of a terrible wicked witch-laced with beauty and evil- or even Baba Yaga- with all of her commanding presence despite her lack of beauty-.The most terrible, amazing thing about this book is the utter confusion Valente throws at us. She blends every line that we may have thought well defined, into a rather dark and depressing mixture. Life and death, domination and love, humans and devils, happiness and despair, all flow together to create an ambivalence that is truly terrible. I can't believe how I could possibly feel pity for some of these characters, yet after all of their evilness I still do. Despite my ranting and raving I have to admit that I didn't actually like the writing very much, especially toward the beginning when it was slow and really seemed forced. However, other chapters where so elegantly written that I had trouble returning to my own world after turning the page- again the ambivalence rears its head.So I don't know what I'm trying to say about this book... It was great and terrible and sad and beautiful and so damn strange that I can't really explain.
Young Marya Morevna has watched her sisters married off, each to a man from a different strata of Russian life. Awaiting her own husband, she is surprised when Koschei the Deathless, the mythical Tsar of Life, shows up at her door to take her away to his lands as his bride, asserting his power over her at every step. At first repelled by the land of Koschei, in which everything is alive and fountains spout blood rather than water, she soon finds herself at home as its mistress. But in her need to prove herself to Koschei¿s frightening sister, Baba Yaga, Marya inadvertantly overturns the balance between Koschei and his brother the Tsar of Death and must spend many years leading Koschei¿s troops in the never-ending war between the two. When, finally sick of spirit, she allows herself to be seduced away from Koschei by a seemingly uncomplicated human man, Ivan, and returns to the human world, her problems are far from over. For she has returned to the city of her birth, now renamed Leningrad, in the midst of the worst of the famine and horror of Siege of Leningrad. She must struggle for her own life, the life of Ivan, and the lives of her friends. And when Koschei comes for her once more, the power balance between the two shifts alarmingly as Marya asserts her own control over her immortal lover and husband.Author Valente seamlessly and fascinatingly blends 20th century Russian history with Russian folklore in her most recent novel. The details of the Siege of Leningrad are painstakingly researched and painfully depicted, as is the history of political turmoil which turned St. Petersburg into Stalingrad into Leningrad, dragging its citizens unwillingly along. Those unfamiliar with the rich tradition of Russian folklore will find much of interest here as well.
Deathless is a complex book that begins by taking apart a fairy tale and puts it together again in a variety of ways. Marya sees her sisters' husbands as birds and that allows her to view the magic of the world. When Russia changes around her, she searches more and more for the magic until it finds her again and the world shifts. Her story is full of blood and pain and love as all the older fairy tales are but shown through a new glass of twentieth-century history. Reading this book asks a lot of a reader as nothing is easy and pain and love can go hand in hand, but it is worth taking the time to explore and understand.
Set against the backdrop of the Russian Revolution, Deathless is the tale of one Marya Morevna. Before the Revolution, her family was quite wealthy and she lived with three sisters. In her childhood, Marya would sit at a front window, see birds change into men and leave with her sisters one by one until she remains. By the time she is of marriagable age, 11 other families are living in her large house and Marya wonders when she'll have a bird husband coming to claim her.Things are never so easy though.Marya falls down the proverbial rabbit hole when she comes across a house wight/brownie, shrunk down to the size of her new friend, and discovers just how magical the world could be.Not long after a husband comes calling for her. Koschei. Koschei is far from an ordinary man. He is Koschei the Deathless, god or devil, who knows. He whisks Marya away to his world as Russia slowly sinks further into communism and hardship. Her life takes twists and turns, especially when Baba Yaga comes to visit and reveals more to Koschei than she ever wanted to know. Witches, magic, sex, firebirds, factories full of girls, a young man after Marya's heart, the fairy tale never ends. Neither does the reality of life, death, and war, and even this magical world is not untouched by the changes happening in Russia.Valente weaves a lush tale in this book and like a real fairy tale, it's not all happily ever after. If you want that and a clear line between good and bad, seek out some Disney. This is not a story for kids.
I enjoyed this book, especially once I got into the flow of it. It is written poetically with a lot of the rhythms of a Russian fairy tale telling. I would definitely recommend it to a russophile, especially those familiar with 19th and 20th century Russian history and culture, including themes of east vs. west, and magic vs. realism. I was often reminded (especially in the first half) of Master and Margarita. Familiarity with the Russian language will also help you with the characters and the settings.
This book is simply amazing. The first thing that struck me was the prose itself. It is measured, rhythmic, and beautiful. At the same time it feels intimate. I can imagine an old grandmother (babushka?) sitting in her rocker, surrounded by a semicircle of boys and girls on the cusp of adulthood, telling this story. The not-voice of the narrator rose and fell in my mind. Some parts were like whispers, others like shouts. The story itself is similarly engaging. Valente intertwines the backdrop of the Russian Revolution and Civil War neatly with a fantasy story woven out of Slavic folklore. Those tales have never been a big part of my study, so I knew just enough to see one or two things coming. Nevertheless, I never felt lost. The author supplies plenty of background to keep regular readers engaged. Throughout, the story maintains the feel of an elegant fairy tale. Strange events and facts lack objective explanation - it's just the way things are. Themes and phrases occur over and over, tying the narrative back to its roots. The themes of the story are complex, but don't bog it down. It's a war story, a coming of age story, a story of sex and power, and a story of magic. It's a story about the old world in conflict with the new, and a story about families. Comrade Valente keeps them all in the air at once, rather than putting them end to end which would have given us a long, slow, bloated epic of a thing. There are a few troubles with the book, despite the high rating I've given it. The normal Russians are written (and referred to by the monsters) with the jaded eye of someone who has seen how the story ends. Since there are so few such characters, in the end it makes little difference. There are a few editorial goofs as well: In one passage about a shrike (or was it the plover?) one sentence refers to him as a rook; At one point the main characters husband is referred to by another name. These issues were minor in my mind, and didn't really detract from my enjoyment.
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I tried, but could not finish the book. Not a good book. It drags...