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Anonymous
Posted September 17, 2011
I deleted the book after reading only 3 pages. The writing was mostly pornographic - something which I do not associate myself with. I do not want it my library, and I would not subject it to my friends. I was hoping that the loneliness of the main character was the main focus. However, I was sadly mistaken as each page became more and more graphic sexually. If this is the type of book you are waiting to read, it's all for you. No story line what so ever! Hope I remember this author so I do not purchase any more books by this author. Zero stars! I wouldn't recommend this book for any type of discussion.
5 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 21, 2011
I give this book 2 stars, only because I can see that the author attempted to create a story here. It feel short though. Nearly 25% of the book is the elevator scene, which isn't really needed at all. Here are the things that I had problems with. 1) The female character is attracted to the assailant in the elevator at first - he wears her favorite cologne and she knows his voice from somewhere (although the author never reveals where). 2) Her rescuer is kind of a wimp. I get that he's the kind of person she never paid attention to and all that, but security guards (and doctors) are usually more assertive. 3) What was the point of the chocolate male organ? 4) When she and the security guard return to her apartment and tells the doorman they'll be ordering Chinese and to go ahead and let the delivery person up without calling, it's an obvious set-up for the assailant to show up as a delivery person. What doesn't make sense at all is how the assailant is smart enough to know she's at home and is planning to order Chinese, but is dumb enough that he doesn't know she has the security guard with her. 5) The security guard tells her to let the assailant into her home. What? No calling the police and having the doorman lock the doors so he can't get away? The book could have started in the beginning without the elevator scene, using the security guards perspective and a bit more time could then have been spent on developing the characters and their relationship instead of wasting the reader's time.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 7, 2011
A special book. In the begining i thought what sick person wrote this, but if you finish the book, it turns out to be a pretty good book. Id recomend it to the older crowed because of the sexual content, and some foul language. But definitly would recomend it, depending on the type of books u read.
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 20, 2012
This is okay as a short story. It could easily have been lengthened into a full lenth novel. Definitely good that it was free. The main character is assaulted in the elevator after work, and she is rescued by a hot security guard. She takes him home, they begin a romance that the story barely brushes upon. I felt gyped at the end.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 29, 2012
Just from reading like 2 reviews both said that this book stunk like a skunk. I wouldnt get it. Why would you??? U would be dumb to. Even i want to give it 0 stars.
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Posted May 2, 2011
i wish i would have passed on this one
1 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 17, 2011
sorry it was over so soon. i would love to read more about these characters.
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Posted May 25, 2012
Delightful reading for a quiet day at the pool!
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Posted April 14, 2012
Its ok . Talks about not being selfcentered. Could have been a little bit longer.
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Posted April 4, 2012
THIS WAS A GOOD BOOK IT WAS A GREAT READ. I WOULD READ MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR.KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP
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Posted March 26, 2012
I enjoyed this book and wish it had been longer. Will look for other books by this author.
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Posted March 19, 2012
This book is like so cool.............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted February 11, 2012
Ok good characters. ~ Tibby
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Posted January 28, 2012
Though it was predicable, i liked it very much.
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Posted January 22, 2012
It was a good short stoey. I wish it would have been longer but a great quick read.
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Posted January 17, 2012
What kind of women would cave in to being assaulted by a strange in an elevator? Don't bother reading this.
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Posted December 30, 2011
How u delete books?..
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Posted December 4, 2011
By the end I was wanting to read more. Well written in my option.
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Posted September 16, 2011
It was good. Then it seemed like the author met her page quota and stopped. I have lots of questions.
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Posted September 10, 2011
Short
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{Edited to address a reviewer concern: The 'strange encounter' in the elevator is an assault attempt--nothing too graphic or violent. As this is a very personal topic for some, it has now been duly noted. But I also wished to clear up the implication that attempted assault is glorified with 'romance'. The ensuing romance DOES NOT have ANYTHING to do with the wannabe assailant.}