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Anonymous
Posted January 2, 2012
There is two books that follow this one.the second is called stolen,it is also free.the third one is called unbroken,it too is free.the only downside is that unbrokem hasnt come out just yet.u can figure out when it does come out by going to the authors webpage it has been posted when it will be released.
30 out of 42 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 23, 2011
It was okay. There were a lot of typos, but a quick story and it was pretty interesting. Just so you know, there is a sex scene! BLEH!
18 out of 22 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 30, 2012
What the heck? It started out great and then just like that it end? Im not being a critique or anything, i mean the plot was awesome and everything but how the heck do you get off with an ending like that. I half expected the author to said that it would continue in another book. It was like the book was cut off in the middle of a paragraph. How dissapointing :(
12 out of 19 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 28, 2011
I LOVED IT!!!!!
10 out of 19 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 9, 2012
Explicit sex!! Just so you know if you are younger. :-)
9 out of 11 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 2, 2012
I loved this book. Cant wait to read the next one. I guess people didnt notice that it said book one on the cover.. duh...
7 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 18, 2011
the story started off a little slow, but by the middle i couldn't stop reading. I have to work people. I love my nook and i love the great stories and characters that you have introduced me to.Thank You
6 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 30, 2011
I couldn't get past page 25. The writing style was amatuerish and the grammar was terrible. I usually will read almost anything but this was BAD!
4 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 7, 2012
Started out ok . The ending was bad.
3 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 22, 2012
This book was absolutely frightening! The punctuation errors sent chills down my spine. (Overuse and misuse of colons and semi-colons, incorrectly written dialogue.) Grammar errors made my hair stand on end. ("Even worst," "more creepier," verb tense.) The capital errors had me shivering. ("Hello, Mr. Sexy Vampire". Said Ally.) And the fact that there was absolutely no ending to this story made me much too horrified to ever read another "novel" by this author. I'm too afraid!
At first, I assumed this was written by a middle school or early high school student, and I was going to give it a "valiant effort," but the "sex scene" made me sincerely hope that it was not written by a child. In that case I recommend that this "author" takes some writing classes, reads "Eats Shoots and Leaves" for some punctuation help, and seeks the assistance of an editor before "publishing" again.
P.S. The punctuation error in my "capital" comment was intended. The quotation marks around the title of a book were only there because I don't know how to italicize on a Nook.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 6, 2012
The story was good. I love the cliffhanger at the end and will definitely read the next in the series. My only problem with it was that the verb tense was scattered. Sometimes it was present, sometimes past. Also it seemed as if there were words missing in some sentences. If someone is needed to proofread stories, I know of a pretty good one.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 2, 2012
Talented author. Good read.
2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 30, 2012
Great story
2 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 29, 2012
Story started off slow.. got interesting but the ending killed the story.. should of ended differently :/
-Xochitl
2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 26, 2012
This book was amazing just couldn't put it down. Loved every minute of it was sad when the book was over. I have read the rest of her books too and they are amazing too. I can't wait until she comes out with another book. A must read. Great author.
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 13, 2012
what happens, guess i'll read stolen now
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 26, 2011
Kept my interest till the end. I wanted to know what happens next!
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 18, 2012
Wasn't the best read I've ever encountered. Good story line and ideas but has terrible sentence structure, grammar, etc. Because of that its hard to concentrate on the story. Only thing going for it right now is that it is free...
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 13, 2012
Story didn't end, it just stopped. Badly written!
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 11, 2012
This book was totes not right, I mean really leave it there, not cool. XD
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Overview
When Ally becomes a newly single woman, she is determined to meet the man of her dreams. Never truly expecting it to actually occur, she is amaze to find herself drawn to a dark, mysterious stranger leaning against the bar. He was utterly irresistible.Despite her friends’ protests, she willingly follows him outside the bar and soon realizes that her world will never be the same again.
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"Bitten" is book one of the "Bitten" mini-series. Book two, Stolen, is now available at Smashwords and other distributors. ...