Black Moon (Moon Trilogy Part I) [NOOK Book]

amateur effort

It's an intriguing idea, to be sure. Werewolves, werecats, and a magical book. However, there are grammatical and spelling errors, along with obscure multi-syllabic words scattered in for good measure. The development is too rushed, with the most time spent on sex. This is not sci-fi; it's a porn novella. I recommend Nicky Charles' werewolves series: The Mating, The Keeping, and The Finding.

50 out of 52 people found this review helpful.

Okay..for a copy!

Plot and characters are all if the almost exact same story line and characters were not already in L.J. Smith's Night World series. Geez I mean they were like the same but the Night World is more intense, has a better plot, more developed characters, and flowed way better. I recommend L.J. Smith's Night World series or Nicky Charles The Mating.

8 out of 10 people found this review helpful.

Good short Story

I thought this was a very good short read. I am an avid reader and read very fast, so for me it was a quick read. The story line was very good as is the whole series. But I wish that each one was longer. Black Moon, Silver Moon, and Amber Moon are good stories that I would have loved to see much more of.

7 out of 11 people found this review helpful.

Very well done.

This book is not what I expected. I thought it was going to be a little hokey, like Twilight. It was the exact opposite. I LOVED it!!!. The story line is wonderful. The description is perfect. Not to long to lose the reader, but long enough to set the perfect stage. I can't wait to see what happens next. My only complaint is that ended to soon.

5 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

5/5 stars

Nice book with well dveloped plot and characters. Theres some sex, though, but I could take it. Im 11!

4 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

Whitney Brindley

Story was rushed, characters were undeveloped. I can look over the grammer issues. It seems as though the author was distracted and just wanted to write any old crap down. (Hey Chhavy! Tee hee)

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Recommend

Loved all three books. Would recommend to others. Some sex is involved so discrestion is advised.

2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Wtf

WHAT THE HECK THE MAIN CHARACTERS HAVE SEX AND THEY'RE PRACTICALLY STRANGERS THE WERECAT SAVES A LIBRARIAN WHO HE DOESN'T KNOW AND TURNS HER INTO ONE OF HIM AND THEN THEY START TOUCHING EACHOTHER'S PARTS AND THEN THEY HAVE SEX! But the book is good, and there's more to it than that. Really short.

2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Good read but...

Well, i thought it was pretty good. There are some grammar and what not occationally. Its a great read, but was kinda awkward. I didnt like the sex part cuz it was awkward n im 13 so i skipped it. n it had mainly romance but good action. Its mainly around the couple. For me it had too much romance. I still liked it tthough. I may not reead the nextt one cuz it wwas all romance plus they did it n they hardly knew eachother. Like who does that?

Anywho the book was rushed n was too centered round tthem the whole time. From the beginnin to end they were together n loved eachother

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Black Moon

This is a 90 page book which is part of a trilogy. Its a quick and interesting read. I can't wait to see where the other books take me.

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Amazing

I loved this book! Yes, it was short, but the length of a book doesnt define the book. It was a bit weird though how they were makeing out for what, 20 pages. I thought it made it akward. Mabey thats because im 14 though. I dont know why, but i always read books writen for adults. They sound better. Anyways, this was still a good book, and i cant wait to read the next one. Besides, its free. YAY FREE STUFF!!!!!

1 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Ehh it was ok

Very short, not much story. Romance felt rushed. Wanted more of the mythology and war of the weres. Still want to read the next one and hope it's more fleshed out

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Short

It felt rushed through the whole story, but it was good.

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

If you like this genre, you'll most likely enjoy this series.

I enjoyed it so much that I immediately bought the rest of the series when I finished Part 1 and kept on reading until I finished.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Very Male, Hard to get through.

The excessive detail was irritating, as well as the very male descriptions of breasts.

It was hard to take this novel seriously.

The only reason I gave it two stars was simply because I couldn't bring myself to read far enough into the novel to give it a justified rating. This alone, speaks volumes.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Its ook

The story is rushed and therefor a little weird to read and awkward. Would have more potential if it was more developed

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

black moon

The story itself is good but very short in my opinion. Wish there was chapters for this book but i really like the story.

It was ok

It was way to short and nobody has sex right after they meet someone come on do better.

Boring

You get what you pay for.

Good read

Good read